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本帖最后由 agnes2010 于 2010-7-9 23:41 编辑

草木留的作业~虽然有些一知半解,不过先从这份新的日志开始吧!
对了~又谁能告诉我帖子里面说的“二楼:空层(留给版主去编辑,记录奖励情况,如果已经有了内容,就不用留空了~”
这句话是让版主亲自来占位吗?

先来说说我的奋斗目标,大三结束了,转眼就又要大四了,这个学期才决定的要去美国~
手头上只有一个雅思成绩(之前准备去香港~)。准备下个学期再考GRE和托福,名也都报好了。
只不过只有一次G的机会,所以这次势在必行,考机考的时间定在了8月24日,似乎已经迫在眉睫了~

个人情况是这样的:
现在读的是新闻专业,不是很想出国继续读传媒,更青睐于转向公共关系 或者公共管理之类的专业,其实现在也是一片迷茫呢。
不过好像这些专业对于语言的要求都很高,尤其是作文,所以我给自己定下的目标是4.5(不过自己的作文水平向来不怎样,要达到这个目标,还有很长的路要走)。
自己的英语水平应该算还不错,不过向来都是吃老本型,可以应付各种笔试,不过要真达到很拔尖的成绩有挺大的差距...
出国准备下学期自己DIY,但是不知从何做起,有点迷茫。

之前加入了一个小组,不过因为期末的缘故,小组好像已经停滞不前了...幸好这次有机会能加入新的组,但愿可以收获到很多!我也会坚持!
HEAVEN OR HELL 就看我自己的啦~

我要加油!
如果有什么好的意见~就给我留言吧!谢谢啦
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学习——【Fundamental Course of Writtng】基础写作每日一讲(1)20 Questions for Writers

1. What does X mean? (Definition)
2. What are the various features of X? (Description)
3. What are the component parts of X? (Simple Analysis)1
4. How is X made or done? (Process Analysis)1
5. How should X be made or done? (Directional Analysis)1
6. What is the essential function of X? (Functional Analysis)1
7. What are the causes of X? (Causal Analysis) BE EACW1
8. What are the consequences of X? (Causal Analysis)1
9. What are the types of X? (Classification)1
10. How is X like or unlike Y? (Comparison)1
11. What is the present status of X? (Comparison)1
12. What is the significance of X? (Interpretation)
13. What are the facts about X? (Reportage)1
14. How did X happen? (Narration)1
15. What kind of person is X? (Characterization/Profile)1
16. What is my personal response to X? (Reflection)1
17. What is my memory of X? (Reminiscence)1
18. What is the value of X? (Evaluation)1
19. What are the essential major points or features of X? (Summary)1
20. What case can be made for or against X? (Persuasion)

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学习——【Fundamental Course of Writtng】基础写作每日一讲(2)Writing Anxiety

Coping with Writing Anxiety

Many situations or activities, such as writing, taking tests, competing in sports, or speaking before a large audience, may make us anxious or apprehensive. It's important to remember that a moderate level of anxiety is helpful and productive. That flow of adrenaline is a natural response that helps get us ready for action. Without it, we might not perform as well.

If we let our anxiety overwhelm us, it can cause problems. If we control that anxiety, however, we can make it work for us. One way to do that is to use some of the coping strategies listed below.


Coping Strategies:

  • Focus your energy by rehearsing the task in your head.

  • Consciously stop the non-productive comments(没用的思路) running through your head by replacing them with productive ones.
  • If you have some "rituals(仪式)" for writing success, use them.

Examples:

  • -Follow a protocol you may have for organizing your time. Use a favorite pen if you have one. (回忆模板,摸摸自己的幸运物)
  • -Spend a few minutes doing some relaxation exercises. (做运动)
  • -Take a break: physically walk away from the situation for a few minutes if you can. (溜达溜达)

Relaxation Strategies
  • Stretch伸展! If you can't stand up, stretch as many muscle groups as possible while staying seated. (不要吓到邻座...)
  • Try tensing and releasing various muscle groups. Starting from your toes, tense up for perhaps five to ten seconds and then let go. Relax and then go on to another muscle group.
  • Breathe deeply. Close your eyes; then, fill your chest cavity slowly by taking four of five short deep breaths. Hold each breath until it hurts, and then let it out slowly.
  • Use a calming word or mental image to focus on while relaxing. If you choose a word, be careful not to use an imperative. Don't command yourself to "Calm down!" or "Relax!"

哈哈 好多心理暗示的方法啊~受用!Stretch!

