李文韵的作文贴

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还是贴一下。。。
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children (ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language.
With the rapid development of society, the requirement of human being’s qualities is increased, too. It’s controversial whether younger school children, ages between five and ten, should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language. Some parents and schools consider it as a waste of time. However, in my point of view it fits the social development and is necessary to do.
Doubtlessly, children need to learn the basic abilities such as doing math, using the language and know about the common senses about science and history. For this, it’s not good enough. No matter what the time it is, it’s better for people to be versatile than just have the basic abilities. Apart from these basic courses, studying art and music is good for children’s growing up. Scientist proved that, these kinds of cultivation of art and music can help develop children’s intelligence, which make them smarter and make their life amusing as well.
Moreover, during five to ten, most children are in primary school. Children have little burden of the courses and have plenty of time. It’s a good chance to learn something interesting, not for benefits, but for fun. These courses are funny and amazing which may nourish the rest of children’s life. It’s the right time to study them. When children grow older, their course will be more difficult and the amount of homework will increased. They have to occupy with their mainly course in order to get high scores in exams. They will have less time to appreciate some enjoyable things such as art and music, except they choose them as their major.
In conclusion, I think it’s essential to require the younger children to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language. And it is good for a country to form this phenomenon.
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这篇感觉写的不好，欢迎大家批评！
感觉用了好多 it‘s... that... there are... 太单调，句式缺少变化，希望大家能有好建议~~

也可以不改这篇，帮我改改29楼那一篇，多谢同学们~~
因为看机经，发现现在的题和185的差得越来越多了，所以写了一篇09机经里的题目。。。
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改完了。。。感觉整体还不错，就是立论有点不充分，如果展开的话，应该字数还能增加些~。。。加油哦

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o~!!
对
补充下，
你的观点有点不清晰，我觉得应该是每段没有一个比较总结的句子的关系。。。

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楼主名字跟我差一个字，呵呵~顶顶~

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35# 小囧字 谢谢~\(≧▽≦)/~啦啦啦

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33# kunter 谢谢你的修改，我看了李笑来的范文，很多写的很烂，确实不要学习。。。 字数的问题，我个人觉得360~420之间最好，我这篇的确写太短了，没发展好。。。共勉啦

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities.
Nowadays, it’s very common that college students take part-time jobs. It’s quite controversial. Some people think it’s a good phenomenon because taking part time job is good for students to know the society. However, others don’t agree with that. In my point of view, I think students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities. The reasons are as follows.

Foremost, the vital thing students have to do in the university is doing well on their study. Taking part jobs will occupy more or less time and energy. It will have a negative impact on their study. Maybe the burden of courses in the university is not heavy and students get much leisure time. Consequently, many of them just want to find a job to kill the time. As far as I concern, it’s not a wise choice. Students should to learn study by themselves, focus on their study and don’t waste time. So I don’t approve of taking part-time jobs.

Another reason is, in contrast with the opinion that taking part time job is good for students to know the society, I think students can’t get much benefits from it. Without particular skills and knowledge, most students don’t have abilities to take a serious job, such as a job related to their major. As a result, most part-time jobs are as servants or waiters. In our country, an appropriate system has not been built yet. There is no guarantee, like the lowest salary, for the people taking part-time jobs. Students who take part-time jobs are always exploited as cheap labors and are paid little money. Take my roommate for example, she always take part-time job in a supermarket on campus area. The job is not demanding, just giving a hand when there are too many people shopping. She was paid only 3yuan one hour. Jesus! She accepted this job! Perhaps she got some experiences as a sell girl and a little pocket money in addition; she totally ignored the value of the lost time. What a pity!
According to all the reasons above, I assert that Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities. College time is a period of golden time to study. We need to cherish it and make full use of it. Besides, there are plenty of better ways to figure out what the society is like, such as social practice activities and to be an internship. We can acquire useful information and experiences from them.
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by 只剩微笑。。。

