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[i习作temp] ISSUE155 求知途径是读书 限时练习有拍必回!...by pluka [复制链接]

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发表于 2010-2-21 09:28:42 |显示全部楼层
TOPIC: ISSUE155 - "Contemporary society offers so many ways of learning that reading books is no longer very important."
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随机抽的题目,练手感。不知是否论证好了...望指教!重手拍或感想均可,必回!

Despite the variety of ways of learning made possible by the booming technology today, books, tradition as it is, still and will always occupy unshakable position in one's learning. 

True, people are enjoying mounting approaches to knowledge and truth. The televison, the internet, the radios and so forth lend a variety of methods that are attractive and vivid for us. We gain from them the latest news, the policy of government, the information on tourism or job application, and even cooking guidance. Compare with books, videos show their merits as being dynamic, realtime and vivid, merits that even schools have started to take advantages of by introducing high-tech media into classrooms.

However, the reason why schools still depend mainly on textbooksis that there are some information so abstract and complicated that only words can convey. Philosophy talks about the most intangible theme--the humanity, the ultimate destination of life, the origin of the world and other conception so abstract that are impossible to be transferred into other form apart from the word. Theoretical science, too, necessitates book learnings. It is unthinkable that students can learn without the reference to instructions and guidance, which are frequenly in the form of written books. Can people perceive Hegel's conception of the spirit of the world simply by video scenes? Can they understand quantumn mechanics without explanation provided by books? Perhaps they can, if provided really specific and detailed programs. However, 
given the relatively expensive price of making video programs or radio tapes, it will be prohibit for the majority to afford such access of learning and the path for knowledge is therefore nearly tantamount to be blocked. After all, the abstraction and the complexity of subjects limit their expression form largely to books and written records.

Fundamentally, books offer us records and knowledges that came far before the advent of other high-tech approaches such as videos and tapes. For thousands of years, people write down both the fate of individuals and the bloom and boom of the society. Paper records keep the continuity of human traditions and cultures. If without reading books, how can a person ever know the life in ancient times, and how can he admire the original work of great writers? Though historic videos can render some episodes vividly, many details and truth can be stifled for the sake of entertainment, and true history is found within the long-lived records passed down through generations. Instead of the direct presentation of the without, people touch deeper the spirit and connotation of the author by reading. Be it masterpieces of Shakespear or rountine records of emperor's living, we learn the past mainly by reading books.

Empirical experience verifies the importance of books. From the primary school to the university, textbooks serve as the main source of knowledges. By keeping and reading written records, a society preserves and passes its histroy and culture down. Though the way of learning increases today, the role of books will never fade. 
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发表于 2010-2-21 11:23:20 |显示全部楼层
hello, 一点浅见,仅供参考哈~~有不同见解,欢迎反馈哦

这是我的两篇Issue习作,pluka可以选一篇拍哈,谢谢
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1062311&page=1&extra=
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1062470&page=1&extra=

I155 pluka revised by rodgood.doc

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发表于 2010-2-21 21:35:46 |显示全部楼层
Despite the variety of ways of learning made possible by the booming technology today, books, tradition as it is, still and will always occupy unshakable position in one's learning. 直接如题,感觉很好。

True, people are enjoying mounting逐渐增加的 approaches to knowledge and truth. The televison, the internet, the radios and so forth lend a variety of methods that are attractive and vivid for us. We gain from them the latest news, the policies of government, the information on tourism or job application, and even转折意义不大 cooking guidance. Compare with books, videos show their merits as being dynamic, realtime and vivid, merits that even schools have started to take advantages of by introducing high-tech media改成them into classrooms. 这一段先肯定,后面否定,感觉不错,但是我感觉跟第一段的跳跃有点大。

However, the reason why schools still depend mainly on textbooksis that there are some information so abstract and complicated that only words can convey. Philosophy talks about the most intangible themes--the humanity, the ultimate destination of life, the origin of the world and other conceptions so abstract that are impossible to be transferred into other forms apart from the word. Theoretical science, too, necessitates book learnings. It is unthinkable that students can learn without the不用吧 reference to instructions and guidance, which are frequenly in the form of written books. Can people perceive Hegel's conception of the spirit of the world simply by video scenes? Can they understand quantumn mechanics without explanation provided by books? Perhaps they can, if provided really specific and detailed programs. However, given the relatively expensive price of making video programs or radio tapes, it will be prohibit for the majority to afford such access of learning and the path for knowledge is therefore nearly tantamount to be blocked. 前面的转折用的很好,感觉说明很有力。After all, the abstraction and the complexity of subjects limit their expression form largely (large
) to books and written records.  这一段论证有利,像上面RODGOD 说的一样,最后还是有点评论比较好。

Fundamentally, books offer us records and knowledges that came far before the advent of other high-tech approaches such as videos and tapes. For thousands of years, people write down both the fate of individuals and the bloom and boom 这个不太清楚?of the society. Paper records keep the continuity of human traditions and cultures. If without reading books, how can a person ever know the life in ancient times, and how can he admire the original work of great writers? Though historic videos can render some episodes vividly, many details and truth can be stifled for the sake of entertainment, and true history is found within the long-lived records passed down through generations. Instead of the direct presentation of the without不清楚, people touch deeper the spirit and connotation of the author by reading (books). Be it masterpieces of Shakespear or rountine records of emperor's living, we learn the past mainly by reading books. 网络上也可以读书呀, 我感觉你的论点不充分,论据不足。

Empirical experience verifies the importance of books. From the primary school to the university, textbooks serve as the main source of knowledges. By keeping and reading written records, a society preserves and passes its histroy and culture down. Though the way of learning increases today, the role of books will never fade.回应开头,感觉很好
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