【big fish】2月28日习作issue130--by Edwardlzk

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写的好急， 差点赶不上交作业~~自我感觉后面写的不好

TOPIC: ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
WORDS: 522
TIME: 01:00:00
DATE: 2010/2/28 23:04:01

Socialization, as the term seems, is playing a ever accelerating critical role in the process of the development of human beings. How the juveniles socialized in nowadays society may actually affect the normal development of the country, yet many alternatives aside from socialization should be taken into consideration while efforts are doing to consummate the future of a society. As a succinct and effective response to the ever controversial issue, from where I am standing, how the children socialized today certainly lends concrete support to the healthy development of a society while it is not the only factor that should be concerned, with the rapid development of the world, parents and educators always adjust themselves to applying new but constructive teaching methods on their children.

Admittedly, the ability of social intercourse is inevitable to all children as well as adults. Since our living world is becoming more globalized, things are changing more and more complex so that sometimes it even means a futile effort to solve them only depend on the knowledge and striving of a individual. They call for the co-operation or even the global collaboration of experts in various aspects. The Human Genome Project, which aims to understand the entire genetic blueprint of a human being, raised by the scientists from U.S., is collaborated by researchers from seven countries. Complex as it seems to be, the way to accomplish these tough tasks in the project requires the communications of scholars in different but interrelated realm. A perfect ability to communicate with others can undoubtedly expedite the process, which is always imperative in contemporary life, not only in the instance mentioned above.

Nevertheless, excessive emphasis on the ability of socialization is meanwhile unacceptable. Too much socialized children may possibly lose the ability to think individually, while it is convenience for them to exchange ideas with others, thus easily influenced. Besides the social intercourse ability, many factors which may also greatly affect the well development of a human being cannot be ignored. Personality firstly, which ostensibly contradict the socialization ability, enjoys equally importance, which enable people to have the capability of critical thinking which may eventually result in tremendous achievement, as Copernicus's famous Heliocentric conjecture that the earth and other planets revolves around the sun, and also Bacon's idea of testing authority in order to gain real knowledge.

Referring to the issue whether parents nowadays are do a good job in bring up their offspring. As far as I am concerned, the method depends on the ever changing the world and the specified circumstance around the children instead of judging by one or some factors. Obviously, it is quite different means of education or other fields such as researching in past time with that nowadays since the changing world has its different preference in different time. The appealing and effective way of education must change with time to prepare proper juvenile for the society.

All in all, under no circumstance should we put too much emphasis on socialization, nor could we neglect it. Many other factors and a flexible method that keep abreast of times should both into consideration.

SansouciUID: 2755036

看了第一段之后，我都不敢拍你这篇文章了
因为。。。。。。
真的很不错，而且看得出你是用PP3模拟考场要求做的。
只是结尾可能是因为时间不够，显得有点草草收尾了
不过中间论证不错，整体行文有新意
加油，你一定会取得好成绩的。