高频issue 136

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题目：ISSUE136 - "The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
字数：456
用时：00:43:55
日期：2010-8-11 上午 11:38:58

【i原文】In my perspective, the absence of the choice is an circumstance that is ralely to happen. Because in fact, whatever the circumstance is, we human always have the freedom to choose, except some doomed to happen.

Human, like other animals, unlike other materials, we can
choose to adapt ourselves to the circumstance, or leave. Every creature has the instint to to adapt to the current environment. In history, when the Ice Age comes, though human and animals could not change the trend of the temperature of the whole, they still have the right to choose to migrant to avoid the snowstorm, while the trees and rocks stayed in the heavy snow turned into fossile. The right to choose is the natural right of every animals, human included, which is embeded in
gene in cells, following us until the end of the race.

In addition, besides the natural right, people enjoy the extra the gift to think, which arguement^ the range of the choice. It is a common sense that when the God close a door, he also open another door, which calls for more wisdom to identify. It is the choice special for us, human. And the history are repete of the examples, famous ballet dancers broke her legs. Although she still could stand on feet, she were never able to dance again. However, the God provide another choice to pursue her career as an dancer tutor^. The history also witness when the dream to be an well-known volinist broken, Einstein open another door to be a brilliant star in science with the decades years of
persistence to dicover the truth of the time and space. Even when we are bogged in a labyrinace, if we don't give up, there is still there unvisible door open particular for you, if you have enough intelligence to regconize.

However, there are still something , we confronted with,seemly leaving no choice such as birth and death. We cannot choose our parents and we cannot choose the time to pass away. When the cricumstance set so much limits and people so weak to find other alternatives, the absence of choice seem to come true. In Nazi's camps, with the endless limits the Germany government set, the only choice of the Jewish is to survive to die. In the end of the life, with the power and vigor fading out, the death god leaves the poor and weak life nothing but to die.

It may be ture for the animals. As an person, we still have the freedom to choose whatever the circumstance, even faced the things impossible to change. At least, in the duel of hope and adiviersty, we have the right to grasp the hope with our courageous hand,


【i修改】In my perspective, the absence of the choice is an circumstance that is rarely to happen. Because in fact, whatever the circumstance is, we human always have the freedom to choose, except something doomed to happen.

Human, like other animals, unlike other materials, we can choose to adapt ourselves to the circumstance, or leave. Every creature has the instinct to adapt to the current environment. In history, when the Ice Age comes, though human and animals could not change the trend of the temperature of the whole, they still have the right to choose to migrant to avoid the snowstorm, while the trees and rocks stayed in the heavy snow turned into fossil. The right to choose is the natural right of every animals, human included, which is embedded in gene hidden in every cell, following us until the end of the race.

In addition, besides the natural right, people enjoy the extra the gift to think, which augments the range of the choice. It is a common sense that when the God close a door, he also opens another door, which calls for more wisdom to identify. It is the choice special for us, human. And the history are replete of the examples, famous ballet dancers broke her legs. Although she still could stand on feet, she were never able to dance again. However, the God provide another choice to pursue her career as an dancer tutor^. The history also witness when the dream to be a well-known violinist broken, Einstein open another door to be a brilliant star in science with the decades years of persistence to discover the truth of the time and space. Even when we are bogged in a labyrinth, if we don't give up, there is still there invisible door open particular for you, if you have enough intelligence to recognize.

However, there are still something, we confronted with, seemly leaving no choice such as birth and death. We cannot choose our parents and we cannot choose the time to pass away. When the circumstance set so much limits and people so weak to find other alternatives, the absence of choice seem to come true. In Nazi's camps, with the endless limits the Germany government set, the only choice of the Jewish is to survive to die. In the end of the life, with the power and vigor fading out, the death god leaves the poor and weak life nothing but to die.

It may be true for the animals. As an person, we still have the freedom to choose whatever the circumstance, even faced the things impossible to change. At least, in the duel of hope and adversity, we have the right to grasp the hope with our courageous hand out of our own will. Returning to the concentration camp, the dying Jews still have the freedom to choose to pass the optimism to the living regardless of the dying smell, the exhaustion spreading in the air and unavoidable fate. In sum, nothing even the death cannot take the right of freedom to choose, at least we can see the God with smile and gratitude.

On the other hand, as the saying goes”the more the alternative, the more the difficult the choice” sometimes, the absence of choice may give us more clear direction to the future. However, As long as we do not give up the right to choose, no one can steal it from us, even the inescapable death. We human always have the freedom to choose. (585)


提纲
1人像动物一样，有主观能动性，可以选择适应环境
2人高出动物，智慧赐予我们，看见其他人看不见的选择
3虽然极端情况不可改变，但我们仍有选择我们心灵的自由。

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