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When asked about whether people are received information from various sources, the majority of people would say yes. Thanks to the rapid(rapidly) developed society in(去掉也可) science and technology, it is not illusion any more and the dream of being a well-informed people comes true. As for me , I am convinced that only by absorbing information can we be able to be a well-informed person（你的观点是absorbing information 可是，是哪个观点呀？）.- g0 R+ o: L1 c
Adimttedly, along with the invention of computer, ways of learning new information like books and radios are outdate, due to the updating speed of news. Under this circumstance, in order to keep the high pace of the modern society, a well-informed man must try to know the hitting news by plenty of ways instead of only by one way, sitting at home waiting the newspaper posted by postmans every morning中间就缺一个例子，前面说社会发展，这个不够作为理由，中间要有个链接.
' S( H- F* b" V% x2 eIn addition, the quantity of the information abtained from one way is not enough. The adequate and wide information and knowledge must be accumulated from vast ranges of sources. We are now standing at the beginning of the twenty-first century and will witness this marvelous world changing into a information world day by day. At the same time, information will replace the money becoming the most significant thing in the modern world. Take the students as an simple example, modern students have the capability of mastering advanced information collector--computers, which makes them more excellent than us who were born in the late 1980s. Compared with us, current students do not have to warry about the poor teaching facilities or the single way of learning knowledge that taught by teachers. Computers, study groups, TV and radios enable students to be a learned and will-informed people嗯 基本上没什么问题，不过没有如此different的问题是不.: l( `) o3 z. D+ n  a' e7 f
Most importantly, learn information from different ways help us judge whether the information is exactly accurate. As we all know, one thing can't be treasured （应该有个as吧）a truth before it has been proved hundred and thousand （hundreds and thousands of ）times. For the same reason, an piece of information must be proved true before we accept it. Huge (a large)number of information we have to handle with everyday and the key point is to sellect true and value information from fake and useless information. Getting information from different ways becomes an efficient method to deal with this problem---telling the true information from the opposite这个点不好论证呀，试试说，大量的信息源给了我们跟多可以选择的机会，如果想升华一下就在说这个机会能带来相对更为准确的信息 个人意见.
: m' x8 e% ~! I( yBy and large, from what has been discussed above I can safely draw the conclusion that it is preferable to abtain information from various sources in stead of one way, if you are desiring to be a well-informed person.

感觉这篇文章从这个角度来说就不是很好说
整篇文章，大的问题没有，感觉就是证明的力度稍稍少了点，也是不好整的原因吧
O(∩_∩)O~说的不对的地方，通知我谢谢啦