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发表于 2010-8-3 23:33:42 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.




One day, a kid will be an growup like one day a bird will feed him own, lik
e one day the seeds will fly by the wind from the tree, like the ewe will eat the grass on the own. That might the original thinking why I insist that the child should do the household work as early as possible.

Meanwhile, let the kid learn to do some housework as soon as possible totally lease the pressure of the parents. According to the situation, I mean the econimic crisis, though we all know it's getting better, there are still more and more families have both of the parents at work. After a whole day exhausting work, they come back home find there is a sack of household tasks, it will bring them a great pressure again and made them exhausted. If the child could help their parents out maybe only with a few dishes, a simple soup, not only could make their parents feel a realse, it also could make the parents feel the love from their own children.

Furthmore, helping with the household tasks not only do a great benefit between the child and their parents, meanwhile their responsibility for the whole family. It makes them to feel responsible about the family and the people who they live with and beloved. When the kid is helping with the housework, they could learn that they live with the parents that might be one reason why they should share the housework rather than waited for the service from other family number. It is a great way to teach the child to be resiponsible no matter in the family or school or even their future career.

Last but not least, children should learn to live on their own one day, parents will get old, they may not able to help the cute kids with everything. Take me as an example, as a teenager myself, I started to went to boarding school when I was 12 years old, during the first year I stay at the boarding school which seemed to the hardest year that ever happened in my life. Being along in a place far away from home, there is no one you have ever might before, most importantly, I could not even wash my own cloth and make the bed. It is only because I am the single child, in my family there is no one who ask me to do any housework. The lonlyness of entering a totally new place, the firness of leaving home, the embrassment of being laughed by the peers, however, they helped me to get through it only by cleaning up my own mess. Magically as it is, I totally got into them after 2 weeks, after I learned how to down those things.

On the basis of the above discussion, I insist that the child should share the household tasks as early as possible.Word Count: 489
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发表于 2010-8-4 22:58:31 |只看该作者
Gaining happyness is more impotant thant making money in job.  类似于185里的53

As the world develops so fast in this period which is full of the desire for the reputations and riches, people are supposed to find some job that could make more money. On the contrary, we should see the things we could get behind the work, the happyness you gained from the work, the friend you make there, the personal development, maybe the true love you found when you are doing your job.
Making more money most of the times means making more effort and spend more time. However, when we are busing make money we may do not have enough time to spend with the family and friends, the biggest source and seemed forever source of the whole life. Take this as an example, I know a professor of our school who spend 16 hours in his work per day, he earned a large amount of money, besides offering the classes to the students, giving lectures to the engineer to be, he also doing a lot of EIA which is short for Enviromental Impact Assessment, out of campus, being the consultant of 3 companies. He has tied to his job, I wondered how long could he stay with his friends and his family, I admitted that he is one of my favorite teacher, however, I still do not understand the way he live. Has not he never regret that he did not see the first time his kids began to walk? Has he ever try to figure out how long he had not see his parents? Has he ever join the wedding of his co-work?
Admittedly, sometimes we call finding a job making a living. When I am threatening to the life since I do not have money to buy food, the only thing I can think about is how can I still live on, not to be happy in the rest few minites of my life. The world hunger basicly caused by poverty, if there is a choice for the hungry I think most of them will choose to take the job offer them more money, after that they could buy more food, the could rise the family. When I were young I got my first job as a salesman of the card, the money we earned supposed to donate to a NGO which work on changing the life and study condition of the children in the rural area, during the time, I had be laughed, be ignored, be scoffed since they thought I am too young to make money, however, once I thought about the child in Gansu could have the books I give for them they can drink the clean water in the well since me and my friends we are working here, I just carry on. You know when the first time came to Gansu province, give the students in The Sun Middle School the stationery myself, you may not believe it, it might be the happiest moment in my life. I know the hard work has all paying back.
According to the things I mentioned, I think make money and make yourself happy in the job is equally important. Still, self fulfillment, self improvemtn are also very important in the job .

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发表于 2010-8-5 22:31:54 |只看该作者
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children (ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language. 跟老题125有点点像

From the antique fisco to Claude Monet even the image draw on the poster, from the Wedding March to Micheal Jackson and the Avire who rock the whole wold, it is not difficult to draw  a conclusion that our life needs art and music. Being burdened with so many courses such as mathmatic, scientific things and foreign languages, the kids (allow me to call them) they need the time to take a breath, to take a rest and appreciate with the  heritage which is passed from generation to generation.

To begin with, I have to say that art and music have taken such an profound infulence in our daily life. And it is a very impotant part of the heiratage we got from our ansester. We are the one spend hunderds even thousands of dollars on listening to the concert of the idol, we are the one who falling love with the picture which has been showing in the gallery, we are the one being influenced by the colorful package then buy something we do not indeed need it, we are the one who appreciated the beautiful heratage from our ansester and do not have the ability to creat them. Why we are creazy about art and music around us meanwhile do not allow the kids to learn it?

