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馋MEUID: 2761685

我哭，刚把4月10号的也写完了，一失手把它全删了
SHIT!
不写了

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4.9 修改 by speedzshaw

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
: \, u# I# E1 k, j1 C7 fUniversities should give every member of the team the same grade when the team finishes a project.: d0 v5 y- B. @0 ?: n: Z$ @
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Different from students in primary or secondary school, universitystudents are often given group assignments which are technicallyimpossible for one person to finish (in) ON time or which have no (universal)你想说通用的？？answers and, therefore, need to be contemplated from variousperspectives.建议第一句不要这么长，没法喘气:) So, in order to finish the task very well, all themembers of the group must make joint effects这个词组不合适,成为一体:be united as one. But, this also bringsabout (one) a problem. Should the members of the team be given the samegrade by universities? Someone 一个人？？应该是一些人 says 'yes', because the project isimpossible to be finished without no matter which member. However,someone says 'no'. They incline to believe that every member of theteam contributes to the finished project differently. As far as I amconcerned, I am the one of the latter. 这段可以精简
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- A3 f4 ?2 m$ g: n3 BLet's turn tothe major reason first. Every member in the team contributes to theprojects differently. For example, when we want to finish a task,everyone in the team will be assigned to the different parts of thejob. Someone is responsible for the every detail of the job whilesomeone takes writing or speaking. But the quality工作性质不同？推敲一下这个词 of every job hasgreat differences. If the universities don't consider this and giveevery member the same grade, it is unfair for everyone 这是汉语的说法，对英语你的说清楚，比如对谁不公平. This alsobrings out other problems. It makes the members lose the motivation towork hard 这种用法是错误的用:of work . Also someone take a free-ride.
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Other reason that I choose the latter is that giving the membersdifferent remarks is an effective way to make the students cooperate 在make 后面这样用不能表达让sb好好合作的意思，这种用法不好，推敲一下。better. As is known to all, when we play the piano, a wonderful songcomes from the tacit cooperation of five figures. Likewise, if we wantto finish the projects very successfully这是汉语表达法，可以这样 a successful project requires..., every member must try theirbest to do the job which are assigned to him/her 这个限定罗嗦了，用his job不是简洁吗. In order to make amistake 没理解？？about this, it is worth mentioning that the standards of givingthe members remark not only watch his assigned part of the project, butalso the quality of the results.
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To sum up, it is wiser that the university should give the members ofthe group different remark. The universities can simulate the membersof the group to work hard according to taking this measure.


by '普’
（1） 有点：语言朴实，避免了模板，这是ETS倡导的，赞赏一下！
（2）缺点，用词要多推敲，语序有一些要尽量避免汉语影响
（3） 论证方面还是不错的。不足实际是因为对用词用句把握不精准造成的，以后连多了自然就提高了。

jack878UID: 2650029

4.9 revised by Jack878

不好意思啊，修改的有些晚，下次我会注意的，加油~:)

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4.9修改

馋MEUID: 2761685

4.16  09.12.4北美

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do you think people should buy things made in their own country, even the price is higher than same things made somewhere else

With globalization and integration of the world , some people nowadays tend to buy goods imported from foreign countries. While some individuals contend that people are supposed to buy domestic goods rather than foreign goods in order to promote the development of their own country. Personally , I am firmly convinced that purchasing domestic goods is not always necessary and people have freedom in deciding what kinds of products they like.

To begin with , sometimes domestic goods don't  guarantee high quality compared to foreign goods even though their prices are lower. Admittedly , each country has its specialization in some certain commodities for exporting. For instance, Japan is good at producing  high-tech devices, like the well-known brands Sony ,Panasonic. On the other hand, China mainly handles light-industry products , like clothes and toys exportation. Therefore ,when it comes to buying a certain brand of cameras, people will no doubt incline to  choose Japanese products since they have always been enjoying a high reputation for their excellent qualities and durablity.


Besides , the economy of the world will be stagnant if everyone just purchases their domestic brands. As we are living in a fast-changing society ,we have to adapt out ideas to the society . It can be seen clearly that competition is more and more fierce nowadays, moreover , it is inevitable and we have to confront with the challenge in order to survive in the world.  If everyone buy goods from their own country out of their so-called patriotism, or we just confine ourselves in the a small world,  how could we stimulate economy and make progress,?

