ISSUE 138

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issue138 ------------------------------------------ "Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress." ------------------------------------------

When someone asks you how to gain the discovery and to make progress, different people have different answer. About the method to success, as to me, mistakes will not be the only path.
As we all known, failure is the mother of the success. Mistakes can be described as one certain kind of failure, and moreover this kind of failure help us learn more about what we once failed to note. There is no doubt that some discoveries actually are based on failure what we call them mistakes. A famous example is apt to support this view is the discovery of PO and RA by Mrs. Currie through made mistakes many times. That is to say, the discovery or progress of science is based on a lot of experiences which were conclude by mistakes. But, there is also present some discovery or progress on science without mistakes, which seems to be a little part of the whole situation.
However, mistakes is the only way to get discovery and progress. There are a lot examples exist can prove through study hardly and discussing with others all can make a great progress, because whether discovery of progress are both relative. When I was a kid, my parents told me that I should study hard to get success. So I work hard in my class and through hard working my grade was from C to A. As to me, this is a great progress by hard working. Although, I can not say with hard working one can make great progress, without it nothing will happen. Hard working in some extent, increase the possibility of success including discovery and progress.
Another example is brain-storm-method. Many different people came from different nations to discuss a common problem. Before they came, one raise a problem, during a long time there was nothing occurred to it, since others came, something changed. Because there are many kinds of mind and many kinds of methods to be used to solve it, and in the end the problem was came over which also can be described as a prefect progress and during this process, a large mount of brighten thought sparked which may cause some discoveries. And the reason why brain storming are wildly used is reasonable to explain we can gain the discovery and progress by many different ways.
In sum, discovery and progress due to different understanding of each person with different method, and it is possible to attain them by mistakes or other deeds.

字数 418 用时60分钟 超时了啊唉,不过自我感觉思路还是可以的.表达方式肯定不好,不用说我也知道,慢慢改

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When someone asks you how to gain the discovery and to make progress, different people have different answers. About the method to success（succeed）, as to me, (个人感觉about不太好As to the method to success, for me) mistakes will not be the only path.

As we all known, failure is the mother of the success. Mistakes can be described as one certain kind of failure, and moreover this kind of failure help us learn more about what we once failed（otherwise fail） to note. There is no doubt that some discoveries actually are based on failure what we call them mistakes (that we call mistakes). A famous example is apt to support this view is the discovery of PO and RA by Mrs. Currie through made mistakes many times. That is to say, the discovery or progress of science is based on a lot of experiences which were(is) concluded by(from) mistakes. But, there is also present some discovery or progress on science without mistakes, which seems to be a little (account for a small) part of the whole situation.

However, making mistakes is the only way to get discovery and progress. There are a lot of examples existing can prove through study hardly and discussing with others all can make a great progress, because whether discovery of progress are both relative（whether of 是什么结构呀，看不太懂）. When I was a kid, my parents told me that I should study hard to get success. So I work hard in my class and through hard working my grade was from C to A. As to me, this is a great progress by hard working. Although, I can not say with hard working one can make great progress, without it nothing will happen. Hard working in some extent, increases the possibility of success including discovery and progress.

Another example is brain-storm-method. Many different people came from different nations to discuss a common problem. Before they came, one raise a problem（question会恰当些吧）, during a long time there was nothing occurred to it, since others came, something changed. Because there are many kinds of mind and many kinds of methods to be used to solve it, and in the end the problem was came over which also can be described as a prefect（perfect） progress and during this process, a large mount of brighten thought sparked which may cause some discoveries. And the reason why brain storming are wildly used is reasonable to explain we can gain the discovery and progress by many different ways.

In sum, discovery and progress due to different understanding of each person with different method, and it is possible to attain them by mistakes or other deeds.
字数 418 用时60分钟超时了啊唉,不过自我感觉思路还是可以的.表达方式肯定不好,不用说我也知道,慢慢改


思路比较清晰，只是不能充分表达自己的思路
主谓不一致比较严重（有些改过来了，Wordcopy到这来，颜色丢失了），个别句子结构分析不清，出现了两个谓语，有些词的选用不是很准确。
可以多看些英语类的文章
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