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3.30作业

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3.30 （09.2.21）
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Newspapers and magazines are the best way of learning about a foreign country.
Nowadays, with the rapid development of the society, people are more likely to learn about the foreign countires（拼写错误countries）. There is a hot discussion about whether newspaper and magazines are the best way to learn about a foreign(foreign是形容词，之后要加名词). Mangzines（magazines） and newspapers can show us different kind(kind要不用kinds或a kind) of aspects of the foreigh(foreign) country. So, I support that newspapers and magazines are the best way of learning the foreign countries for the following reasons.

First, newspapers and magazines can tell people how the foreigners work. Through the newspapers, people know that the Americans work eight hours per day and they don’t have to(do any )jobs(去s) after work.(我认为在说美国时最好用for example) The magzines(magazines) also tell people (去掉people)that workers will get together and start a strike if they don’t satisfied with the company’s policy（一般police用于政府的政策，我认为改为treatment待遇，要好一点）. In addition, people can learn about the fresh events of the foreign government（加s）, such as the president election. By knowing the president of a country, people could learn about the policy of this new government and know the difficulties the country is facing.

Second, newspapers and magazines can tell people how the foreigners study. In the newspapers, people can always see the style of the American universities. Students can debate with the professor equally and they can rent an apartment outside the school, which cannot be allowed in our country. Further more, there are always numbers of reports about the Nobel prize on the magzines（magazines） which can attract people’s concentration. It is a good way of learning the advantage of the foreign universities through learning how these scientists have become winners of the prize.(这句话我不大懂它与整篇文章的关系)

Third, newspapers and magazines can tell people how the foreigners live during their daily lives. Commonly, people can see some small stories about the foreigners and through which people would know more about their daily lives. For examply(example), After reading a short story of an American, I become to（可以去掉become to） know that most Americans go to work by their private cars, more different from our country is that they have to date with the doctors before going to the hospital.

As far as I am concerned, newspapers and magazines can teach people lots of things about the foreign country. Through the newspapers and magzines（magazines）, people can learn the life style of the foreigners and how the foreigners work or study(我认为后半句与前半句重复，可省).The informations（这个词不可数） is easily to be obtained from the newspapers or magzines（magazines）, also it is a perfect material for us. Therefore, I agree with the statement that newspapers and magazines are the best way of learning about a foreign country.

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4.1 作业

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4月1日，作文修改，by caoxuemei

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4.8作业

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4.9作业，似乎有点太晚了。

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4.13

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改好咯~

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4.13 revised by Jack878:)