To sum up , I hold the view that individuals  definitely have the rights to buy foreign goods and only when we detect the flaws of our products  can we compete with our rivals .

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4.17   09.12.5& n+ o5 {8 t  w$ b8 h' N  O  F, {5 i4 n
对于年轻人来说，ability to plan and organize 是很重要的素质; O0 |+ Q! e!

Management skill is putting more emphasis on these days ,  for the reason that  it is always related to people's success. From my perspective ,  the ability to organize and plan ,is crucial to young people when taking both their future career and  life into consideration.

First of all , young people who possess the ability to organize things well is more likely to succeed in his career path. To be more specific , if one is capable of making planning in advance , he will more confident and calm when he is involved in an urgent situation. While people with the ability to handle emergency properly is what the employers are searching for, since they need their employers deal with the tasks in a right order . Like how to make priority according to the importance of their work , how to keep their tons of materials well-organized, how to arrange the meeting properly. Therefore, young people who know well about the skills will no doubt be more competitive in the job market.


Besides, young people who have the ability to organize his job well tend to arrange his life properly as well. For example , he will clean up his room more frequently ,as he want everything to be kept in order; he is less likely to forget the appointment with his friends , as he has planned it in advance; he is also less likely to miss up his fight , as he has confirmed it earlier. As a consequence,  the people around him are more likely to follow his instructions  or ask him for advices since he has always plan things well . This in turn, will aid him in developing his interpersonal skills in life.

To sum up , I firmly believe that the ability to plan and organize should be attached to great importance for the young and this skill will be beneficial to their future career and life.

caoxuemeiUID: 2629828

52# 馋ME
by caoxuemei

xuyining09UID: 2789665

我对outsider 4.16作业的愚见 by xuyining09
不好意思啊。。这里发附件我不会发，我没找到发附件的东西额。。麻烦教下我怎么发啊 谢谢


do you think people should buy things made in their own country, even the price is higher than same things made somewhere else

With(the development of 全球化是个发展过程) globalization and integration of the world , some people nowadays tend to buy goods imported from foreign countries. While some individuals contend （for）that people are supposed to buy domestic goods rather than foreign goods in order to promote the development of （加ecomony in） their own country. Personally , I am firmly convinced that purchasing domestic goods is not always necessary and people have freedom in deciding what kinds of products they like.

To begin with , sometimes domestic goods don't
guarantee high quality compared to foreign goods even though their prices are lower. Admittedly , each country has its specialization in some certain commodities （可以说fields）for exporting. For instance, Japan is good at producing
high-tech devices, like the well-known brands Sony ,Panasonic. On the other hand, China mainly handles light-industry products , like clothes and toys exportation. Therefore ,when it comes to buying a certain brand of cameras, people will no doubt incline to
choose Japanese products since they have always been enjoying a high reputation for their excellent qualities and durablity.

Besides , the economy of the world will be stagnant if everyone just purchases their domestic brands. As we are living in a fast-changing society ,we have to adapt out ideas to the society . It can be seen clearly that competition is more and more fierce（可以说the market is more and more competitive） nowadays, moreover , it is inevitable and（？） we have to confront with the challenge in order to survive in the world.
（这句没读懂）If everyone buy（s） goods from their own country out of their so-called patriotism, or we just confine ourselves in the a small world,
how could we stimulate economy and make progress？


To sum up , I hold the view that individuals
definitely have the rights to buy foreign goods and only when we detect the flaws of our products
can we compete with our rivals .

我觉得你写的很顺  思路老清晰地 没什么错误  蛮好的 ~加油！

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4.19   09.9.12北美
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children 是否是只要玩和学习而不用做任何的家务

Housework , as a daily trifle in our life , is always being done by parents rather than children. Since the majority of folks insert that housekeeping will prevent children from concentrating on their study ,which always comes first. However , from my perspective , children are supposed to do some housework instead of just playing and studying .

