issue208 请高人指点 这种思路行吗

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写完后发现与各大提纲 范文思路都不一样 慌啊 是不是跑题了？
看到很多人写的是人不可貌相 而且着重讲了衣着不能反映思想
可能是我lie to me 看多了 我觉得行为肯定能反映思想
就没把这件展开讲，，，请高手指点指点这样行吗

208"The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."

I endorse the first half of writer's argument that he way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. As to the second half of the argument, it is more exact to conclude that you can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of the majority of its people, not all people.

To illustrate my opinion, first, let me make a deep analysis on the appearance and behavior of a person. The way people look, dress and act is an honest reflection of their attitudes and interests. Though these relationships are difficult to identify by ordinary people, psychologists can easily read a person’s mind through his behavior. Moreover, behind the attitudes and interests is a person's view of value: a general view on goodness and evil, right and wrong and what a person should do or not. Therefore, directly speaking, it is a person's view of value that dominates his exterior and behavior in society. For instance, in the supermarket, customers proactively wait in a line for checkout because each of them has the value of justice. Also, the super models always keep slender figure since they judge slim figure as charming.

Based on the inference above, the writer's argument about learning a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people can be translated into learning a society's ideas and values through the value of its people.

In my opinion, on the occasion that a society can develop speedy, the value of citizen is in accord with the value of the whole society to a large extent. With the development of the material life, the values of society gradually accumulate into cultures and traditions. Since growing up in society, a person's values are greatly edified and influenced by the cultures, traditions and ideas of the society and finally established through social practice. For that matter, most of citizens' values are in accord with the society' values. Moreover, even though in the process of socialization, a man's values change or contort due to particular personal experience. Society will correct and justify the distorted values through education, law and public opinions so that a man's value could always in keep with society's ideas and values. Therefore, generally speaking, it is practical to learn the ideas and values of a society through the behavior and appearance of citizens.

However, the method is not applicable on the few unique people who hold the different values from the common values of the society such as the robbers, gang members, and madmen. Perhaps these people have a miserable growing experience or living a bitter life that make them oppose the society's value. For example, a boy who had grown up in a family of domestic violence killed his father at 18. We should not infer the society's value as violence by observing the boy's behavior because they are special cases that cannot represent that value of the whole society.

To sum up, the behavior and appearance reflect a person's value. Since the values of an individual are in accordance with the ideas and values of a society in most cases, we can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of most of its people.

还有哦 我想请教一下
这个issue 破题
看到有范文是这么写的
1．        穿着反映出一个国家的审美观点；
2．        一个国家价值观的变化，往往直接体现在人们的穿着上；
3．        有一些情况下，往往需要更深入的理解表面以外的东西才能了解一个国家的根基，比如道德观念
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这样破题也行吗  他没有提到行为诶。。。
困惑

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