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批改的筒子不好意思了，，凑合着看吧~~THX A BILLION~~!!!!

TPO1
T h e    l e c t u r e    u s e s    s o m e   p o i n t s   t o      r e f u t e s    t h e   b e l i f   i n   t h e   reading   p a s s a g e   t h a t   f o u r - d a y   w o r k
h a s   m a n y   a d v a n t a g e s .

F i r s t l y ,   c o n t r a r y   t o   t h e   r e a d i n g    t h a t    c o m p a n y  c a n    g a i n   m o r e   p r o f i t s   i f   m o r e   p e o p l e   c h o s e   t o   w o r k   i n    f o u r   d a y s ,  t h e   p r o f e s s o r  s t a t e s  t h a t         c o m p a n y   w o u l d   s p e n d   m o r e    m o n e y    a n d    t h e         p r o f i t s    m a y     d e c r e a s e ,    b e c a u s e   h i r i n g    m o r e       e m p l o y e e    s h o u l d   s p e n d   m o n e y   o n    t r a i n n i n g ,      m e d i c a l    b e n e f i t s ,    w o r k i n g    s p a c e s ,   a n d   e v e n      c o m p u t e r s .   T h e s e   c o s t   i s   n o t   a   s m a l l   a m o o u n t
o f   m o n e y .



S e c o n d l y ,  t h e   l e c t u r e   c h a n l l e g e   t h e   f a c t   t h a t      b e c u a s e   m o r e   j o b s   c a n  b e   p r o v i d e d ,   m o r e              u n e m p l o y e d    p e o p l e   c a n   h a v e   j o b s . Th e  p r o f e s s o r
p r e s e n t e s   t h a t  a s   h e   s a i d   b e f o r e ,  t h e  c o s t   o f  t h e
e m p l o y m e n t  i s  v e r y
large, so company would settle five-day work quantity within four-day. The employees would feel very stressful and less happy.

Thirdly, the reading says that people can spend much time on their families and relaxing, if they work in four days. But the professor argues that it is not reasonable to work in 4 days, because the four-day employees would have less chance to get the upper position, and probably would lose their jobs firs. The reason is that they have less competition than the other employees who work five days.

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PO1
The lecture uses some points to refutes the belif in the   reading passage that four-day work has many advantages.
  我真想帮你重新打一遍！ 我一直在找简化我首段的模板，那以后就用你的首段了。
Firstly, contrary to the reading that company  c a n    g a i n   m o r e   p r o f i t s   i f   m o r e   p e o p l e   c h o s e   t o   w o r k   i n    f o u r   d a y s ,  t h e   p r o f e s s o r  s t a t e s  t h a t         c o m p a n y   w o u l d   s p e n d   m o r e    m o n e y    a n d    t h e         p r o f i t s    m a y     d e c r e a s e ,    b e c a u s e   h i r i n g    m o r e       e m p l o y e e    s h o u l d   s p e n d   m o n e y   o n    t r a i n n i n g ,      m e d i c a l    b e n e f i t s ,    w o r k i n g    s p a c e s ,   a n d   e v e n      c o m p u t e r s .   T h e s e   c o s t   i s   n o t   a   s m a l l   a m o o u n t o f   m o n e y .


S e c o n d l y ,  t h e   l e c t u r e   c h a n l l e g e   t h e   f a c t   t h a t      b e c u a s e   m o r e   j o b s   c a n  b e   p r o v i d e d ,   m o r e              u n e m p l o y e d    p e o p l e   c a n   h a v e   j o b s . Th e  p r o f e s s o r p r e s e n t e s   t h a t  a s   h e   s a i d   b e f o r e ,  t h e  c o s t   o f  t h e
e m p l o y m e n t  i s  v e r y large, so company would settle five-day work quantity within four-day. The employees would feel very stressful and less happy.

Thirdly, the reading says that people can spend much time on their families and relaxing, if they work in four days. But the professor argues that it is not reasonable to work in 4 days, because the four-day employees would have less chance to get the upper position, and probably would lose their jobs firs(first). The reason is that they have less competition than the other employees who work five days.
  SUM UP
  写的很好，很全！！！继续加油！！！

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TPO2

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The lecture uses some points to refute the belief in reading that when it comes to a new project, the decision which made by a group of people has more merits than made by individuals.

Firstly, contrary to the reading passage that a group of people can make the decision process more quickly thant the individuals, the professor states that the decision making would cost more time, because in order to accord the opinion, a group of people should take lots of meeting.

Secondly, the professor chanllege the fact that group members can fullfill their willing when they contribute their own opinions to the group. In fact, it is unfair for the contributers, because some people, who are free riders, haven't make any contribution to projects.

Thirdly, the reading passage says that the group memebers can show their abilities when disccusing projects, but the professor argues that some influencial people would make a large impact on the project, and certain members  would follow their opinion most of the time, so that some other memeber, who hold different opinions, would be ignored. Also, if the project had failed, all of the group members should responsible for it.