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8.10作业
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries.
As the entertainment, movies and TV programs play an important role in our daily life. Some people consider that movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries. However, I don’t agree with that.
There are various of movies and TV programs. Some of them are about world-wide topics, such as the global issues or the revealing of human beings’ nature. Others are regional which pay more attention to the local culture, custom and history which have a big difference between countries. To the latter, many people like movies and TV programs made in their own country because these entertainments are close to their life. What’s more, sometimes they may meet culture bump or difficulties of understanding when watching the movies and programs made in other countries. Nevertheless, it doesn’t mean movies and programs made in other countries are not interesting. I love my country, but to be frank, I’m very curious about foreign countries. Thus, I regard movies and programs made in other countries more interesting and they can also help me to improve foreign language at the same time. Another verity is, some of our movies and programs seems more interesting to foreigners than to us. Take the movies made by the famous director ChuengYimou for example, they are more popular in the foreign countries than in our own. I guess the reason is, he always show the poverty and innocent of Chinese people which gain lots of interest of foreigners, but many Chinese don’t like it.
If people think Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries, why can the broadcast website such as YouTube so popular? In my point of view, the global communication is the current tendency of the world. People don’t think movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries. And that propel the rapid development of broadcast website. Domestic movies and programs can’t fulfill spectators’ requirement. They want to see more interesting movies and programs in other countries. You can easily find that the “love letter” show which made in Korean win a higher clicking rate than the domestic programs in some video portal websites. It’s a good credence that populace prefer to watch the foreign programs.
According to all the discussion above, I insist that movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are not more interesting than those made in other countries. In addition, watching foreign movies and programs may broaden our horizon and help us gain more knowledge.
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8.12  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If you do not make sure other people (especially influential people or your employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life.



Everyone, since they grow up, wants to realize the value of their life. In another words, to get successful. Some think that if you do not make sure other people know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life. But others hold the opposite opinion that it’s not essential to let anyone know how excellent you are. Just to increase one’s strengths and accomplishments and that’s enough. However, I agree with the former for the reasons as follows.

There is an old story in china about a swift steed and the Bole. The swift steed has been regarded as a common horse. It always did the hard work and has been treated badly. This situation isn’t change until it meets his Bole. Bole knows its value and makes its abilities useful. That’s adequate credence for the statement that if you do not make sure other people know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life. In my college, many guys in the students union like to show off. They often wander around the tutors and jump up and down in whatever activities. They are scorned by the portion of populace. However, they regard that as a way to let others know about their strengths and accomplishments. To some extent, I think it’s reasonable. If you haven’t done something that can present the abilities of yours, how can people believe you when you say you are a good leader or something?
Admittedly, we live in a society which is controlled by influential people; their views have a great impact on one’s development. Take the interview for example, you should let your employers know what a good staff you are. You need to make sure that they know about your strengths and accomplishments so that they will consider it’s worthwhile to hire you. Consequently, you achieve your own ideals. Otherwise, you cannot blame anyone for that nobody appreciates you.
According to all above, I absolutely insist that one should make sure to let other people know about the strengths and accomplishments in order to get successful.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their children’s future for them.


Parents always want their children have wonderful futures, that’s a verity all the time. It’s a widely controversial issue whether parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their children’s future for them. Some people think parents will make the right choice for children and could help children with their own abilities. Others hold the opposite opinion that children should make decision for their future by themselves. I agree with the latter for the reasons as follows.
As far as I concerned, to determine children’s future for them is the most irresponsible things that parents do. Some may think kids can’t look the whole picture of their life. Their capabilities are too limited to make the decision of future, so parents do it for them. However, parents often do this according to their own interests or unachieved dream, that’s not something children really want. Children should take the responsibility to choice the future road, even if they will be regret. One of my favorite poem is <the road not taken> which describe the feeling when someone choice their future. Maybe it’s difficult but we need to face it. We choose our road and that’s really our destiny.


Moreover, it happened a lot in the past that some parents not only determine their children’s future for them, but also regard children as their private property and want to be in charge of their life. It’s terrible. However, the relationship between parents and children has changed nowadays. More and more parents see their children as equal as they are. It’s a tendency that let the children be their own. In addition, children are more independent now. They have less restriction than ever before. This the time that rebellion and liberty is adored. Consequently, children should make their own choices about future.
Admittedly, parents have a crucial impact on children and can offer great help. With their social experiences, relationships, power and other resources, parents may give a push on the way of children’s development. I absolutely agree to accept parents’ help, on the basis that children decide their own future.

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42# wendychueng 抱歉这两天上班，刚回来改好了！   加油

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