Issue180，法律和道德，这么热的题目感觉一点都不好写= =！

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TOPIC: ISSUE180 - "Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system because moral behavior cannot be legislated."
WORDS: 346
TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2010-8-5 13:19:56

In this era, social and technological changes leading to the variety of ideas and behaviors, and consequently bring about the complex problems in modern society. I agree with the speaker's claim that many of these problems cannot be solved by present laws, however, the speaker put the laws and morality into two opposite positions, which I venture to disagree with. My firmly held view is that the laws and morality should be combined into a unified and integrated whole which guides our daily behaviors.

In the first place, I must concede that many problem of modern society cannot be solved by present laws since the laws are limited and our behaviors are complicated. Some of these behaviors, with one's affection to the society, are aim to help other people, while they might violate the laws at the same time. For example, the adoption of orphans has being a controversial issue in China for a long time. In same under-developed areas in China, homeless children lack the basic care due to their parents' abandonments or family's accidents. For the sake of helping these children, some warm-hearted people adopt these children without the legal adoption process. Knowing the fact that the homeless children living in these new families happily, we should still judge these kind people with the “justice of law”? It is a dilemma between the laws and morality.

However, in my view, the problem between laws and morality are caused by the faultiness of our legal system. The legislative body cannot foretell all the changes in modern society, and therefore, considering the social development in the field of politics, economy, science and technology, we should admit the existing of the flaws in our laws enacted by legislative body many years ago. The way to solve this question can be amending the laws and enacting certain new laws. For instance, China practiced the civil mediation process in the courts which can be taken as the intervention of morality in the legal process. Consider, the laws can also be flexible while dealing various cases by mediation, in this way, we judge a behavior by morality primarily, and the process is actually a part of law, therefore, moral behaviors absolutely can be legislated.

To sum up, I’m agree with the speaker’s first half of the statement the many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws, and then the speaker attribute this situation to the assumption that moral behavior cannot be legislated which I venture to disagree with. I believe that the moral behaviors can be legislated, and moreover, laws and morality complement each other. Under certain circumstances especially those severe crimes, we use laws as compelling rules, conversely, on other occasions like civil lawsuits, it is sagacious to introduce morality. In short, I find the speaker’s conclusion unilateral.

GlastiumUID: 2638821

TOPIC: ISSUE180 - "Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system because moral behavior cannot be legislated."
WORDS: 346
TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2010-8-5 13:19:56

In this era, social and technological changes leading to the variety of ideas and behaviors, and consequently bring about the complex problems in modern society. I agree with the speaker's claim that many of these problems cannot be solved by present laws, however, the speaker put the laws and morality into two opposite positions, which I venture to disagree with. My firmly held view is that the laws and morality should be combined into a unified and integrated whole which guides our daily behaviors.『这个view有点……不切题？你是想支持这个观点还是否定这个观点啊……，你下面又写morality和laws都conflict了，怎么还能合成整体啊囧，莫非你的意思是要兼顾考虑laws和morality?不过这个跟题目也没啥关系吧』

In the first place, I must concede that many problem of modern society cannot be solved by present laws since the laws are limited and our behaviors are complicated. Some of these behaviors, with one's affection to the society, are aim『ed？』 to help other people, while they might violate the laws at the same time. For example, the adoption of orphans has being a controversial issue in China for a long time. In same under-developed『呃under-developed是这个意思吗，我不太知道囧』 areas in China, homeless children lack the basic care due to their parents' abandonments or family's accidents. For the sake of helping these children『这句话感觉读起来超囧』, some warm-hearted people adopt these children without the legal adoption process. Knowing the fact that the homeless children living in these new families happily, we should still judge these kind people with the “justice of law”? It is a dilemma between the laws and morality.
『放在这里好了……下一段的第一句刚开始真是很让人无法理解， 因为没有明确的提出这种困局的原因是因为法律的滞后，只是说到“不足”，然而这种“不足”无法覆盖掉上面一段的事实陈述啊……反正感觉有点乱，不然试试看两段混在一起写，一开场就指出这是滞后的不足，然后举个”正面例子，反面例子，改进“这样』
However, in my view, the problem between laws and morality are caused by the faultiness of our legal system. The legislative body cannot foretell all the changes in modern society, and therefore, considering the social development in the field of politics, economy, science and technology, we should admit the existing of the flaws in our laws enacted by legislative body many years ago. The way to solve this question can be amending the laws and enacting certain new laws. For instance, China practiced the civil mediation process in the courts which can be taken as the intervention of morality in the legal process. Consider『同学少了宾语……还是多了逗号囧？』, the laws can also be flexible while dealing various cases by mediation, in this way, we judge a behavior by morality primarily, and the process is actually a part of law, therefore, moral behaviors absolutely can be legislated.『我不知道跟上一句是不是有点重复……好像讲的是同一件事情吧……』

To sum up, I’m『agree是动词……』 agree with the speaker’s first half of the statement 『加一个that吧……其实我也经常不爱加that囧……』the many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws, and then the speaker attribute this situation to the assumption that moral behavior cannot be legislated which I venture to disagree with.『是不是废话有点多囧……』 I believe that the moral behaviors can be legislated, and moreover, laws and morality complement each other. Under certain circumstances『加个逗号？』 especially those severe crimes, we use laws as compelling rules, conversely, on other occasions like civil lawsuits, it is sagacious to introduce morality. In short, I find the speaker’s conclusion unilateral.

