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"A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."

In the originality age, more and more affirm is allowed to have its character, even the education. Hence, if we also require all the students to learn the same national curriculum before they enter college instead of allowing the different region using the unique education they think suited, do we destruct the suited ways for them? In my view, keeping the same curriculum is needed on most situation since we need the all the students have the similar restord of knowledge and the students could receive the most essential knowledge our country think, but on some special places we need other means to solve its distinctive.


Considering the justice for admission, the future education in college, even the representative culture of country transmitted in college, the same curriculum is needed to take into account. Generally, math gives us improving logical so that we could think in a logical and reasonable way. Similarly, the history teaches us to view the world in an object but subject way and using the former experience to avoid committing the same err. In short, these basic curriculum provided by the common college is the basic tool for us to study continual. If lacking such same curriculum, the college cannot ensure the students have the same basic skill, which result in the future education becoming difficult and the fair of the admission is also becoming unfounded. Besides, the same curriculum collected can represent the most essential and excellent idea of a nation. Thus, it is so important that taking these curriculums and grasp the own civilization.

However, for the special region; minority has its own culture even words. On the one hand, nor should these special knowledge be learned by common students, on the opposite aspects, the minority need learn such knowledge regarding their own race. Similarly, the region filled with art students also needs these special curriculums. Without considering this situation, the same curriculum overlooks this need.


By the same token, it is important that taking the diversity of every students into account. Success of the society obviously result from that every occupation has its own special. Even, it seems frequently that some specialists do their best in their own field. For instance, the Chairman Mao, one of the most excellent presidents, whose philology was made a great achievement rather than math. If we cannot admit this special student continue his study in college, not only did we lose a good poet, but a country. As the well known sentence that “everyone created is equal”, unless we consider this diversity, the society will lose its character made up by all kinds of person and originality constituted by a series of different idea.

In sum, without the same civilization transmitting and the justice remaining, our society will lose it essential culture and the admission in college will not supported as nowadays. Additionally , facing the varying region and different person, it is indeed needed that on the base of the same curriculum, decreasing or incrementing some subjects.

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