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题目：ARGUMENT182 - Butter has now been replaced by margarine in Happy Pancake House restaurants throughout the southwestern United States. Only about 2 percent of customers have complained, indicating that 98 people out of 100 are happy with the change. Furthermore, many servers have reported that a number of customers who still ask for butter do not complain when they are given margarine instead. Clearly, either these customers cannot distinguish margarine from butter, or they use the term "butter" to refer to either butter or margarine. Thus, to avoid the expense of purchasing butter, the Happy Pancake House should extend this cost-saving change to its restaurants in the southeast and northeast as well.

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The speaker makes a notion that the Happy Pancake House ought to balance the cost-saving change to its restaurants between the southeast and northeast with the reason for confusing the butter with margarine. Maybe the arguer think his evidence is convincable and the conclusion can be made after the discreet account that has been taken into by him.But in my opinion, it is a groundless justification for the following illustrations.

From this station, I think what the servers reported would not be true or a not cogitative conclusion but a advertisment for the replacement of Happ Pancake House restaurtant at first. Why? Some of the 98 percent of the customers probably have eaten the "margarine" that it hasn't been taken the place of the real ones thereby the rate may be a erroneous statistics.

Moreover,another point should be issued is that if it's popular with all the citizen living in both the northeast and southeast regions. As we know, cultures and customs including such as eating and playing is various in different areas. So the margarine would not be a good choice to local people in the northwestern United States.

In addition, it won't be the same in both regions for the sake of the different habit of mealing , the incongruous prices as well as the population etc.  
To sum up,  the idea of extending the cost-saving change to its all restaurants can't lead to reducing the payment of butter.