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学习——【Fundamental Course of Writtng】基础写作每日一讲(3)Writer's Block

Symptom

You have attempted to begin a paper without doing any preliminary work such as brainstorming or outlining...
Possible Cures
  • Use invention strategies suggested by a tutor or teacher
  • Write down all the primary ideas you'd like to express and then fill in each with the smaller ideas that make up each primary idea. This can easily be converted into an outline

Symptom

You have chosen or been assigned a topic which bores you....
Possible Cures
  • Choose a particular aspect of the topic you are interested in (if the writing situation will allow it...i.e. if the goal of your writing can be adjusted and is not given to you specifically, or if the teacher or project coordinator will allow it)
  • Talk to a tutor about how you can personalize a topic to make it more interesting

Symptom

You don't want to spend time writing or don't understand the assignment...
Possible Cures
  • Resign yourself to the fact that you have to write
  • Find out what is expected of you (consult a teacher, textbook, student, tutor, or project coordinator)
  • Look at some of the strategies for writing anxiety listed below

Symptom

You are anxious about writing the paper...
Possible Cures
  • Focus your energy by rehearsing the task in your head.
  • Consciously stop the non-productive comments running through your head by replacing them with productive ones.
  • If you have some "rituals" for writing success (chewing gum, listening to jazz etc.), use them.

Symptom

You are so stressed out you can't seem to put a word on the page...
Possible Cures
  • Stretch! If you can't stand up, stretch as many muscle groups as possible while staying seated.
  • Try tensing and releasing various muscle groups. Starting from your toes, tense up for perhaps five to ten seconds and then let go. Relax and then go on to another muscle group.
  • Breathe deeply. Close your eyes; then, fill your chest cavity slowly by taking four of five short deep breaths. Hold each breath until it hurts, and then let it out slowly.
  • Use a calming word or mental image to focus on while relaxing. If you choose a word, be careful not to use an imperative. Don't command yourself to "Calm down!" or "Relax!"

Symptom

You're self-conscious about your writing, you may have trouble getting started. So, if you're preoccupied with the idea that you have to write about a subject and feel you probably won't express yourself well...
Possible Cures
  • Talk over the subject with a friend or tutor.
  • assure yourself that the first draft doesn't have to be a work of genius, it is something to work with.
  • Force yourself to write down something, however poorly worded, that approximates your thought (you can revise this later) and go on with the next idea.
  • Break the task up into steps. Meet the general purpose first, and then flesh out the more specific aspects later.
  • Try one of the strategies on the next page of this resource.

扫了一下~发现自己有的症状还不少!

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学习——【Fundamental Course of Writtng】基础写作每日一讲(4)start to write

Planning (Invention): when you start to write

You can try the textbook formula:

I. State your thesis.
II. Write an outline.
III. Write the first draft.
IV. Revise and polish.

. . . but that often doesn't work!


Instead, you can try one or more of these strategies:


Ask yourself what your purpose is for writing about the subject.

There are many "correct" things to write about for any subject, but you need to narrow down your choices. For example, your topic might be "dorm food." At this point, you and your potential reader are asking the same question, "So what?" Why should you write about this, and why should anyone read it?

Do you want the reader to pity you because of the intolerable food you have to eat there?

Do you want to analyze large-scale institutional cooking?

Do you want to compare Purdue's dorm food to that served at Indiana University?


Ask yourself how you are going to achieve this purpose.

How, for example, would you achieve your purpose if you wanted to describe some movie as the best you've ever seen? Would you define for yourself a specific means of doing so? Would your comments on the movie go beyond merely telling the reader that you really liked it?


Start the ideas flowing

Brainstorm. Gather as many good and bad ideas, suggestions, examples, sentences, false starts, etc. as you can. Perhaps some friends can join in. Jot down everything that comes to mind, including material you are sure you will throw out. Be ready to keep adding to the list at odd moments as ideas continue to come to mind.

Talk to your audience, or pretend that you are being interviewed by someone -- or by several people, if possible (to give yourself the opportunity of considering a subject from several different points of view). What questions would the other person ask? You might also try to teach the subject to a group or class.

See if you can find a fresh analogy that opens up a new set of ideas. Build your analogy by using the word like. For example, if you are writing about violence on television, is that violence like clowns fighting in a carnival act (that is, we know that no one is really getting hurt)?


Take a rest and let it all percolate.


Nutshell your whole idea.

Tell it to someone in three or four sentences.


Diagram your major points somehow.

Make a tree, outline, or whatever helps you to see a schematic representation of what you have. You may discover the need for more material in some places.


Write a first draft.

Then, if possible, put it away. Later, read it aloud or to yourself as if you were someone else. Watch especially for the need to clarify or add more information.

You may find yourself jumping back and forth among these various strategies.

You may find that one works better than another. You may find yourself trying several strategies at once. If so, then you are probably doing something right!

整个思路对于写任何论文都有参考价值!学习~

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发表于 2010-7-3 21:03:04 |只看该作者
今天单词背了前两个list~还是有些生疏...
另外学习了4篇effective writing
明天开始做第二次作业:

ISSUE13
Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct.

ARGUMENT143
Your recent article on corporate downsizing* in the United States is misleading. The article gives the mistaken impression that many competent workers who lost jobs as a result of downsizing face serious economic hardship, often for years, before finding other suitable employment. But this impression is contradicted by a recent report on the United States economy, which found that since 1992 far more jobs have been created than have been eliminated. The report also demonstrates that many of those who lost their jobs have found new employment. Two-thirds of the newly created jobs have been in industries that tend to pay above-average wages, and the vast majority of these jobs are full-time.
*Downsizing is the process in which corporations deliberately reduce the number of their employees.

