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Issue 130 How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society .Unfortunately we have not yet learned to raise children who can he can help bring about a better society.



Whether children are socialized ,it results from not only the existence ability ,such as craft skill for certain aspects ,the bachelor degree ,or the internship in some famous firms ,but more importantly, the righteous personality and the clear consciousness.which play a vital role for the children’s life path and their success in the future .

Actually ,the main objective to nurture a child doesn’t let him make contribution to society ,but let him possess the righteous personality and clear consciousness to society which is the basic character to be a eligible citizen in the world wherever he lives .To own such character ,the child can learn how to differ rightness
or error ,how to treat people and things in right value notion ,and the more importantly ,how to be along with other people effectually.This is likely
good for him to pacipate society and work with other people in the future, even if he fails to have the enough ability to manage the schoolwork temporarily.For instance , Martin Luther King was imparted with the spirit of equality since he was a child .With this great faith ,he found his the whole life’s career and devoted to that is non-violence antagonism of segregation .Then he was graved by history of human development.
However , if a child who is selfish and passive with people who are around him ,possess the gorgeous talent in many dimensions ,is he sutiable for society easily and would he like to make contribution to society ?Probaly not ,imagine that ,who like to be along with such aloof person,who want to share happiness or profits with such selfish guy ?

On the other hand ,the more details of morality behaviors that parents perform to children ,the more are children impacted ,hence, how to raise children who can bring about a better scioety depends on parents.It is obvious when a child was born and grew up in the world ,parents would be his first and eternal teachers who could teach him from what to eat to what to do.For children own the inatal ability of imitation ,parents are just like a mirror in front of children .What the minutia the parents performed ,child would imitate and remember for him a life long .For instance ,the Washington who was the president of US raised and fostered as honest and righteous for a story about cherry tree by his father.As a consequence,with the life long influenced by such noble character ,Washington brought about not only a better society to populaces of America ,but
democracy and freedom to the country.So is it diffcult to nurture a child who can bring a better society ?No, I don’t think so ,if the parents have endever and endurance ,they do impact the child to be a social pillar in the end .

In sum ,we look futher no more than how great
those contributions will have been made by children ,we just focus and devote our endevors to
nurture their righteous personality and clear consciousness for children .Only in this way ,will children have the prerequiste to bring a better society.

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