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发表于 2010-7-11 22:57:54 |显示全部楼层
  • Issue 88“Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics.”

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1.技术在人类社会伦理的发展中起到重要作用


2.技术并不能决定伦理,相反, 是人们在用伦理来限制技术的使用


3.社会风俗和惯例是由多种因素决定的, 不仅仅由技术决定.



Ethic is the principles of right and wrong that are accepted by an individual or a social group. Does social customs and ethics are determined by technologies?
In my opinion, technologies what had been treated as the feature distinguished people from animals, actually influence social customs and ethics greatly. However, technologies cannot determine ethics, instead, it is social ethics what ensure that technology development will do advantage to people. The social customs is determined by many factors rather than by only technologies.



To begin with, technologies play an important role in the development of social ethics. Some philosophers share a belief that person is animal which can make tools and use them. Here making tools and using them are on behalf of technologies. From the definition of person in philosophy, we can know how important technology for our society ethics. Without the technology of using fire, we may still be human-like apes rather persons, let alone creating the social ethics today. What is more, with the development of technologies, more and more new ethic issues emerge such as environmental protection and clone and so on. By this way, technologies also influence the social ethics greatly.






However, ethics whose purpose is pursuing the uppermost kindness should be used to guide the development of society rather than be determined by technologies. The ultimate purpose of people developing technologies is making a better society in which human being all can enjoy happiness and will never be disturbed by the problems of diseases, starvation, deaths and wars. However, technologies cannot ensure us by themselves that they will be used to benefit human beings. We need see no further than nuclear weapons which are developed by people just in order to kill each other. Many other problems to some extent due to technologies such as reduction in forest area, extinction of species, water crisis and so on. Therefore, it is necessary to using ethics to guide the development of technology. For example, in 1997 the United Nations passed the Kyoto Protocol, which requires industrialized countries to cut emissions of greenhouse gases to below 1990 levels by 2008-2012. It proves that the society has used the ethic constrain the technology.


Turn our attention to social customs which is defined as usual or habitual practices, there are many factors influence them such as technologies, ethics, traditions, religion and so on. Technologies only play a part to determine social customs. For example, today when faced with parting, people don’t feel as sad as their ancestors did which due to the development of transport and communication technologies. However, many social customs don’t link with technologies. The Christmas comes from the religion and Thanksgiving Day is determined by American history and tradition. They cannot by related with the technologies. Therefore it is arbitrary to assert that customs determined by technologies.




To sum up, the development of technology promotes the progress of society and technologies influence the social customs and ethics greatly. However, the former cannot determine the latter. We should use the ethics to constrain the use of technology as well as make a better world through social customs and ethics.

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1# 师大菜菜

Ethic is the principles of right and wrong that are accepted by an individual or a social group. Does social customs and ethics are determined by technologies?
In my opinion, technologies what had been treated as the feature distinguished people from animals, actually influence social customs and ethics greatly. However, technologies cannot determine ethics, instead, it is social ethics ,that [url=]ensures [/url]
[w1] technology development will [url=]do good to [/url][w2] people. The social customs is determined by many factors rather than only by technologies.

To begin with, technologies play an important role in the development of social ethics. Some philosophers share the belief that person is
a kind of animal which can make tools and use them. Here making tools and using them are on behalf of technologies. From the definition of person in philosophy, we can know how important technology is for our society ethics. Without the technology of using fire, we may still be human-like apes rather persons, let alone creating the social ethics today. What is more, with the development of technologies, more and more new ethic issues emerge such as environmental protection and clone and so on. In this way, technologies also influence the social ethics greatly.

However, ethics whose purpose is pursuing the uppermost kindness should be used to guide the development of society rather than be determined by technologies. The ultimate purpose of people developing technologies is making a better society in which human beings all can enjoy happiness and will never be disturbed by the problems of diseases, starvation, deaths and wars. However, technologies cannot ensure us by themselves that they will be used to benefit human beings. We need see no further than nuclear weapons which are developed by people just to kill each other. [url=]Many other problems to some extent are due to technologies such as reduction in forest area, extinction of species, water crisis and so on.[/url][w3] Therefore, it is necessary to use ethics to guide the development of technology. For example, in 1997 the United Nations passed the Kyoto Protocol, which requires industrialized countries to cut emissions of greenhouse gases to below 1990 levels by 2008-2012. It proves that the society has used the ethic to constrain the technology.

Turn our attention to social customs which is defined as usual or habitual practices, there are many factors influencing them such as technologies, ethics, traditions, religions and so on. Technologies only play a part in determining social customs. For example, today when faced with parting, people don’t feel as sad as their ancestors did due to the development of transport and communication technologies. However, many social customs don’t link with technologies. The Christmas comes from the religion and Thanksgiving Day is determined by American history and tradition. They cannot be related to the technologies. Therefore it is arbitrary to assert that customs are determined by technologies.

To sum up, the development of technology promotes the progress of society and technologies influence the social customs and ethics greatly. However, the former cannot determine the latter. We should use the ethics to constrain the use of technology as well as making a better world through social customs and ethics.

有些语法错误,整体思路还是挺好的,思路很开阔。4分(第一次打分,还不太清楚评分标准)


[w1]强调句



[w2]好像没有do advantage to 这个词组



[w3]这句不通顺,不如直接写



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