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发表于 2010-7-6 10:17:11 |只看该作者
昨天出去玩了一天 发现什么都没有干成....
晚上准时出席了10点的决战组会议~
之后和美国的同学聊了聊GRE的事和之后准备申请的事,顿时觉得未来的日子会十分忙碌,应该好好重视起来....

今天草木那边就会出分组方案了 静候~
现在去背list去!
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加油!
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Pisces双鱼座 荣誉版主 魅丽星 挑战ETS奖章 GRE斩浪之魂

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发表于 2010-7-6 18:35:44 |只看该作者
加油~
你机考的时间跟我差不多。。不过我机考是考全部,不仅仅是作文。。。
人生有些决定是大胆的,但是那并不代表这些决定是错误的。

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出国考?加油啊!又希望超水平发挥呐!
--未來必將完全屬於我們

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加油加油!!元老版主~有空来指导指导吧~

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发表于 2010-7-9 23:46:51 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 agnes2010 于 2010-7-10 18:31 编辑

这两天开始去新的单位实习工作,事业单位...事情竟然很多 本以为闲暇之余可以看看GRE,写写作文的 可是根本抽不出空...
今天又一大早爬起来,晚上6:30才到的家,一路上犯困,但还是得完成小组的第一次作业

ISSUE 17 超级变态啊...容我在这里发泄一下,是在是个很变态的题目,关于LAW的话题真是令人摸不着头脑,比起HISTORY来还要令人汗颜...
没思路,没事例,没语言,好不容易终于憋出了一篇,实在有些吐血...

这水平真差...:mad:

TOPIC: ISSUE17 - "There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."
WORDS: 520
TIME: 01:30:26
DATE: 2010-7-9 23:22:04


Law is a system of rules, shaping politics, economics and society in numerous ways and serves as a primary social mediator of relations between people. Just as Lady Justice represents, law is to give impartial trial and to be just. However, agreement can hardly be reached when people judging a law just or not. Therefore, to make the society live in harmony, it is crucial for citizens to follow the law and order no matter how they consider law.

Each person may hold an unique view on the fairness of a law. Their criteria in the judgment differ from each others since people from different countries share different social and cultural background or view on value. For instance, If you are a devout Catholic, you should not get divorced. Since Ireland is a country full of Catholics, people there may understand the rule as a way to show respect to love. Yet, people in Thailand can hardly agree with the law as plural marriage is very common in their traditional life. Due to the disparate cultural background, people from both country share extremely different view on marriage and both will judge the law in the other country as unfair.
As a result, when people are judging laws impartial or not, they can not avoid being prejudiced, which means it is hard to judge laws by human strength.


Although human factors alone can not be the criteria judging the fairness of laws, whether the laws are unbiased or not can be found after the test of time. In ancient China, females, labeled as labor in a family, were not allowed to go to study or take part in imperial examinations. Only males have the opportunities to get successful status in the society. However, no females considered it to be unjust at that time, and they got accustomed to their lives. It had been a long time until the law was abolished. Nowadays, both females and males can have the equal opportunities to get educated or trained. After enduring the test of time, such a law turned out to be unjust in new period. So it would be better to let the time test the fairness of a law.

Since every law is the collection of rules imposed by authority, people who disobey it will be punished by force of law. Therefore, it is advisable for everyone to obey all the laws and offer a proposal to promote the seemingly biased laws instead of resist them. If every citizen turns an blind eye to laws, the public security order will be poor and an overall smooth development of a society can never been achieved. Nevertheless, the concerning legislative branch should not overlook what citizens suggests. They must take everything useful into consideration and make an impartial conclusion in order to prove current laws.

To sum up, whether a law is biased or not can no easily be determined by people themselves, so it will be unreasoning to take resistance movements against current laws. Obeying law and order should be high on the list to ensure the public security order in a society.

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发表于 2010-7-11 21:56:49 |只看该作者
今天做了一篇有关两岸关系的comment 感觉用词对大陆方面都还蛮贬的....
哎...不过学到了很多地道的用法。

每日一题今天又没出...小组开始过高频了,issue130,做了BS,感觉还可以。
明天又要去工作了....周末怎么那么短....

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发表于 2010-7-13 19:49:35 |只看该作者
agnes最近真是找不到空子看英语...
心情低落。
要赶紧跟进小组的脚步,努力啊!!!!
今天做好i43才能罢休,然后再做一篇comment!
加油!!!
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ROse_Mary + 1 我也心情低落期。。。╮(╯▽╰)╭

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今天又是晚晚到家....
参加了issue153的BS 可是还来不及改...
时间不够...
加油加油! 明天上班的时候偷偷懒抽空看GRE 哈哈

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