All in all, the professor did agree with the statement presented by the reading that when handle a project, a group of members have more advantages than individuals.

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Firstly, contrary to the reading （passage）that company（companies）  c a n    g a i n   m o r e   p r o f i t s   i f   m o r e   p e o p l e   c h o s e   t o   w o r k   i n    f o u r   d a y s ,  t h e   p r o f e s s o r  s t a t e s  t h a t         c o m p a n y （companies见你profits是复数，应该也是复数吧）  w o u l d   s p e n d   m o r e    m o n e y    a n d    t h e         p r o f i t s    m a y     d e c r e a s e ,    b e c a u s e   h i r i n g    m o r e       e m p l o y e e （employees）   s h o u l d   s p e n d   m o n e y   o n    t r a i n n i n g ,      m e d i c a l    b e n e f i t s ,    w o r k i n g    s p a c e s ,   a n d   e v e n      c o m p u t e r s（这个computer貌似和它们不平行吧） .   T h e s e   c o s t   i s   n o t   a   s m a l l   a m o o u n t（amount） o f   m o n e y .

S e c o n d l y ,  t h e   l e c t u r e   c h a n l l e g e   t h e   f a c t   t h a t      b e c u a s e   m o r e   j o b s   c a n  b e   p r o v i d e d ,   m o r e  u n e m p l o y e d    p e o p l e   c a n   h a v e   j o b s . Th e  p r o f e s s o r  p r e s e n t e s   t h a t  a s   h e   s a i d   b e f o r e ,  t h e  c o s t   of the employment  is  very large, so company would settle five-day work quantity within four-day. The employees would feel very stressful and less happy.（这个逻辑关系错误，应该是公司就可以加大他们压力，那么就不请人了，这点要说到噢。这里没有回扣主题啊）

Thirdly, the reading （passage） says that people（people没有定义，是全人类吗？） can spend much time on their families and relaxing, if they work in four days. But the professor argues that it is not reasonable to work in 4 days, because the four-day employees would have less chance to get the upper position, and probably would lose their jobs firs(first). The reason is that they have less competition than the other employees who work five days.

总结：不错，学习了，下次麻烦别弄成这样，虽然我也有帮你重新打的冲动。

By Fatrui 不好意思 late了

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nowadays

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nowadays

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The lecture uses some points to refute the belief in reading that when it comes to a new project, the decision which made by a group of people has more merits than made by individuals.
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Firstly, contrary to the reading passage that a group of people can make the decision process more quickly thant（than） the individuals, the professor states that the decision making would cost more time, because in order to accord the opinion, a group of people should take lots of meeting. （这个貌似有点短啊，还有个单词我记得是opposite）

Secondly, the professor chanllege（challenge） the fact that group members can fullfill（fulfill） their willing when they contribute their own opinions to the group. In fact, it is unfair for the contributers（contributors）, because some people, who are free riders（这个猛 我和cox都是听到free right）, haven't make any contribution to projects.

Thirdly, the reading passage says that the group memebers （members）can show their abilities when disccusing（discussing） projects, but the professor argues that some influencial （influential）people would make a large impact on the project, and certain members  would follow their opinion most of the time, so that some other member（members）, who hold different opinions, would be ignored. Also, if the project had failed, all of the group members should responsible for it.（PET听力很有长进啊，逻辑关系都听到了）
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All in all, the professor did agree with the statement presented by the reading that when handle a project, a group of members have more advantages than individuals.

不好意思 严重迟到

By Fatrui

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Some people will say that a new movie theater in our neighborhood would be a bad thing.

However, I fully support the plan to build one. I feel that a movie theater would bring more

opportunities for recreation, reduce teenage delinquency, and lead to several improvements in the

town.

As it stands, there is little to do in my town. There are no parks here, and there is certainly no

nightlife. Additionally, the nearest movie theater is more than thirty minutes away. That is

inconvenient for everyone here. Many movies end late at night. Who wants a long drive home at

11:30p.m. or midnight?

Building a new movie theater here will reduce juvenile delinquency. Like everyone else, teens

here are bored. They need activities to keep them busy and out of trouble. The jobs that the

theatre will provide will help teens, too. We need more businesses that are willing and eager to

employ young people.

Overall, the new theater will bring many improvements to the town. For example, it will help

other businesses. That is because the movie theater will attract customers from neighboring towns.

Those neighbors do not have a reason to come to this town now. However, if they are coming

here for a movie, they will be more likely to stay here to shop. If we get more visitors, we'll need

better roads. While this may be costly, it will also make travel easier for people living here. We

will be able to get around faster. Safety will be improved with the new roads, because they will be

in better condition than many that we have now.

I believe that our town needs a new movie theater. Again, I support it fully. I hope that others in

our community will join me to convince residents and local government.

(Essay ID: 109 )

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