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superchaosUID：2863434

Do you agree or disagree that improving schools is the most important factor to successful development of country?

Technology, science, education, medical care, etc, none of these factors should be considered as first priority strategy to ensure the successful development of a country. They should all be treated equally. Therefore, hardly can anyone rank that of improving schools as the most important factor when sketch the future of the country.

The successful development of a country is so complex a plan that myriad of aspects should be taken into account. As a crucial impetus of social improvement, technology plays a significant role for either promoting the fundamental conditions world widely or facilitating people the new standard of daily lives. The more advanced the technology is applied, the more convenient life would be, which is basic for a country to develop successfully. Meanwhile, science, as the critical guided principle, is leading people to better understand the continuous changeable world. As science being progressing, the path for a country to the successful development could be built more and more stably. Moreover, to generally enhance people’s abilities and broaden their knowledge for the future demands of a country, education is being emphasized significantly, whose process lasts for years, even decades. Combined all these considerations, there is no way to put the improvement of schools in the first place to fulfill the successful development of a country.

Aside from these micro factors, the relatively limited scope of improving schools cannot benefit all people in the country for sure. As complicated as society itself, people tends to choose their particular ways to approach success, which means not all of them have access to enter in universities to study. Since the successful development of a country requires improvement of all people, this limitation largely confines the general influence of schools. Therefore, this strategy should not be regarded as the most important factor as for the future of nation. However, at the same time, the significance of schools should not be questioned, and theirs consistent development should be satisfied.

To guarantee a country to develop successfully, a lot of considerations should be designed and scheduled. Of all these factors such as technology, science or schools, etc, none of them should be ranked as first priority, nor does the improvement of schools.

jiangskyskyUID：2478960

修改好了

estopUID：2864494

太强了……

jjooyyUID：2704028

47# superchaos

Technology, science, education, medical care, etc, none of these factors should be considered as first priority strategy to ensure the successful development of a country. They should all be treated equally. Therefore, hardly can anyone rank that of improving schools as the most important factor when sketch the future of the country.1 o# K9 }$ L% u  |( O

The successful development of a country is so complex a plan that myriad of aspects should be taken into account. As a crucial impetus of social improvement, technology plays a significant role for either promoting the fundamental conditions world widely or facilitating people the new standard of daily lives. The more advanced the technology is applied, the more convenient life would be, which is basic for a country to develop successfully. Meanwhile, science, as the critical guided principle, is leading people to better understand the continuous changeable world. As science being progressing, the path for a country to the successful development could be built more and more stably. Moreover, to generally enhance people’s abilities and broaden their knowledge for the future demands of a country, education is being emphasized significantly, whose process lasts for years, even decades. Combined all these considerations, there is no way to put the improvement of schools in the first place to fulfill the successful development of a country.
疑惑上面的会不会偏题 讲的是科技了e! O
Aside from these micro factors, the relatively limited scope of improving schools cannot benefit all people in the country for sure. As complicated as society itself, people tends to choose their particular ways to approach success, which means not all of them have access to enter in universities to study. Since the successful development of a country requires improvement of all people, this limitation largely confines the general influence of schools. Therefore, this strategy should not be regarded as the most important factor as for the future of nation. However, at the same time, the significance of schools should not be questioned, and theirs consistent development should be satisfied.
这一段是个亮点 原来可以这样讲！长见识了！
To guarantee a country to develop successfully, a lot of considerations should be designed and scheduled. Of all these factors such as technology, science or schools, etc, none of them should be ranked as first priority, nor does the improvement of schools.

亮点1：每段开头没有用first之类，连接紧密！
亮点2：语言自然流畅

建议：是不是一段写大家都重要 反而都说不清楚？大胆点的话 可以写3段 3个东西的重要性。。。
语法之类的不谈了。。

静和UID：2371073

Do you agree or disagree that improving schools is the most important factor to successful development of country?
Technology, science, education, medical care, etc, none of these factors should be considered as first priority strategy to ensure the successful development of a country. They should all be treated equally. Therefore, hardly can anyone rank that of （of也不要加吧？） improving schools as the most important factor when sketch the future of the country.; R" Y. Z6 g8 e9 ?+ OThe successful development of a country is so complex a plan that myriad of （不要加吧?）aspects should be taken into account. As a crucial impetus of social improvement, technology plays a significant role for either promoting the fundamental conditions world widely or facilitating people the new standard of daily lives. The more advanced the technology is applied, the more convenient life would be, which is basic for a country to develop successfully. Meanwhile, science, as the critical guided principle, is leading people to understand the continuous changeable world. As science being progressing, the path for a country to the successful development could be built more and more stably. Moreover, to generally enhance people’s abilities and broaden their knowledge for the future demands of a country, education is being emphasized significantly, whose process lasts for years, even decades. Combined all these considerations, there is no way to put the improvement of schools in the first place to fulfill the successful development of a country
Aside from these micro factors, the relatively limited scope of improving schools cannot benefit all people in the country for sure. As complicated as society itself, people tends to choose their particular ways to approach success, which means not all of them have access to enter in universities to study. Since the successful development of a country requires improvement of all people, this limitation largely confines the general influence of schools. Therefore, this strategy should not be regarded as the most important factor as for the future of nation. However, at the same time, the significance of schools should not be questioned, and theirs consistent development should be satisfied.
To guarantee a country to develop successfully, a lot of considerations should be designed and scheduled. Of all these factors such as technology, science or schools, etc, none of them should be ranked as first priority, nor does the improvement of schools.

