狠拍砖！！Issue153【六人行小组7.29】by Echo

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多谢帮我改作文的同学！请狠狠指正错误，多谢！语法和表达都存在很大问题~~
TOPIC: ISSUE153 - "Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively." WORDS: 409 TIME: 00:45:00 DATE: 2010/7/29 15:39:20

The speaker claims that students should have a spirit of skepticism during their study at school l,the speaker also concede that they should not accept all the knowledge their teacher taught them, but have their own way to question what they are taught .I agree with the author for most part,but I also have some skeptical spirit for the view.

Firstly, we should not question all the teacher's idea .It depends on what kind of area we are studying .If we are studying in the area that are well established and organized ,then it is not necessary to bring a certain skepticism in this area. Because in most time ,the skepticism of this kind of area is just because the student lacking knowledge of the theory. Secondly, there is no need to ask any ridiculous issues what the teacher taught us some common sense .This kind of question makes no sense and always made the teacher embarrassed and expose our ignorance .Real skepticism is based on tremendous research or at least having basic knowledge of the questioned area.

Then, I concede that proper skepticism is an effective way of learning. By question things ,we can strengthen our creativity and judgement .It can also help us widen our horizon and think deeper when come across a question. Rene Descartes is a philosopher who create the methodology skepticism ,he questioned everything . In his view ,only by this way can forced individuals to think .By using this method ,he create the philosophy idea "I think ,therefore I am." which is the motto of generations .Descartes’ example tells us that by question other theory,y ou can find your own way of learning.

Further more, skepticism can also bring people progress.Some of my classmates always wondering why their is no REAL architects in China.They made a conclusion by questioned the teachers and searched the internet: there are few people questioned the authority .The senior students only accepted the theory and the design method passively ,that makes Chinese students more like carpenters than designers .The great modern architect Le Corbusier make great revolution of architecture because of his creativity and skepticism ,he questioned his teacher's teaching method and created his own after traveling around the world. If Chinese student bring a certain skepticism to more areas ,they can make more progress than before.

To sum up, I mostly agree with the speaker's idea ,we should have the sprite to question the authority , but we should prepare well or already have the courage to hold our personal belief. Skepticism give us more courage to think in different ways ,and will truly lead us to get more progress.

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The speaker claims that students should have a spirit of skepticism during their study at school l(delete i),the speaker also concede that they should not accept all the knowledge their teacher taught them, but have their own way to question what they are taught .I agree with the author for (the) most part, but I also have some skeptical spirit for the view.

Firstly, we should not question all the teacher's ideas. It depends on what kind of area we are studying .If we are studying in the area that are well established and organized ,then it is not necessary to bring a certain skepticism in this (these area) area. Because in most (of the) time, the skepticism of this kind of area is just because the student lacking knowledge of the theory.能不能找个例子支撑，说服力不够。 Secondly, there is no need to ask any ridiculous issues what the teacher taught us some common sense .这个也很武断啊，很像镇压新思想的人说的话呢。我们可以说不要轻率地提出质疑，要自己充分论证之后提出才是负责任的This kind of question makes no sense and always made the teacher embarrassed and expose our ignorance .Real skepticism is based on tremendous research or at least having basic knowledge of the questioned area. 最后一句比较到位

Then, I concede that proper skepticism is an effective way of learning. By question things ,we can strengthen our creativity and judgement .It can also help us widen our horizon and think deeper when come across a question. Rene Descartes is a philosopher who create the methodology skepticism ,he questioned everything . In his view ,only by this way can forced individuals to think .By using this method ,he create the philosophy idea "I think ,therefore I am." which is the motto of generations .Descartes’ example tells us that by question other theory, you can find your own way of learning. 笛卡尔的例子还是有点泛泛，能不能用更精确一点的例子。

Further more, skepticism can also bring people progress. Some of my classmates always wondering why their is no REAL architects in China. 真正的建筑师勉强还有几个吧，没大师还行They made a conclusion by questioned the teachers and searched the internet: there are few people questioned the authority .The senior students only accepted the theory and the design method passively ,that makes Chinese students more like carpenters than designers .The great modern architect Le Corbusier make great revolution of architecture because of his creativity and skepticism ,he questioned his teacher's teaching method and created his own after traveling around the world. If Chinese student bring a certain skepticism to more areas ,they can make more progress than before. 还是科布的例子用得好啊

To sum up, I mostly agree with the speaker's idea ,we should have the sprite to question the authority , but we should prepare well or already have the courage to hold our personal belief. Skepticism give us more courage to think in different ways ,and will truly lead us to get more progress.
一开始有点武断了，后半篇有状态点。如果实在有一方面不知道怎么写，或许可以不写平衡观点，试试一边倒吧。恩，只是建议而已，可以尝试一下