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ISSUE 130 How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.
I strongly with the speaker’s oppinion.Indeed,Education of children is very important to themselies and our society.Especially, socialization of them are more imporant.
Traditionally,parents pay more attention to the scores of the children in China.As a result,when their children become an adult and work in society,some can’t commuciate with each other and moreover can’t take care of themselives easily.
Firstly,we should define the socialization of the children.As we know,everybody live in a society and every country may have different cultures so that they have different education systems.However,the socialization maybe have some common features.When a child become an adult,he must communciate with each other .If they face difficulties,then should think of useful ways to do it independantly. On the other hand,they should have the responsibity for the work and family.In my oppinion,the socialization should consist of the contexts.
Sceondly,socialization of children are very important to society.If children can’t communciate with others fully ,How can they live in their society?Without the responsibilties for their professions , children can’t finish own work and therefore can’t make achievements to society .In china,some sudents only study hardly in middle schools and universities.when they graduae from colleges,some can't adapt to
society naturly.Morever,some can’t know how to wash their clothes so that their parents have to take care of them.The reason is that they don’t achieve good education of socialiation in different grade schools ,especially univerties.

Thirdly,we can't fully understand the the best methods by which we can raise children and make them become a “social person”.In China,scores of children are most important to their parents ,teachers and themselves.Because scores decide evrythings,such as schoalrships and evaluations ,especially entrance opportunities.As a result,children only cling to their professional
classes and don’t contact other classes to train other abilities,such as how to handle difficulties and communciate with others,adapt to a new environment and so on.Fortunately,education admistrations,leaders,and parents have been aware of the serious problems and
maken some efforts to change the situation step by step. Homeworks are reduced in many middle schools.Makeups are forbidden in holidays and social practices become compulsory classes for students.

In conclusion,I think how are children socialized today determines the destiony of society.More importantly,we should know how to raise children so that they can be socialized more better.

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个人觉得前两段的论证不够有说服力

我也写了一篇130，希望楼主帮忙批改了