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7.24（08.12.05NA)
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sports teach people lessons about life?

     If someone has been trained one kind of sports when he was young, he possibly knows how profound the lessons that sports teach him are. I was being trained swimming since I was a child. I was the youngest in our group and always be teased. I soon got to know that, unless I swim faster than others, I would be teased all the time. So I really worked hard. When others dropped out one by one, I insisted training for near ten years. Nobody can laugh at me any longer.
     I always reckon that sports help people build their personalities. Sports’ spirits are to win, to fight for a new record, to strive for a better score. We should run faster, jump higher, be stronger and have perseverance. These spirits are very important in our life. Sports teach us to be ambitious, to strive for our ideal life. Sometimes, when I watch the sports television broadcast, I was stimulant by the spirits of the athletes, it does inspire me a lot. When I face some hard situation in my life, I remind myself of such scenes and regain the strength.
     Another impact is that sports such as football and basketball cultivate people’s teamwork ability. On the field, one teammate must know how to communicate and get on well with the others. What’s more, one should learn to adapt to versatile conditions, which need him or her to be acute just as we need to be acute when dealing with things in daily life.
Finally, sports teach us that keeping good mentality on the success and failure is an important principle wherever on the sports ground or in life. We may win or lose on the sports ground, as the same way we may face prosperous time and adversity time in life. Both two conditions won’t last a long time.No matter what it is, we should keep good mentality cause life will go on. These are lessons sports teach us.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habit.


Unhealthy eating habit has a great bad impact on human beings. It leads to lots of diseases such as fatness or malnutrition.
Nowadays, more and more people are getting into unhealthy eating habit. For instants, Children like to pick the food they eat, too many people like to eat the fastfood and so on.


When thinking about what made these happened, some people think that Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habit. Because the food on the advertisement is so charming that people can’t help to eat. However, I don’t agree with that. Although the advertisements do mislead people a lot to some extent and it does cause the forming of unhealthy eating habit, it’s not the vital one.

If you ask me, I think the most important cause of unhealthy eating habit is failing to control one’s mouth. It’s about the self-control ability and the insistent. Imagine that, if there is a table of the most delicious dishes, how many people will stop eating after they’re full? Men are always defeated by their unlimited desires, such as appetite. Some have no abstinence, they eat whatever they want. Look at the fat ones, most of them enjoy sweet desert such as icecream or juice, they know they should stop like that if they want good figures but they just can’t. So those who fall into
unhealthy eating habit should blame themselves, not the advertising. The lifestyle is also a big cause of unhealthy eating habit. Some people get up late and don’t have breakfast regularly, some always stay up at night and drink coffee or eat snakes late at night. For these, advertising has nothing to blame.


To sum up, the key point is self-control ability. We all know a healthy body is fundamental for everything. It’s essential to form good eating habit for our health.
   

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2# wendychueng   7.27作业  欢迎路过的同学，帮忙批改一下，谢了~\(≧▽≦)/~啦啦啦

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不让我传附件。。。。额。。。自己顶。。。

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灌水发布罚款啊。。。嘿嘿

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哈哈，谢谢你帮我修改哈
你的再附件里面。

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2# wendychueng
改好了，欢迎交流

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7# frlender
多谢了，forbid 那个用法我给你改错了，不好意思啊 谢谢你给我改这么认真，能不能告诉我 那个批注是怎么弄的？

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7.29作业
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.


Nowadays, there is a wide phenomenon that people change jobs frequently, especially the graduates. Many companies complain about it because it does harm to the development of the companies. Some people think it’s not good to change jobs constantly, in their point of view, it’s better to find a good job and then love it, do it a life time. However, I don’t agree with that.
If you ask me, I think young people should try several different jobs to gain a various experiences. After the unstable period, they can finally figure out who they are and what they really want to do. At this time, one can start a long term career.
Decades before, people always do a kind of jobs and never change. For one reason, there is no social phenomenon to change jobs and they have no opportunities. For another, most people are conservative at that time, they want stable life and don’t want to take risk. However, times have changed. People work nowadays not only to earn a living, but also to achieve personal value.
Sometimes, change jobs may be a way to promote oneself. When the students just leave the school, they are completely fresh to the society. They have little experience and practice so they have to start with simple tasks and low position. Things happen all the time that they probably can’t find an ideal job which suit their major or fit with some personal wishes. They may make it slowly, step by step, to get close to their dreams, which is most students do exactly. That’s to say, they change jobs. By taking several different jobs, they can find what they are good at, what they enjoy doing and know themselves better. When it comes to this point, I think it’s time for them to take a long term career.
To conclude, young people had better to try several different jobs before they take a long term career.



每次都超时，挤不出字来，用不上高级词汇。。。郁闷啊，怎么就提高不呢？？？大家狠狠批啊

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谢谢修改~~

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大家觉得是不是还是有必要看看模板？
agree or disagree 一类文章 一正一反叙述是不是不太好？那要怎样呢

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Nowadays, there is a wide phenomenon that people change jobs frequently, especially the graduates. Many companies complain about it because it does harm to the development of the companies. Some people think it’s not good to change jobs constantly, in their point of view, it’s better to find a good job and then love it, do it a life time. However, I don’t agree with that.

If you ask me, 太过口语了吧？I think 这个也是口语化的句子，From my point of view是不是更好些young people should try several different jobs to gain a（去掉a） various experiences. After the unstable period, they can finally figure out who they are and what they really want to do. At this time, one can start a long term career. & {+ f7 D4 Q# _  ?4 E# |
Decades before, people always do a kind of jobs and never change. For one reason, there is no social phenomenon to change jobs and they have no opportunities. For another, most people are conservative at that time, they want stable life and don’t want to take risks. However, times have changed. People work nowadays not only to earn a living, but also to achieve personal value这句话好像没有谓语. ) B( ?3 s' o0 |5 J7 K* s4 z+ N( s
Sometimes, changeing jobs may be a way to promote oneself. When the students just leave the school, they are completely fresh to the society. They have little experience and practice so they have to start with simple tasks and low position. Things happen all the time that they probably can’t find an ideal job which suit their major or fit with some personal wishes. They may make it slowly, step by step, to get close to their dreams, which is most students do exactly. That’s to say, they change jobs. By taking several different jobs, they can find what they are good at, what they enjoy doing and know themselves better. When it comes to this point, I think it’s time for them to take a long term career.
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