高频issue 144及总结提纲

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题目：ISSUE144 - "It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."

*a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.
字数：377
用时：00:45:00
日期：2010-8-6 上午 11:46:27

【i原文】The past thousands of yeas have witnessed the development of society of human and splendid culture, which
just like a wonderful garden adds to the scenery of our mother, Earth. There is no doubt that one of the beautiful flowers em^ in the garden is the art, which provides lasting value to our society.

In recent years, some voice tries to contribute all the lasting value of art to the artist, but not the critic. However, it is cooperation of artists and critics that make up^ the majority of art and promotes the development of art.

Admittedly, in restropect of history of music, sometimes critique may result in bad^ influence to the artist, as Mozata's experience tells us. In the early career of Mozata, because of the behavior and style of composition, which advocates the freedom and merit of pariahs,
being not consistent with the major stream of Europe, especially in Veyema, the critic pay a lot od attention to find the flaws of his music, which impeding the life and growth of
vainguard of music. When the forward trend of art ,.

However, except the obstacle, the power of critics, also offer forward impulse to the artist and the art. Because of the distractive feature of art, the value of art are hardly to gain prevailance in the public, just by the effort of the artists.It is the critics, that reveal the value of art and promote the propagation of art. Back into the Enlighten age, it is impossible to imagine without effect of the accounting^ of endless unknown critics, the art work rinse the soul of majority of that society.Otherwise,perhaps only the elites of that age could the enjoy the value of art.It is the contribution of critics, act as the eye of the public, reveal the hidden value of the art, thus, guanranteeing the value of art continuously spreading from the elite to the common, from the past to the present, even the future.

In addition, as the development of society, technoloy provides us with more and more time and choice. Nowadays, people mostly act as not only one roles.
So are the artists and critics. The deveopment blurring the boundaries of the two career. Their interrelationship becomes hard to explain. sometimes, one old



提纲：
1背景
2restate +观点
3让步，critic对aritist，value的负面影响
4critic对artist，lasting value的正面影响
5critic 与artisit的相互作用
6总结


  【i修改】The past thousands of years have witnessed the development of society of human and splendid culture, which
just like a wonderful garden adds to the scenery of our mother, Earth. There is no doubt that one of the most beautiful flowers in the garden is the art, which provides lasting value to our society.

In recent years, some voice tries to contribute all the lasting value of art to the artist, but not the critic. However, it is cooperation of artists and critics that make up^ the majority of art and promotes the development of art.

Admittedly, in retrospect of history of music, sometimes critique may result in bad^ influence to the artist, as Mozart's experience tells us. In the early career of Mozart, because of the behavior and style of composition, which advocates the freedom and merit of pariahs,
being not consistent with the major stream of Europe, especially in Vienna, the critic pay a lot of attention to find the flaws of his music, which impeding the life and growth of the vanguard of music. Confronting the forward trend of art, the critics representative for the old force, may set barriers to the lasting of the value of the art.

However, except the obstacle, the power of critics, also offer forward impulse to the artist and the art. Because of the distractive feature of art, the value of art is hardly to gain prevalence in the public, just by the effort of the artists. It is the critics that reveal the value of art and promote the propagation of art. Back into the Enlighten age, it is impossible to imagine without effect of the accounting^ of endless unknown critics, the art work rinse the soul of majority of that society. Otherwise, perhaps only the elites of that age could the enjoy the value of art. It is the contribution of critics, act as the eye of the public, reveal the hidden value of the art, thus, guaranteeing the value of art continuously spreading from the elite to the common, from the past to the present, even the future.

In addition, as the development of society, technology provides us with more and more time and choice. Nowadays, people mostly act as not only one role. So are the artists and critics. The development of society blurs the boundaries of the two careers. Their interrelationship becomes hard to explain. Sometimes, one wonderful critique may come out as a great and profound artwork, by revealing the hidden value of the original artwork, at same time, creating new value. And artists, by the feedback of critics, are able to ameliorate their work better, gaining better growth.

In sum, considering of the complexity of the relation of artists and critics, especially in the new century, it is hard to clarify the contribution of the lasting value of art of artists and critics in an simple sentence. Just we enjoy the light of the nature in a whole day, despite it is directly from the sun in the day, or from the moon by reflecting the sunlight. Just enjoy it. （521）





思考很久，中间也停了几次（记得点题！）（a某人35m就可以打600+）

还有 没几天了。。要全力以赴！！！

相互each other, mutual, reciprocal
相互关系 correlation correlativity interrelation mutuality
相互影响interacting
相互作用coactions interaction interactivity reciprocity

   

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The past thousands of years have witnessed the development of society of human and splendid culture, which
just like a wonderful garden adds to the scenery of our mother, Earth. （语法错误，双谓语。）There is no doubt that one of the most beautiful flowers in the garden is the art, which provides lasting value to our society.（好像跟题目无关一点啊。。。）

In recent years, some voice tries to contribute（attribute） all the lasting value of art to the artist, but not（rather than) the critic. However, it is cooperation of artists and critics that make(makes) up^ the majority of art and promotes the development of art. (什么叫makes up the majority of art?我觉得不妥，而且题目是问什么给了艺术lasting value）

Admittedly, in retrospect of history of music, sometimes critique may result in bad^ influence to the artist, as Mozart's experience tells us. In the early career of Mozart, because of the behavior and style of composition, which advocates the freedom and merit of pariahs,
being not consistent with the major stream of Europe, especially in Vienna, the critic pay a lot of attention to（这里pay attention to 后面应该用名词或动名词） find the flaws of his music, which impeding（impedes） the life and growth of the vanguard of music. Confronting the forward（最好去掉吧） trend of art, the critics representative for （of）the old force, may set barriers to the lasting of the value of the art.（the lasting of value 和lasting value 不一样哦。。）

However, except the obstacle, the power of critics（主语不妥，最好是critics，而且要注意主谓一致））, also offer forward（我觉得forward不用来表示形容词，一般用作副词） impulse to the artist and the art. Because of the distractive（distinctive） feature of art, the value of art is（应该是can hardly) hardly to gain prevalence(?) in the (去掉the）public, just by the effort of the artists. It is the critics that reveal the value of art and promote the propagation of art. Back into the Enlighten age（？）, it is impossible to imagine without effect of the accounting^ of endless unknown critics,（不通啊。。） the art work rinse the soul of majority of that society. Otherwise, perhaps only the elites of that age could the enjoy the value of art. It is the contribution of critics（去掉the contribution of）, （who ）act as the eye of the public, reveal the hidden value of the art, thus, guaranteeing the value of art continuously （value 不能spread吧）spreading from the elite to the common, from the past to the present, even the future.

In addition, as the development of society, technology provides us with more and more time and choice. Nowadays, people mostly act as not only one role. So are the artists and critics. The development of society blurs the boundaries of the two careers. Their interrelationship（没有ship吧） becomes hard to explain. Sometimes, one wonderful critique may come out as a great and profound artwork, by revealing the hidden value of the original artwork, at same time, creating new value. And artists, by the feedback of critics, are able to ameliorate their work better, gaining better growth.

In sum, considering of the complexity of the relation of（between） artists and critics, especially in the new century, it is hard to clarify the contribution of the lasting value of art of artists and critics in an simple sentence. Just we enjoy the light of the nature in a whole day, despite it is directly from the sun in the day, or from the moon by reflecting the sunlight. Just enjoy it. （521）
你前面说是cooperation，后面就应该着重描写cooperation，不要偏题啊

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