ISSUE7 视频与文字 首次限时有拍必回！（倒数11天）。by pluka

plukaUID: 2721764

TOPIC: ISSUE7 - "The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."
WORDS: 531          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2010-2-19 19:56:56
限时成功的一篇~！因为这个题目比较好写吧……但写得时候仍然是手忙脚乱。要继续练习啊。
With the highly speeded pace of life and the unparalleled information explosion today, people are edging to document accurately and convincingly not only the significant event but also the exciting episode in life. Both the video camera, which is rendered by the booming shooting technology, and the written records, the tradition yet unfailing method of documentation, lend us convient and useful way. 

Undeniably, videos enjoy some unique conveniences that are unmatched by any form of written records. When confronting to record the instant scene, such as news events and sports competition, cameras render us an accurate and convincing method which is free from not only the subjective influence but also the limit in scope of the recorder. However skillful or objective, hardly can a reporter write down with his pen the glaring atmosphere and the thunderous cheers during a football match, nor can he document thoroughly an political turmoil, writing down all the desperate and raging faces and ardent demonstrations, which can be viewed vividly in an short video record. Frequently, such striking emotions and comprehensive picture defy the description of words, and only the shoot of camera is able to capture the scene, keeping its original empathy and details. 

Meanwhile, paper documentation dwarfs camera shooting in the specific and extremely in-depth description of both daily and inner world of human life. Though there might be supervision cameras in public places such as banks and shopping malls, it is impossible for them to witness every detail of one's  life. We seek to record them in the form of paper documentation: through the diary, the letter for families and friends, the bank bill, the agenda list, and so forth. Also, when trying to explore the inner world of people, we turn more to the autobiography or biography than to documentary video: the former unveils the deepest thoughts, the spiritual condition, the specifics that seemingly obscure yet significant, while the latter can present only limited fraction of the ostensible life or shallow description of the inner at best. Written records, which has been pervasive in every end of the world, exert perhaps invisible yet innegligible influence for all. 

When considering the circulation sphere and spread methods, publications and videos possess different advantages. Camera programs, relies on certain media to transmit and exhibit, are gaining their share with the rapidly development of communication technology, especially on the internet. Various video sites, Youtube included, win dramatical popularity among people, accelerating and facilitating the circulation and preservation of video records. Meanwhile, paper records, with their natural merit that can be accessible without any auxilary machine or equipment except reading ability, pemeat our daily life. Be it when waiting a train or an appointment, for example, people prefer to fetch a newpaper or magazine to kill the time. While the cassette or discs, which depend heavily on specific machines, are fading away with the disapearance of tape recorder and disc players, books, newpapers and other paper publications will never lose their ground as long as people can read and write. 

With different characteristics, videos and written records share the role of recording the world. It is the combination of the two that gives us a comprehensive picture.

NEU公孙轩辕UID: 2697609

占楼，稍后来拍

tunicateUID: 2722773

修改见附件~

LZ的语言相当令我佩服，尤其是错字之少和红宝词的运用，很多动词也很精致。
需要注意的是，虽然逻辑清楚，适当的概括总结还是必要的，这些会进一步强化文章结构。

p.s 还有13天考，拜托回拍：>
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1062975-1-1.html

tunicateUID: 2722773

另外“ the specifics that seemingly obscure yet significant”中yet的用法我不是很清楚，LZ哪里知道的这种用法，确定合理么？

tequilawineUID: 2702008

ISSUE7 视频与文字 首次限时有拍必回！（倒数11天）。by pluka
TOPIC: ISSUE7 - "The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."
WORDS: 531          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2010-2-19 19:56:56
限时成功的一篇~！因为这个题目比较好写吧……但写得时候仍然是手忙脚乱。要继续练习啊。
With the highly speeded pace of life and the unparalleled information explosion today, people are edging to document accurately and convincingly not only the significant event but also the exciting episode in life. Both the video camera, which is rendered by the booming shooting technology, and the written records, the tradition yet unfailing method of documentation, lend us convient and useful way.

Undeniably, videos enjoy some unique conveniences that are unmatched by any form of written records. When confronting to record the instant scene, such as news events and sports competition, cameras render us an accurate and convincing method which is free from not only the subjective influence but also the limit in scope of the recorder. However（No matter how) skillful or objective, hardly can a reporter write down with his pen the glaring atmosphere and the thunderous cheers during a football match, nor can he document thoroughly an political turmoil, writing down all the desperate and raging faces and ardent demonstrations, which can be viewed vividly in an short video record.两个例子很好 Frequently, such striking emotions and comprehensive picture defy the description of words, and only the shoot of camera is able to capture the scene, keeping its original empathy and details. 我感觉气氛不是表达不出来，但是对于细节的深入我感觉就有些乏力了，

Meanwhile, paper documentation dwarfs camera shooting in the specific and extremely in-depth description of both daily and inner world of human life. Though there might be supervision cameras in public places such as banks and shopping malls, it is impossible for them to witness every detail of one's  life.感觉前半句关联性不大 We seek to record them in the form of paper documentation: through the diary, the letter for families and friends, the bank bill, the agenda list, and so forth. Also, when trying to explore the inner world of people, we turn more to the autobiography or biography than to documentary video: the former unveils the deepest thoughts, the spiritual condition, the specifics that seemingly obscure yet significant, while the latter can present only limited fraction of the ostensible life or shallow description of the inner at best. Written records, which has been pervasive in every end of the world, exert perhaps invisible yet innegligible influence for all. 我不知道这么说可不可以，正因为他（camer)缺乏了主管性，所以他的深度无法无文字记录相比拟。

When considering the circulation sphere and spread methods, publications and videos possess different advantages. Camera programs, relies on certain media to transmit and exhibit, are gaining their share with the rapidly development of communication technology, especially on the internet. Various video sites, Youtube included, win dramatical popularity among people, accelerating and facilitating the circulation and preservation of video records. Meanwhile, paper records, with their natural merit that can be accessible without any auxiliary machine or equipment except reading ability, permeate our daily life. Be it when waiting a train or an appointment, for example, people prefer to fetch a newpaper or magazine to kill the time.这个例子感觉不足，现在很多人坐地铁都用手机和MP3看视频。 While the cassette or discs, which depend heavily on specific machines, are fading away with the disapearance of tape recorder and disc players, books, newpapers and other paper publications will never lose their ground as long as people can read and write. 对比的情况下的说明比较好，但是这一段的例子感觉还是不足。

With different characteristics, videos and written records share the role of recording the world. It is the combination of the two that gives us a comprehensive picture.完全扣题，并给出自己的结论，不错。

hudu464UID: 2512268

嘿嘿。看来拍的人很多呀。还是PLUKA有魅力。。
多年没上过论坛了。
最近因为托福进入倒计时也回来了。
看来论坛路线还是适合有魄力的人。~
呵呵。加油噢 。