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发表于 2010-8-7 21:55:14 |显示全部楼层

8月7日小野作文作文欢迎指正

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发表于 2010-8-8 12:29:01 |显示全部楼层

In a modern society, students have many activities in their universities live(life). The live（life）are(is)(life当生活不可数) more colorful in universities, which give students more choices to arrange their free time. So many students are willing to take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities to kill their spare time. Such part-time jobs may cost students’ much energy to fulfill assignment of jobs, which may make students transfer some attention into part-time jobs and disperse energy from their study. Therefore, some disagree with that statement students should not take part-time jobs in universities. However, others hold on opposite view for part-time jobs. From my point of view, I support students take some part-time jobs in universities. My reasons about such question（problem好些吧~） are as fellows:
To begin with, taking part-time jobs are good opportunities for students to expend their knowledge about live and enhance their skill out of studying. Students may taste many aspect of live though taking part-time jobs. For example, some students take salesmen in some big corporations in order to enhance their skill of communication and expression for some products when they are studying in universities. Some students may choose tutor as their part-time jobs to taste teaching career. In addition, taking part-time jobs is a good way for students to earn some money to satisfy their universities lives. So taking part-time jobs is a good way to make students gain more work experience skill (去掉)and knowledge.
Secondly, students take some part-time jobs are (taking some part-time jobs is a good way for students to arrange their spare time)good ways to arrange their spare time and gain much precious work experience in universities except from studying. As we known, many students have much time to spend on except from studying their courses. Some students have wasted their spare time to play network game, which make many students fall into game and waste their studying. And if students may try their best to spend their spare time to take part-time jobs, they could find their interested field, expand their horizon and gain much more work experience(上段好些说过了), which may encourage student to take much attention on their practical skill by part-time jobs and do much preparation for their future jobs. So taking part-time jobs may stimulate students to arrange their spare time to study other knowledge and make themselves more power instead of wasting time in universities.

However, there are many disadvantages for students who take part-time jobs in universities. For example, some part-time jobs are very heavy assignments for students to undertake, in particular, they have much studying assignment to do in universities. And some students must cost much energy to prepare their part-time jobs, which are out of question to disturb their normal studying lives. So it is very often for students to abandon their studying in universities because of part-time jobs. Therefore, such disadvantages are object in our universities coupled with part-time jobs.

From what has been discussed above, we may come to conclude that part-time jobs are very good opportunities for students in universities to enhance their practical skill and gain precious working experience which may help their future career. Students should take some part-time jobs to gain much valuable knowledge and work experience to enhance their personal capacity in universities. On the one hand, students may have much deeper understand about some knowledge that they study in universities courses when they take some part-time jobs, which would stimulate students to study hard in their universities ; on the other hand, students could use knowledge that they have gained from universities courses to solve practical question when they do some part-time jobs. Therefore, taking part-time jobs are very good opportunities to enhance students' practical capacity.

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额，我感觉语法错误有点多，结构有点混乱~
不过字数倒是足够了，而且例子都给出了细节，很好~
楼主加油！
另外，我的作文交晚了，不好意思啊~

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