李文韵的作文贴

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people work to earn a living （work是谓语）
if you ask me== I consider that
had better do sth ruozhicuowu...

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country.
    Foreign countries always seems mysterious to people. Some people consider that newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country. But I don’t agree with it.
    Foremost, there is one point we should make sure. That is, what stand for a country? The GDP? The prosperous of the big cities? The military power or the international influence? No, absolutely wrong. I think it’s the culture, the history and the custom that represent a country uniquely.
    Admittedly, newspapers and magazines are good ways to learn about a foreign country. We can easily catch the latest news and events in the foreign newspaper, such as the celebration of festivals or the great policy reform. We can also get much information of particular aspects through the specific magazines. However, I don’t think it’s the best way to learn because of the follow reasons.
     For one reason, things what are revealed by media are limited and are not definitely the truth. Limited by their space of pages, newspapers and magazines can’t introduce all the things in details. Besides, media such as newspapers and magazines have a great effect on the public. Sometimes, what will be published are selected by those who in charge of them for some reasons. It’s doubtful whether it’s the truth or not.
     For another reason, the articles and pictures have a distance to real life. You may be touched by a vivid description in a novel, but you’ll never really have the feelings unless you go there. In my point of view, the best way is to pay a visit to a foreign country. Take an example of Jiangnan in China, in the Yangtze River Delta. It’s a magic place with water. Innumerable prose and novels tell stories happened there, stories about the moist air, beautiful fog, and soft girls. But you’ll never enjoy it unless you walk along the on blue slate stone road and wonder in the deep laneway vanished in the fog. It’s so humid that you’ll feel yourself immersing in the water. You’ll in the peace and quiet, may be with little sentiment. You can only know a place like that.
     To sum up, I think newspapers and magazines are good ways to learn about a foreign country, but not the best one. The best way is, to see it with your eyes and feel it with your heart. Cause what the country is lies in the daily life of their people and the old buildings and streets.

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搂主啊，不是可以贴附件了吗，咋还是直接贴上来了聂...

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问下 为什么我下你的附件的时候出现乱码，打不开呢

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Foreign countries always seems mysterious to people（us）. Some people consider that newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country. But I don’t agree with it. 7 {4 m# ^$ Y- M: R+ I/ u
    Foremost, there is one point we should make sure. That is, what stand(s) for a country? The GDP? The prosperous of the（去掉） big cities? The military power or the international influence? No, absolutely wrong（太绝对了）. I think it’s the culture, the history and the custom that represent a country uniquely.（感觉这段和主题脱离）
    Admittedly, newspapers and magazines are good ways to learn about a foreign country. We can easily catch the latest news and events in the foreign（？） newspaper, such as the celebration of festivals or the great policy reform. We can also get much information of（about） particular aspects through the(some) specific magazines. However, I don’t think it’s the best way to learn because of the follow reasons.
5 P9 [0 Z+ }+ l9 K     For one reason, things what（that） are revealed by media are limited and are(can not definite the truth)not definitely the truth. Limited by their space of pages, newspapers and magazines can’t introduce all the things in details. Besides, media such as newspapers and magazines have a great effect on the public. Sometimes, what will be published are selected by those who in charge of them for some reasons. It’s doubtful whether it’s the truth or not.（内容有点单调）
2 Y- A" b" r4 q  c# \/ k) D: g     For another reason, the articles and pictures have a distance to (表达有点生硬)real life. You may be touched by a vivid description in a novel, but you’ll never really have the feelings unless you go there. In my point of view, the best way is to pay a visit to a foreign country. Take an example of Jiangnan in China, in the Yangtze River Delta. It’s a magic place with water. Innumerable prose and novels tell stories happened there, stories about the moist air, beautiful fog, and soft girls. But you’ll never enjoy it unless you walk along the on blue slate stone road and wonder in the deep laneway vanished in the fog. It’s so humid that you’ll feel yourself immersing in the water. You’ll (be) in the peace and quiet, may be with little sentiment. You can only know a place like that.(扩展的不错)
+ |& t/ E6 q" Q1 D. j; b8 s1 }' B     To sum up, I think newspapers and magazines are good ways to learn about a foreign country, but not the best one. The best way is, to see it with your eyes and feel it with your heart. Cause what the country is lies in the daily life of their people and the old buildings and streets.