字字句句我都拜读了，还是那句你真牛。。

superchaosUID：2863434

30TH AUG Independent Writing
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  
Some people think making sure that others (influential people or potential employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments can help you succeed, if you do not do this, you won’t have a successful life.

To obtain the basic skills is a must for people to survive in the fierce social competition. However, considering the fact that majority of people tend to be at the same scratch line when stepping into society, it becomes increasingly crucial to distinguish your own strengths and accomplishments to avoid being eliminated.

People should always be aware that it is these influential people or potential employers that determine one’s path to success. Either attending meetings or taking part in interviews, people are always crowded by thousands of other competitors, who are preparing to devote all they have to ensure themselves get selected. Since the conditions of candidates seem to be all the same---having lots of part-time experiences, possessing high diploma, etc, to impress these decision-makers appears to be of significance. That is to say, to make one exclusive, people have to show what they have got: the strengths and accomplishments, which are supposed to leaving the deep impression to those people. At the same time, to pick up the ideal people they want, influence people or potential employers highly expect and value the discriminated characters of candidates. By giving them the opportunities, what they are awaiting to see is what the employees are trying to show. If meeting the standards and satisfying the requirements, the performances of candidates are bound to guarantee them more competitive edge over others, which makes them approach the success closer.

Aside from the subtle but explicit relationship between employers and employees, fortune is always regarded important as to its unavoidable influence. It is acknowledged that whatever people engage in, the consequence is likely to be affected by good or bad fortune. This awareness has become so prevalent that people always bless before they start, wishing that they are inclined by the good fortune appearance. Indeed, this is more like a self suggestion rather than something that is worth relying on 100 per cent. Therefore, to gain successful sequence, people should not neglect the existence of fortune that matters.

To success is definitely not a easy process, and when people are fully prepared, ready to show their particular strengths and accomplishments, along with some lucky fortune, people are on the way to the goal they are pursuing.

swolf54UID：2421931

改在这，可惜感觉偏题咯～

superchaosUID：2863434

09.05.30NA  
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children (ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language.

With the progressive development of society, younger children are provided more convenient surroundings that ensure them the condition to learn a lot of things such as art and music. Meanwhile, enlightened parents become increasingly aware of the importance of children’s multiple development. Under this circumstance, I highly agree younger children to study art and music besides the basic subjects.

Nowadays it is the unstoppable trend that drives children to become more versatility. Admittedly, fundamental courses such as math, science, history and language are the basic requirements for children. However, they are not sufficient any more. Indeed, the education strategy and the visionary parents set certain standards for younger children, hoping to either help them cultivate different interests. Almost every child is taking art or music classes in spite of the basic courses. Therefore, younger children need to study these courses to keep them remain the same competition as others.

Aside from this phenomenon, taking art or music classes is benefit for little children, which could help them establish healthy characters. It is acknowledged that traditional courses seem to be boring for children ages from five to ten. They are so curious that hardly could they concentrate themselves in classes, which consequently leads to their bad habits: moving around all the time, talking to others, and so on. Contrarily, art and music classes are relatively more interesting to these young students. The colorful images, the pleasure melody of songs, all of these are able to grasp the attentions of children. By participating these funny courses, children’s learning habits are highly improved, which also in turn enable them to learn math, history or so more effectively.

Art and music lessons should not be regarded unnecessary as to its importance. As a matter of fact, they are important as much as traditional courses since they are both helpful and meaningful for the healthy growth of younger children.

frlenderUID：2629962

楼主下回用word吧

superchaosUID：2863434

2nd Sep Independent Writing
自己选的一个题目写的...大家帮忙改改~~

superchaosUID：2863434

2nd Sep Integrated Writing

estopUID：2864494

经常来看你的作文，顺手改了篇~~

belinda_777UID：2669901

你的作文写得很好
多向你学习，其实水平很有限 只能提提自己的看法

superchaosUID：2863434

3rd Sep Independent Writing
是9月2号的题目..但是今天才写 大家见谅…… (: