issue63--欢迎拍文

fchenyanUID: 2804020

TOPIC: ISSUE63 - "To truly understand your own culture-no matter how you define it-requires personal knowledge of at least one other culture, one that is distinctly different from your own."
WORDS: 445
TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2010-07-25 19:41:05
Do people have to acquire personal knowledge of at least one other distinctly different culture from their own if they want to truly understand their own. It is true that just staying inside a signal culture keeps people from deeply understanding their own culture. Though personal knowledge of other culture may be in part, natural to it, radically, the result of interest of their own cultures.
To start with, a person who has no access to other culture which is distinctly different from his or her own has no sense of culture. That's because people might take everything they are accustomed as granted and subjectively consider that others act and think in the way the same to them. Although that point of view looks naive but it is rational. Since custom means the way to survive and the way the society is organized and the way it operation. Without any personal knowledge of other culture, people may pay little attention to the concept of culture and have no idea about what belongs to the categories of culture.

Personal knowledge of other cultures helps us understand our own. When we encounter people or messages from cultures distinctly different from our own, we always feel a cultural shock and we begin to have a clear sense of the definition of culture. With the increase of global network and the development of information science, we have more access to other cultures. Since there are enough opportunities to make us feel no shock at all, we begin to have tolerance toward cultures different from our own, at the same time the difference we find out provide us better understanding of our own culture.

However the basic factors help us to truly understand our own culture lies in our daily experience we undergo. That's because there are young people who has slight idea about their culture, more obvious in internationalized cities. They turn out to be more familiar to world famous bands of clothes and cars and makeup, but they know nothing cultural. May be they are growing up under circumstances that have got drift from traditional culture. But at the social level, those people have personal knowledge of many cultures other than their own but that scarcely helps them to gain a better understanding of their own no mention truly. So whether people can truly understand their own culture is not determined by personal knowledge of other culture. On the other People's experience and interest play the leading role.

In summary, personal knowledge of culture that is distinctly from their own helps them to truly understand their own, but basically, that depends on more on their experience and interest.

crazyjooUID: 2805124

大概是time attack模式，觉得组长大人这篇文章的思路论证过程看起来和以往有些不一样，而语言方面还是值得在下学习。
在下认为啊，既然是让步+否定，那么这个2端的让步是不是有点多了点，显得反客为主了。而关于自己的观点的阐述相比之下就显得比较仓促和草率。

迷失的鱼UID: 2850922

Do people have to acquire personal knowledge of at least one other distinctly different culture from their own if they want to truly understand their own. It is true that just staying inside a signal(single) culture keeps people from deeply understanding their own culture. Though personal knowledge of other culture may be in part, natural to it, radically, the result of interest of their own cultures.

To start with, a person who has no access to other culture which is distinctly different from his or her own has no sense of culture. That's because people might take everything they are accustomed as granted and subjectively consider that others act and think in the way the same to them. Although that point of view looks naive but it is rational. Since custom means the way to survive and the way the(in which) society is organized and the way it operation(operating). Without any personal knowledge of other culture, people may pay little attention to the concept of culture and have no idea about what belongs to the categories of culture.

Personal knowledge of other cultures helps us understand our own. When we encounter people or messages from cultures distinctly different from our own, we always feel a cultural shock and we begin to have a clear sense of the definition of culture. With the increase of global network and the development of information science, we have more access to other cultures. Since there are enough opportunities to make us feel no shock at all, we begin to have tolerance toward cultures different from our own, at the same time the difference we find out provide us better understanding of our own culture.

However the basic factors help us to truly understand our own culture lies in our daily experience we undergo. That's because there are young people who has slight idea about their culture, more obvious in internationalized cities. They turn out to be more familiar to world famous bands of clothes and cars and makeup, but they know nothing cultural. May be they are growing up under circumstances that have got drift from traditional culture. But at the social level, those people have personal knowledge of many cultures other than their own but that scarcely helps them to gain a better understanding of their own no mention truly. So whether people can truly understand their own culture is not determined by personal knowledge of other culture. On the other People's experience and interest play the leading role.

In summary, personal knowledge of culture that is distinctly from their own helps them to truly understand their own, but basically, that depends on more on their experience and interest.

你准备坚持你的说理论证了吗？这样会显得单薄一些我认为。
关联词。～～