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我的一点小意见。互相学习呢。 [matlab version]wendychueng7.30.doc (35 KB, 下载次数: 16)

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20# niunian 谢谢修改，我看你作文时也发现，我们审题不太一样好像。。。 不过言之有理就行吧

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21# matlab007
哎，每个人都说我中间那一段脱题了，我本来是想表达一般报纸杂志上了解到的information大都是关于经济政治等等，并不能代表一个国家，而要想真正了解一个国家，需要走进他的人民，踏上他的土地，结果我写着写着忘记前后呼应了。。。

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21# matlab007
至于江南那一段，实在是惭愧，表达能力有限，写成了那个样，这叫“心有余而力不足”呵呵 谢谢你的意见,我是想找个能够代表文化什么的，迪士尼好像和这些没什么关系，不过我那个是挺chiglish的~
另外，我看范文怎么人家有写题目呢？？到底需不需要写title啊？？

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.
Choosing a job with more vacation time but a low salary or a job with a high salary but less vacation time is always controversial. However, I absolutely agree with the statement:
a job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time. The reasons are as follows.

First, people can have more private time to enjoy their life and accompany their family. Many people, especially man, urge to get a good job ignoring whatever sacrifice. They usually overwork day and night despite of harming their health or engaged in social activities but have little time playing with their children. They may earn a high salary, however they will find that they miss too much in the end. Nowadays, many people know this tragedy and don’t want to follow it anymore. Consequently, they prefer a job with more vacation even if the salary is lower. In the leisure time, they can develop their habits, keep close with their family members, and life will have more fun.
Second, the productivity will be greatly developed when people deal with a job with more vacation time. Because people work time decreased, they will be more energetic and in a better mood so that less faults will be made and they will work more efficiently. Moreover, employer can use the money saved by reducing the salaries to hire more workers. It can create more benefits for the company.
In conclusion, I think it’s a good choice to choose a job with more vacation time but a low salary. However, I saw the news that, to confront the economic crisis, many people who have reached the age of retirement have to continue their work. I don’t think it’s a good phenomenon, and solutions should be carried out. I still believe that taking a job with more vacation time but a low salary will be a tendency in the whole world someday.



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这几天看了看作文的tips & examples 总结些小经验和大家分享一下，不对的也请指出来。。。
我一般只写300来字，看都有些考过G的同学洋洋洒洒就是500多，很是羡慕。上次写了400多，发现质量严重不行。看了好几篇范文都是320~380字，ets依旧给了满分，说明字数并不是越多越好。30min 保证 350字的高质量，就行了~~
tips： 好文章有两点： well- developed & well- organized
也就是要重点注意 progression & connection
其实独立作文无非就是三种结构，想要这上面创新、太大改变很困难，所以还是在于个人的思路，论证与例证的结合。。。 至于词汇的运用只能靠平时的积累了，没有别的方法。。。connection还可以速成一下，看看替换词什么。。。
我觉得T的作文最重要的是要说清楚，让别人明白你要表达的意思，当然前提是，你要有思想，并把你丰富的思想表达出来。

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LZ为什么你的作文我下下来是乱码，复制你帖子上的刀word上居然打不出字来···

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to improve the quality of the education in a country is to increase teachers' salaries.
      As a student in a normal university, I noticed that teachers’ image in the society is not as good as it before, and even turn worse day by day. Their social status also dropped. The reason is that good teachers are fewer and fewer. It makes me worried. Doubtlessly, teachers are crucial because the quality of education in a country depends on them. We can find that, nowadays the quality of the education is far beyond our expectation. The common phenomenon, especially in high school, is that teachers don’t pay much attention to the class in the school but force the students to come to their personal class outside the school. Is that a big deal with money? Of cause!
      Do teachers lack of money? Admittedly, teachers are not a group of people with high salaries. Lots of jobs offer higher salaries and the today’s inflation made life with a low salary much harder. Resembling a pedagogic young worker, want to buy easier said than done of a house. Increase teachers’ salaries is efficient way to improve teachers’ life standard and inspire them by material matters. But will this method lead a way to approach a good quality of the education, it is still questioning.
      As is known to all, teachers are considered to be not only knowledgeable, strict, but also noble and have virtues. In the old days, people respect teachers for these reasons. Consequently, the good characteristics should be remained and made glory. To increase teachers' salaries is an indirect way to improve the quality of the education in a country; however, I think the key point is about the ethic. Teachers should know that their career is lofty and can’t be replaced. They must decide to take the responsibility since they choose this career and not let a student down. Nothing can be the excuse for decrease the quality of education. Besides, to some greedy people, no matter how high the salaries you pay them, they won’t be satisfied.
      According to all the discussion above, the best way to improve the quality of the education in a country is to rebuild the ethics of teachers. It can fundamentally make things happen.

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8.5 作业
欢迎大家横批~
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