[big fish]-3月3日-issue103-by dgxy08

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3.03 Issue No.103
"The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."

When it comes to the value of the study of history, some advocate that it has little value duo to the different society conditions between today and history. However, I concede that the study of history has tremendous value not only when it is relevant to our daily lives but also when it involves in the humanity civilization.

Admittedly, the society conditions changes as the time goes on and these events happening in history will not take place again. However some regulations can always has effect on the development of humanity. On history, when the people were too poor to continue she's lives, they would resist the government, which would be replaced by a new government. It is only through the study of our history that can we learn the relations between government and its people.

As to our daily lives, there is no denying the fact that history study plays a significant role in helping we construct a better society. From the study of history we can obtain the measures about governing which the government should take, which is the most important organization of humanity. It is widely known that the best way to govern the country is to obtain the support of its people, which is an important principle accepted by all governor who are advisable.

Besides, history is a significant part in humanity civilization. The research on history would contribute to the research on our civilization. Through the events happened in history, we can learn the process of the humanity civilization,which can help us to know the economic development and science development.

In sum,to better benefit the development of our society research on history is necessary and sound. Through some may still disagree my view, however, I believe that after the discussing above , more and more people will accord that study in history has value on a number of aspects.


   

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3.03 Issue No.103
"The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."

When it comes to the value of the study of history, some advocate that it has little value due to the different society conditions between today and history. However, I concede that the study of history has tremendous value not only when it is relevant to our daily lives but also when it involves （in）去掉 the humanity civilization.

Admittedly, the society conditions changes as the time goes on and these events happening in history will not take place again. However some regulations can always has effect on the development of humanity. On history, when the people were too poor to continue their lives, they would resist the government, which would be replaced by a new government. It is only through the study of our history that can we learn the relations between government and its people.

As to our daily lives, there is no denying the fact that history study plays a significant role in helping we construct a better society. From the study of history we can obtain the measures about governing which the government should take, which is the most important organization of humanity. It is widely known that the best way to govern the country is to obtain the support of its people, which is an important principle, accepted by all governors who are advisable.(重复论证，缺乏论据，没有说服力~~)

Besides, history is a significant part in humanity civilization. The research on history would contribute to the research on our civilization. Through the events happened in history, we can learn the process of the humanity civilization, which can help us to know the economic development and science development.

In sum, to better benefit the development of our society research on history is necessary and sound. Through some may still disagree my view, however, I believe that after the discussing above, more and more people will accord that study in history has value on a number of aspects.
ISSUE 最重要就是逻辑清晰，但这篇文章却感觉重复累赘，文章结构不是太好
语言的提炼也是相当重要的，注意用词的多变，还是和AGREMENT 的建议一样。

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