ISSUE 130 处女作，求拍，求指导

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ISSUE 130  "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have
             not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
2010-6-4   01:22
提纲：不同意现在孩子的社会化程度决定了社会的命运，并且认为人们应该学会教孩子怎么样去建设一个更好的社会。
      1. The concept of the childern socialized,and may be there are also some other things such as confidence,creative and
         cooperation that could influence the density of society.
      2. Abraham Lincoln and Martin Luther King are both believe American and Afro-American are equal.
      3. Although nowadays there are many ways can teach children become much more educated and socialized,  
         the most impotrant is individualized education.  
      4. In Mozart childhood, he had a talent in music,and his parent was
         very importance and develope it.

I don't think the speaker claim that the density of society depends on how children are socialized is right, while every coin has to sides and every thing can't decided just by one aspect. However, we have to find some useful way to tell children how to bring about a better society.

"Children are socialized" means: Through individual and social interact, a child start to know society and get the methods of living with language thinking and emotion of the some other actions. This kind of theory indicates that education backgroundand society influenced  each other. Once children become socialized, they may influence the density of society but not decided it. Children's confidence, creative, cooperation and practice and so on also have strengthened to influence society. Not only how children are socialized, but also other quality of children may determines the density of society.

During American Civil War, the leader Abraham Lincoln insist that there are no different between the black and the white, so he declared The Emancipation Proclamation. He had strong believed that Afro-American also have their freedom, they are their own master. Finally, he had liberated the majority of the Afro-American in south.  At around of a hundred years later, there is another somebody who called Martin Luther King also have strong confidence thought what the Lincoln said is truth. He alsodevoted himself to the Afro-American's civil rights. At last, he also get succeed. These two similar examples indicate that children's level of socialized can't determine the density of society, and there is also other factors could make it .

Nowadays, there are many good ways to teach children become much more excellent and bring about a better society. Maybe themedia or other advanced facilities. Also teachers and parents give a child a good leading. Let the children to learn a lot of knowledge become a brilliant  man of wide learning. Also the  society also influences the development of children. Children would become someone the society need. But, is there any other things could children do and how about something children like or have a talent in it?

Mozart, a most famous musician in the world as we known. At about four in his life, his parents found he had a talent inpiano and composer. Then his parents was importance it. By developed it, Mozart finally become an awesome musician in the world and society give a highly position of him. Also, his music became the most classic music in society. So, individual education is really an essential thing now.  Society and parents should pay attention to the character of child so that couldeasily raise a child by some way which is fit for development of the child. So, individual education could bring the benefit
to the society and let the society become better and better.

In sum, when children become a adult to contribute to society is not decided by socialization, but the overall quality of a adult, such as confidence, leadership, communication skills, adaptability, etc. A overall quality person may determines the density of society. Also, we can't ignore the individual education, that help us to develop  person who may could bringa better city to all of us.

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