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200. Statistics collected from dentists indicate that three times more men than women faint while visiting the dentist. This evidence suggests that men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are. Thus, dentists who advertise to attract patients should target the male consumer and emphasize both the effectiveness of their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff to nervous or suffering patients.

In this argument, the speaker asserts that dentists should advertise to attract male patient in that men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are. In order to substantiate the opinion, the speaker shows the statistics collected from the dentists that men suffering three times than women faint during the operation. In addition, the advice that dentists should emphasize both their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff to nervous has been put forward. However, I can’t agree with the idea, a careful examination would reveal how groundless it is.

First of all, the author unfairly assumed men would be more likely to be distressed during dental work bears a relation to the statistic that they faint three times more than women. As we know, faint caused by many factors, the most chief may be a special kind of nerves, the difference of nerves structures between men and women could be the main respect lead to different rates of faint. In addition, distinct treatment is another cause. In traditional agreement, men are able to stand more pressure, which allows dentists operate in a relatively tough method, in the opposition, dentists will do with tender facing the women patients, this explains why Statistics collected from dentists indicate that three times more men than women faint while visiting the dentist.

Secondly, despite the high rate of faint for men has something to do with more chances of being distressed, the advertisement should not only aim to attract patients targeting the male consumer. With less possibilities of being faint, female consumer must be the main force of participants, because they would enjoy the whole course rather than tortured again and again by endless soreness. What’s more, dental clinics are able to provide more service about beautify people’s tooth to attract more consumers, in this condition, women are absolute the chief consumers.

Thirdly, common people won’t realize the various levels of their pains simply during the operation, thus, the reduce of pains should not be regarded as an aspect of propagating, which would even raise the fear of consumers, especially when it refers to the sensitive of their staff to nervous or suffering patients, it implies they often meet the situation dealing with the pains of patients and give rise to the doubt of dentist’s skills by patients.

To draw a conclusion, the dental clinic should take some new methods to advertise rather than utilizing the differences between the male and female consumers because the statistics are not persuasive and would mislead the consumers.