高频 issue 130 求PP

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『修改i』As the globalization are developing further and deeper all over the world, children never grow up alone like their ancestor. ^Instead, while our children are growing physically and mentally, they are learning how to treat the world, the people, the nature and all the things they have faced or will face , that is what are called "socialized".
Issue 130 argue随机
题目：ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
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用时：00:45:00
日期：2010-7-30 下午 12:27:02


『原文』 As the globlalization are developing further and deeper all over the world, children never grow up alone like their ancersters. ^Instead, while our children are growing phisicaliy and mentally, they are learning how to treat the world, the people ,the nature and all the things they have faced or will face, that is what are called "socialized".

Whether socialization of children benefit children or not, we can never prevent the trend that more and more children will will be socialized, unwillingly or eagerly.What we can do is nothing but help our kids adopt to the j^ unstopable trend, prepare them swimming freely in the wave of the history.

The speaker worries, that we we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.The worries happens occasionally, when great changes shock the world.The Industry Revolution has witnessed the worry of that generation ,that whether their kids could make the good use the titanic machines that never exist on the earth.The Electronic Revolution
also has witnessed the worry of that generation ,that whether the kid
could lead the electronic technology to the light of human history.

Admittedly, we never learned to how deal with the new things before they come in front of us.As the earth never stop cricling , novel-new things are bound to appear. However, it is proved right by the evulotion
history of human , that we are continuously heading forward marjorly,even if we fall down sometimes.

There is a paradox in the speaker's assertion, that is the a better society.How can we judge whether a society is beeter or not before it come true?And before we conclude that one thing is right ,how can we make a decision to teach our children ,"this is right, do it ,honey" .Does it strengthen the speaker's worry?Definitely,not. The human history have telled us the answer.We ,human, not like machine,that only does the things ordered, the evoluion has taught us the most important skill to develop, the skill to corret our mistakes.The two world wars, detoryed billions of human lives and staff worth of billions of dollars, nearly bring the world to the hell.But the history telled
us , suffered these pain ,now we are more wise and intelletual than ever before, elevating the civilation of human being to a higher degree.


In sum, we should instill our kids with the value to correct mistakes, they have made and
gain a lesson to prevent the same tragedy from happen again.
Only by doing this can our future really percieve a better society.



   

Whether socialization of children benefit children or not, we can never prevent the trend that more and more children will be socialized, unwillingly or eagerly. What we can do is nothing but help our kids adapt to the unmodifiable trend, prepare them swimming freely in the wave of the history.

The speaker worries, that we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society. The worries happens occasionally, when great changes shock the world. The Industry Revolution has witnessed the worry of that generation ,that whether their kids could make the good use the titanic machines that never exist on the earth. The Electronic Revolution
also has witnessed the worry of that generation ,that whether the kid
could lead the electronic technology to the light of human history.

Admittedly, we never learned to how deal with the new things before they come in front of us. As the earth never stop spinning, novel-new things are bound to appear. However, it is proved right by the evolution history of human, that we are continuously heading forward marjorly, even if we fall down sometimes.

There is a paradox in the speaker's assertion, that is the
better society. How can we judge whether a society is better or not before it come true? And before we conclude that one thing is right ,how can we make a decision to teach our children ,"this is right, do it ,honey" .Does it strengthen the speaker's worry?
Definitely, not. The human history have told us the answer. We, human, not like machine, that only does the things ordered, the evolution has taught us the most important skill to develop, the skill to correct our mistakes. The two World Wars, have destroyed billions of human lives and staff worth of billions of dollars, nearly bring the world to the hell. But the history told us , suffered these pain ,now we are more wise and sophisticated than ever before, elevating the civilization of human being to a higher degree.


In sum, we should instill our kids with the value to correct mistakes, they have made and gain a lesson to prevent the same tragedy from happen again.
Only by doing this can our future really perceive a better society.


相对顺利，但觉的没什么竞争力。。

求PP谢谢

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求PP啊

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谢谢啊。。qiu PP

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谢谢。 5# loveyumei

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改成这样…我不说什么了…楼主你连word查错的耐心都没有。

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有些 错误 比如to那个 可加可不加。。。 7# 德芬郡奶油