嗯，总体...还..嗯怎么说呢……看懂了。 好像有点小混乱。其他应该还好……第二段的例子不够detailed……有点好像让人感觉瞎编的，可以多写一点。

of course附带上自己的文链，感谢！https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1134479-1-1.html （只要能看懂就好了，尽量把看不懂的句子挑出来吧XD谢了）

shadow1987UID: 2605840

2# Glastium

首先感谢修改，我会在原文基础上做一些记录和讨论。

TOPIC: ISSUE180 - "Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system because moral behavior cannot be legislated."
WORDS: 346
TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2010-8-5 13:19:56

In this era, social and technological changes leading to the variety of ideas and behaviors, and consequently bring about the complex problems in modern society. I agree with the speaker's claim that many of these problems cannot be solved by present laws, however, the speaker put the laws and morality into two opposite positions, which I venture to disagree with. My firmly held view is that the laws and morality should be combined into a unified and integrated whole which guides our daily behaviors.『这个view有点……不切题？你是想支持这个观点还是否定这个观点啊……，你下面又写morality和laws都conflict了，怎么还能合成整体啊囧，莫非你的意思是要兼顾考虑laws和morality?不过这个跟题目也没啥关系吧』1:这里我保留意见：首先，前面我已经qualify了题目，认为前半句正确，后半句我反对，然后最后立论说我的观点，即他们不应该是冲突的，他们应该是相辅相成的。和后面的冲突问题可能是有一些，说明我还没表述清楚，我认为冲突的存在是由于法律不健全引起的，这并不代表法律不能健全，法律和道德不能相辅相成。

In the first place, I must concede that many problem of modern society cannot be solved by present laws since the laws are limited and our behaviors are complicated. Some of these behaviors, with one's affection to the society, are aim『ed？』 to help other people, while they might violate the laws at the same time. For example, the adoption of orphans has being a controversial issue in China for a long time. In same under-developed『呃under-developed是这个意思吗，我不太知道囧』2：落后的地区，有什么疑问？可以表达这个说法的词组有less-developed region; relative backward area;  areas in China, homeless children lack the basic care due to their parents' abandonments or family's accidents. For the sake of helping these children『这句话感觉读起来超囧』, some warm-hearted people adopt these children without the legal adoption process. Knowing the fact that the homeless children living in these new families happily, we should still judge these kind people with the “justice of law”? It is a dilemma between the laws and morality.
『放在这里好了……下一段的第一句刚开始真是很让人无法理解， 因为没有明确的提出这种困局的原因是因为法律的滞后，只是说到“不足”，然而这种“不足”无法覆盖掉上面一段的事实陈述啊……反正感觉有点乱，不然试试看两段混在一起写，一开场就指出这是滞后的不足，然后举个”正面例子，反面例子，改进“这样』3:嗯，我concussion就应该直接点出问题的产生是由于法律的不健全而不是法律和道德的冲突了，这里就是我表述不清楚的地方

However, in my view, the problem between laws and morality are caused by the faultiness of our legal system. The legislative body cannot foretell all the changes in modern society, and therefore, considering the social development in the field of politics, economy, science and technology, we should admit the existing of the flaws in our laws enacted by legislative body many years ago. The way to solve this question can be amending the laws and enacting certain new laws. For instance, China practiced the civil mediation process in the courts which can be taken as the intervention of morality in the legal process. Consider『同学少了宾语……还是多了逗号囧？』4：这种表达北美范文里面有,具体哪一篇忘了，你可以参考一下。 the laws can also be flexible while dealing various cases by mediation, in this way, we judge a behavior by morality primarily, and the process is actually a part of law, therefore, moral behaviors absolutely can be legislated.『我不知道跟上一句是不是有点重复……好像讲的是同一件事情吧……』5：写的时候就觉得有些循环论述，哎，这不是没话说了嘛

To sum up, I’m『agree是动词……』6：失误鸟 agree with the speaker’s first half of the statement 『加一个that吧……其实我也经常不爱加that囧……』the many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws, and then the speaker attribute this situation to the assumption that moral behavior cannot be legislated which I venture to disagree with.『是不是废话有点多囧……』 I believe that the moral behaviors can be legislated, and moreover, laws and morality complement each other. Under certain circumstances『加个逗号？』 especially those severe crimes, we use laws as compelling rules, conversely, on other occasions like civil lawsuits, it is sagacious to introduce morality. In short, I find the speaker’s conclusion unilateral.

嗯，总体...还..嗯怎么说呢……看懂了。 好像有点小混乱。其他应该还好……第二段的例子不够detailed……有点好像让人感觉瞎编的，可以多写一点。

of course附带上自己的文链，感谢！https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1134479-1-1.html （只要能看懂就好了，尽量把看不懂的句子挑出来吧XD谢了）

再次感谢修改，因为今天还要做模考，我晚些时候去改你的文章吧^o^