Aside from the art and music's importance in life, leaning art and music could let the kids live in the well-being condition and developed fully. When the school children's lives is full of math, history class, their lives will lost plenty of fun, this will always be something missing, it turns out to be that leaning art and music will be the leisure time in their daily class. Addtionaly, learning music and art could inspire the imagination of the children and teach them to express their own feelings in the other way excpect saying and writing. What's more it can help the children develop a hobby in their young age. Playing piano and drawing picture is much better than seating in front of the computer and playing computer games.

Admittedly, the children in such a young age is fairly like the mud, which would easily be shaped, so they may do not have a specific aim and preferance about their future, then learn broadly could offer them more chances in their furture. We all envy the talent Morzat got, however, he just started his piano learning in a very young age. Throughing this effort, I assert that the children will understand the feelings and  of their parents.

I insist the children should learn not only mathmatic, science and history courses but also art and music not only because it is very important in our daily life, also because it brings plenty of benefit to the children’s up-growing.

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发表于 2010-8-5 22:38:14 |只看该作者
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children (ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language

The period, young children aged from 5 to 10 years old, is important for learning diverse knowledge and cultivating an all-around personality. when it turns the term art and music study, some hold the opinion that children are net necessarily to learn art and music in addition to math, science, history and language claim that learning art and music is not help children in developing future career and costs too much. However, I posit firmly that children should learn art and music at very young age, which helps children to broaden their minds, to express inner emotion, and to improve the academic performance.

The most important aspect for the art and music education is that children are able to understand themselves and the world from broad view. If children learn art and music at very young age, many diverse and beautiful masterpieces will be exposed in front of them. When they hear the piano concerto played by Chopin, see the peace and war drawn by Picasso, and watch Cinema Paradiso directed by Giuseppe Tornatore. They will acquire knowledge from different region of the world, all the art and music open different doors to see the whole world and things happened in their lives. Children, with the education of art and music, are inclined to think more deeply and comprehensive than others.

In addition, expressing emotion in proper way is the question all the human being would face in their lives, art and music provide diverse good outlets for expressing turbulent emotion. In the ancient times, our ancestors expressed their emotion by drawing pictures on the cave walls and playing music with drums. People acquired to use music and art from very early time, children nowadays need them as well. When children are happy, or sad, surprise or disappointed, they all need some ways to release. If the emotions are suppressed by themselves all the time, especially the negative emotion, they would get sick, or introverted, prefer not to connect with others. Moreover, the music and art help the children to learn their own emotions and train them to keep mental health.

Furthermore learning art and music is helpful to improve the academic performance, because art and music are good ways to relax after the tiring study. Playing piano after doing the homework is enjoyable; this activity provides calm and sooth to children's lives. And the philosophy behind playing music or drawing pictures teaches children the importance to handle complex things ordered. The study is the same way. Children would do better if they are trained by music and art.

In conclusion, I believe studying art and music in early age can be nothing but beneficial for children. So I encourage children study art and music.

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The period, young children aged from 5 to 10 years old, is important for learning diverse knowledge and cultivating an all-around personality. (漂亮)when it turns to the term art and music study, some hold the opinion that children are net necessarily to learn art and music in addition to math, science, history and language claim that learning art and music is not helping children in developing future career and costs too much. However, I posit firmly that children should learn art and music at very young age, which helps children to broaden their minds, to express inner emotions, and to improve the academic performance.
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The most important aspect for the art and music education is that children are able to understand themselves and the world from broad view. If children learn art and music at very young age, many diverse and beautiful masterpieces will be exposed in front of them. When they hear the piano concerto played by Chopin, see the peace and war drawn by Picasso, and watch Cinema Paradiso directed by Giuseppe Tornatore. They will acquire knowledge from different region of the world, all the art and music open different doors to see the whole world and things happened in their lives. Children, with the education of art and music, are inclined to think more deeply and comprehensive than others.. B1 G! w  i% E

In addition, expressing emotion in proper way is the question all the human being would face in their lives, art and music provide diverse good outlets for expressing turbulent emotion. In the ancient times, our ancestors expressed their emotion by drawing pictures on the cave walls and playing music with drums. People acquired to use music and art from very early time, children nowadays need them as well. When children are happy, or sad, surprise or disappointed, they all need some ways to release. If the emotions are suppressed by themselves all the time, especially the negative emotion, they would get sick, or introverted, prefer not to connect with others. Moreover, the music and art help the children to learn their own emotions and train them to keep mental health.1 {5 N0 E3 M" Z3 W
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Furthermore learning art and music is helpful to improve the academic performance, because art and music are good ways to relax after the tiring study. Playing piano after doing the homework is enjoyable; this activity provides calm and sooth to children's lives. And the philosophy behind playing music or drawing pictures teaches children the importance to handle complex things ordered. The study is the same way. Children would do better if they are trained by music and art.

In conclusion, I believe studying art and music in early age can be nothing but beneficial for children. So I encourage children study art and music.
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