The first point of mine stands on the fact that by doing housework , children could contribute to the  family, which develop their sense of responsibility. As a member of the family , children have the obligation to do what they can to help their family members once they are able to do so. To be more specific , children are likely to develop a sense of belonging when them are involved in housework.  For example , when  Spring Festival , one of the most siginificant holiday in China arrives , family usually clean houses together to celebrate the coming of the new year, children are without exception.  Actually ,most of the children are quite willing to help not because they arr forced to so , it is their responsibility as a family member that drive them to contribute voluntarily.

In addition , children themselves can benefit from the process. Since they are likely to learn some useful skills in housekeeping ,which is benifical to their future career. For example  , once chidren are engaged in housework,  they will get to know how to keep their floor clean , how to keep their objects in good order and so on. As a consequence , they can form a good habit by doing so , which make the more competitive in the job market . Since most of the employers these days are looking for workers with good management skills , children who are able to do housekeeping are more inclined to tackle problems well .

Admittedly , sometimes housekeeping is time-consuming and may seem irrelavant to students academic performance ,but the benefits  it bring  about outweigh its drawbacks. Therefore , I am fully convinced that children should take the responsibility to do some housekeeping.

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55# xuyining09

谢谢改的的作文啊，宝贵的意见
貌似插入附件就可以了啊

馋MEUID: 2761685

54# caoxuemei
谢谢改的作文啊
意见很好

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4.20  09.6.7北美

" r4 T, H2 M9 H/ uagree or disagree, people will have more leisure time 20 years later.

Leisure time , a time for people to escape from their heavy workload and daily grinds , is what most people are dreaming of. Therefore, when it comes to whether people will have more leisure time 20years later, people ‘s idea aren't cut from the same clothes. Personally, I firmly believe people will have more leisure time 20 years later.

To begin with, as the entertaining activities are more and more diversified, people have more choices in determining which form of entertainment they would like to involve. To be more specific, these days it seems that various ways of amusement are produced in order to cater to the public's needs. For example, Disneyland aims at entertaining kids who are attracted by cartoon images, while spending holidays in moderate areas are designed to draw older people's attention. So it can be seen clearly that different kinds of entertainment suits for different groups. Accordingly, more and more people from all walks of life are more willing to devote more time to these customized activities


Besides, health is being attached to great importance due to the fierce competition in the modern society .Since people are  easily stressed out and a effective method  to refresh themselves is to have more leisure time in order to improve their health condition. According to the latest survey conducted by Reuters, more than 70% people find themselves involving in health problems subconsciously and most of them realize it is high time they took actions to improve their health conditions. Nevertheless, the majority of them choose to give a break from their work and have more time to relax. Therefore, people are likely to have more leisure time based on their heath status.

All in all, I'm fully convinced that the tendency of relaxing oneself by having more leisure time is bound to continue. After all, the raising standard of life provides them more time and money to do so .

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4.22 09.8.7
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parents help determined the future of their children. children allow to make their own choices.

Decision-making , the combination of adequate knowledge and rich experience , is always being considered as a tough process. Therefore , helping children determine their future is not
rare in the view of their immaturity. However, from my perspective, allowing children making decisions alone can bring them numerous benefits.

To begin with, as an indispensable part of children' growth, decision-making develop their ability to think independently. To be more specific , children are required to gather information and data from various resources and think the problem over in order to solve the problem.
As a consequence , children are able to learn how to think independently without the assistance of others. On the other hand, if chilren are under the charge of their folks and always follow their instructions , they are more likely to rely on their parents when they encounter problems instead of making efforts to overcome it alone.


In addition , parent's suggestions are merely the reflections of their thoughts rather than children themselves'.  It cannot be denied that they make decision for their children based on their experience and accumulated knowledge and database , but we have to admit that thei choices reflect their perspective, and it has nothing to do with their kids'. Moreover , the experience they have in the past may turn out to be wrong in today's fast-changing society. For example , how many parents in ancient China have ever considered sending girls to school to receive higher education ? They just took it for granted that it was unnecessary for girls to b equipped with knowledge although this convention had been proved totally ridiculous later on. So parents' decision are likely to be incorrect unless the children have tried themselves.

In a nutshell , I am fully convinced that making decision by children alone is more wiser even if they are frustrated , depressed by the difficulty. At least , they  have experienced this process and will not regret.