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发表于 2010-8-23 11:27:18 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2010-8-23 19:27:55 |显示全部楼层
其实我是感觉好像有谁的没改 原来是你,晚交了 我容易忘记。。不好意思!!

The professor casts doubt on the view that dinosaurs were endotherms in the reading passage.

First, the professor thinks that polar dinosaurs can not prove that dinosaurs were endotherms. From the reading passage, endotherms can survive in cool place, so dinosaurs living in polar were endotherms.0 k& @4 A) |8 x9 F9 a
这里的内容是听力的 应该标明。Polar area was warmer than now(today). It was warm enough for dinosaurs to live. But the professor says that dinosaurs could not migrate to polar. 这点听错了 应该是天如果冷了 恐龙可以冬眠或者迁移

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Second, in the reading passage, it says that dinosaurs had legs underneath their bodies so dinosaurs can be considered as endotherms. In the listening materials, the professor indicates that the view about legs can not make a decision about whether dinosaurs were endotherms. Dinosaurs grew可以这样搭配吗 large size. Dinosaurs had legs underneath their bodies because they need legs underneath to support their weights.

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Third, dinosaurs do had
Haversian canals but this phenomenon can not play a role for proving that dinosaurs were endotherms. Actually, dinosaurs had growth string(ring), which dinosaurs would stop growing or growing slowly in cooler circumstance. And the growth string is a evidence to show dinosaurs were not endotherms. Human have no growth string so people can grow rapidly although in cool season.


听力的东西可能没有听完整,影响最终的理解和表达了。。建议可以听2遍试试
有些搭配 不确定就不用吧 反而影响考官的印象
再次表示抱歉。。
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