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CynthiaMomoLeeUID: 2587828

Education is a primary role and tool in the development of society. However, the suggestion that the true effective method in education is just to notice each student's needs and interests seems not to be suitable in the entire whole. Other influence and value from education are also as a element of becoming an excellent nation.

Admittedly, education will be truly effective when it is designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student. As is known to all, interests are the best way during the progress of people receiving knowledge. Only when a child is keen on some certain field of things, more time and energy would be used to the knowledge. Take the sports player as an example. When a child was born in the place where most of the time was cold and full of snow in the whole year, a feeling of loving snow and ice naturally have happened in the earlier year of the child's life. At the beginning, the child learned how to skiing only due to the love of it or loving playing, but when a professional coach found the passion and interests of the little boy or girl, a new and marvelous world would be open to one. Maybe from then on, more meaningful and suitable training focus on the individual, and gradually a talented and famous play would get the golden medal and win more appreciation.

However, the author's statement that the real value is only expressed at the time of meeting one's needs and interests is unconvincing. The aim of education is not only to spread and develop each student's interests that are various and different from one to another, but to enhance more nationwide instruction of common sense as well. We should let the average person realize the country's history such as how the solider full of courage combated the enemies and finally the king founded the country, and how the computer has been developed from a huge electrical box to the desktop notebook and even small enough just putting on our hand, boosting the living and comfortable level of both the developed nations and the developing nations. It is the common sense that is contributive to the advancement of humanity and society.

Furthermore, besides the necessary and fundamental information, we should pay attention to the character of an individual. Values such as honesty, probity, kindness, persistence are core lessons inculcated by parents and schools systems. It is of more significance to own greater tolerance of viewpoints and people, who are different from ourselves, greater respect for individual rights. and greater cooperation with people good at other field with which they themselves have no idea otherwise. Hence, more aspects should be taken into consideration in the attitude of education.

In conclusion, we cannot deny the important meaning of education in deepen one's interests and needs in a certain field. More thoughtful, the basic and simple knowledge and the right thinking and attitude of the whole life should be taught.

tc1220UID: 2585174

Education is a primary role and tool in the development of society. However, the suggestion that the true effective method in education is just to notice each student's needs and interests seems not to be suitable in the entire whole. Other influence and value from education are also as(你想表达作为是吧，用regarded as) a element of becoming an excellent nation.

Admittedly, education will be truly effective when it is designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student. As is known to all, interests are the best way during the progress of people receiving knowledge. Only when a child is keen on some certain field of things, more time and energy would be used to the knowledge(不明白什么意思). Take the sports player as an example. When a child was born in the place where most of the time was cold and full of snow in the whole year, a feeling of loving snow and ice naturally have happened in the earlier year of the child's life. At the beginning, the child learned how to skiing only due to the love of it or loving playing（啰嗦了）, but when a professional coach found the passion and interests of the little boy or girl, a new and marvelous world would be open to one. （这个例子不妨加上个具体的人，会更有说服力，就在冬奥会上随便找个都行，呵呵） Maybe from then on, more meaningful and suitable training focus on the individual, and gradually a talented and famous play would get the golden medal and win more appreciation.（gradually 和 get打假了）

However, the author's statement that the real value is only expressed at the time of meeting one's needs and interests is unconvincing.（像在写argu，直接说TS吧） The aim of education is not only to spread and develop each student's interests that are various and different from one to another, but to enhance more nationwide instruction of common sense as well. For example, We should let the average person(let..俗了  是every person 把) realize the country's history such as how the solider full of courage combated the enemies and finally the king founded the country, and how the computer has been developed from a huge electrical box to the desktop notebook and even small enough just putting on our hand, boosting the living and comfortable level of both the developed nations and the developing nations. It is the common sense that is contributive to the advancement of humanity and society.
（好思想啊~）

Furthermore, besides the necessary and fundamental information, we should pay attention to the character of an individual. Values such as honesty, probity, kindness, persistence are core lessons inculcated by parents and schools systems.(such as 后不是接一句话吧) It is of more significance to own greater tolerance of viewpoints and people, who are different from ourselves, greater respect for individual rights. and greater cooperation with people good at other field with which they themselves have no idea otherwise. Hence, more aspects should be taken into consideration in the attitude of education.

In conclusion, we cannot deny the important meaning of education in deepen one's interests and needs in a certain field. More thoughtful, the basic and simple knowledge and the right thinking and attitude of the whole life should be taught.
(最后一段的时候注意点题----effectiveness, meaning 不一定等于effectiveness吧

总的来说不错啊~~第二个的观点让我眼前一亮，我确实没有想到，好思想~~