Argue 91【六人行小组7.28】by 包

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91.The following appeared in an article in Supplements Today.

"Dieticians have long known that professional athletes who eat a lot of
nuts have higher levels of endurance than those who do not. Researchers
have recently discovered that the particular combination of vitamin N and
fiber found in some nuts provides a boost for those who participate in
strenuous physical activities daily. Both vitamin N and fiber supplements
are easily synthesized and widely available. As a result, all those who
participate in athletic activities will be able to increase their
endurance and win more games by taking vitamin N along with a fiber
supplement."

The argument indicates the conclusion that all those who participate in athletic activities will be able to increase their endurance and win more games by taking vitamin N along with a fiber supplement. To justify the conclusion, the speaker points out a discovery that professional athletes who eat a lot of nuts have higher levels of endurance than those who do not. The speaker also points out a recent discovery that the particular combination of vitamin N and fiber found in some nuts provides a boost for those who participate in strenuous physical activities daily. Moreover, both vitamin N and fiber supplements are easily synthesized widely available. However, this conclusion relies on some several dubious evidences, and therefore unpersuasive.

To begin with, although the particular combination of vitamin N and
fiber found in some nuts provides a boost for those who participate in
strenuous physical activities daily and it’s easy to obtain and synthesize vitamin N and fiber, the synthesized combination is probably not has the same effect as the combination in nuts. Even if the synthesized combination has the familiarly quality like nuts, it is entirely possible that people could not absorb it. Without accounting for possible differences between nuts and artificial combination, the argument’s conclusion that all those who participate in athletic activities will be able to increase their endurance and win more games by taking vitamin N along with a fiber supplement is indefensible.

Also, the conclusion relies on the assumption that the professional athletes have higher levels of endurance than those who do not is coursed of the intake of nuts. The author fails to take the individual differences into consideration. It is entirely possible the athletes own outstanding endurance because of the continuing training. Perhaps the professional athletes regularly eat certain health products to improve there body condition. Without exclude all the possible other situations, the arguments could not ensure us the conclusion that taking vitamin N along with a fiber supplement can help people who want improve their endurance.

In sum, the argument is poorly supported. To strengthen this conclusion, the author should provide more evidence that vitamin N and fiber can provide same effect as the combination in nuts. In addition, the concrete analysis of the reason why professional athletes have high endurance level should be supplied.

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The argument indicates the conclusion [delete 'the conclusion']that all those who participate in athletic activities will be able to increase their endurance and win more games by taking vitamin N along with a fiber supplement. To justify the conclusion, the speaker points out a discovery that professional athletes who eat a lot of nuts have higher levels of endurance than those who do not. The speaker also points out a recent discovery that the particular combination of vitamin N and fiber found in some nuts provides a boost for those who participate in strenuous physical activities daily. Moreover, both vitamin N and fiber supplements are easily synthesized widely available. However, this conclusion relies on some several dubious evidences, and therefore unpersuasive.

To begin with, although the particular combination of vitamin N and
fiber found in some nuts provides a boost for those who participate in
strenuous physical activities daily and it’s easy to obtain and synthesize vitamin N and fiber, the synthesized combination is probably not has [probably does not have]the same effect as the combination in nuts. Even if the synthesized combination has the familiarly [similar]quality like nuts, it is entirely possible that people could not absorb it. Without accounting for possible differences between nuts and artificial combination, the argument’s conclusion that all those who participate in athletic activities will be able to increase their endurance and win more games by taking vitamin N along with a fiber supplement is indefensible. [这一段写得好！]

Also, the conclusion relies on the assumption that the professional athletes have higher levels of endurance than those who do not is coursed of [caused by]the intake of nuts. The author fails to take the individual differences into consideration. It is entirely possible the athletes own outstanding endurance because of the continuing training. Perhaps the professional athletes regularly eat certain health products to improve there body condition. Without exclude all the possible other situations, the arguments could not ensure us the conclusion that taking vitamin N along with a fiber supplement can help people who want improve their endurance.[如果是我的话，可能这段会说成：Some athelets who take in nuts and have shown outstanding performance may get helped in other ways. It is widely known that people who have a habit A may also have a higher possibility to have another habit B. To put it in another way, it is possible that nut-eaters perfomed better not because of the nut in itself, but because that most nut-eaters are also milk-drinkers, or are chocholate-lovers, and the combinition of nuts and, say, milk or chocholate, and boosted their performance. ]

In sum, the argument is poorly supported. To strengthen this conclusion, the author should provide more evidence that vitamin N and fiber can provide same effect as the combination in nuts. In addition, the concrete analysis of the reason why professional athletes have high endurance level should be supplied. [arg.写得挺好，如果第二点可以更加简洁一点留出时间添加第三点就好了。我自己想也可以从这两点批驳：1. taking in Vn nutritions may not be a universal feasible solusion of nutrition enhancement for every athlet. Some people, with certain physical conditions, may not be fit for this treatment. 2. The statement has not specified how much Vn nutrition shall an athlet take everyday. Whether having too little or too much will bring in bad effects is unknown]