【开个临时的作文修改铺】再强调一遍求修改作文要附上自己的提纲+原题目~~~~~~~~~

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今天第一篇
改完短消息通知

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今天第二篇
改完短消息通知

8.9号就改这两篇了。
谢谢大家，请明天同一时间继续支持。。。

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非常感谢版主的意见！谢谢！也祝版主在国外的生活顺利！

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恩，好的~~那明天俺再来看~~谢谢楼主~

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:)话说。。LZ可不要忘了我啊。。。。。

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https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1136522-1-1.html

算是新人吧。。。今天是第一次在GTER发帖。。。求助。。。

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又来麻烦lz了……
18号考试  岌岌可危了……
不知道有没有不重复改同一个人的要求什么的 有的话忽略我的就好了
先附上了 辛苦lz

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谢谢LZ

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LZ啊 群众呼唤你。。。再发一篇哈~等LZ归来。。
TOPIC: ISSUE17 - "There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."
1）        我们应当自觉遵守维护法律秩序，这样一方面能够维护社会的秩序，保证社会稳定发展，另一方面通过约束他人保障公民自己的权利例如交通法规
2）        但是法律的公正或不公正是人为主观的论断，每个人对法德理解不同，一条法律在不同人眼里可能即是公平又是不公平的，如果人们都不遵守其人为不公平的法律 社会的治安和稳定将受到威胁，法律自燃就失去仲裁
3）        如果绝大部分人都对某一条款产生质疑，并不愿意遵守它，人们应当采取合法手段告之政府，政府立法机关则有必要重新分析审定，必要时候修改法律 从而真正的保障人民权益

WORDS: 505          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2010-8-11 0:39:30

With the development of society economy, law system has been improved and completed at a rapid rate. Laws in every country is imperative for everyone without discrimination in races, age, and any other elements. Once a person was born in a country, he would become a citizen of the country. When he grew into an adult, he should conform all the responsibilities and act his rights regulated in the law. Some people consider that it is a wise way to obey just law and disobey those so called 'unjust' laws. Does it tell the truth? From my perspective, it seems to be somewhat unilateral and reasons lie in the following aspects.

We, as country citizens, have no choices but to conform the laws being obeying by others. Laws is actually a form of evolvement of contemporary society. Government signed laws after quite serious contemplations so that the laws are pragmatic for most citizens, meanwhile, officers regulated numerous rights for them as well. Under that circumstance, we have both responsibilities and rights that are in tight connections. If we always act the rights, we may also take the responsibilities in return. What is more important,  if all citizens obey laws positively, society order would be steady as they all yearn for. The conformity would also offer an opportunity for the country to thrive since a country cannot be prosper without an ordered environment.

To be more serious, just and unjust actually are subjective conclusion. Different contexts of people, such as education, vacation, age, view of value, exert diverse understanding of one specific law.  If one piece of law is regarded just and essential regulation in one's eyes, while another person considers it as ridicule that should be never obeyed, everyone only conform the law that they acknowledge themselves, the situation would turn out to be a chaotic order in society. Eventually laws can never be laws and it will be deprived its efficiency and the power of sanction. If that has took place, crimes may be just behaviors and jus can transfer to evil, that occurrence is the last one we would imagine.

Admittedly, laws are regulated by humans and humans can, to some extent, make mistakes. In that case, laws may also share the chance to be wrong. If a certain piece of law has been complaint and suspended all the time in all regions, that could the case that this piece of law is unfair and need to be amended. However, people have that right to speak out their voices, but through legal approaches. Writing letters to local mayor, publishing compositions in newspaper, even holding a legal parade are all recommended ways to give advises. In these communication with citizens and officers, the law system could be increasingly improved and consummate so the country does.

To sum up, rational citizens could make valuable contributions to their country by obeying the laws and giving advises to revise the law. In consequence, the advancement of society would undoubtedly patent and beneficial for both contemporary citizens and their off-springs.