melodyskiing之作文贴

紫梦于UID：3232379

45# MELODYSKIING 已经发咯~

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MELODYSKIINGUID：2841950

TPO 21 Integrated writing
In the reading passage, the author puts forth three major benefits of genetically modified trees: stronger to survive, bringing economic benefits and protecting wild trees, which are doubted by the professor in the lecture.

Firstly, the leture refutes the point that the genetic modification is able to ensure survival. Normal trees are generaly genetical diverse. That is to say, even if one kind of trees die out of virus, others can survive. On the contrary, the genetically modified tree is comparatively uniform. They are more likely to be wiped out when exposed to the environment they are not designed to resist. They are more vulnerable rather than harder. After all, environment is not to maintain the same.

Secondly, the professor points out that owing to the hidden costs, genetically modified trees can hardly bring economic benefits to tree farmers, which is different from the point in the reading passage. In addition to a higher price of seeds, the farmers have to pay the seed company everytime they plant it.Therefore,they can hardly get faster and greater economic return.

Finally, contrary to the author's opinion that the use of genetically modified trees help to protect the wild trees, the professor asserts that those trees will damage the local wild trees. Since the genetically modified trees which grows faster and more aggressive are planted among local wild trees, they are likely to out compete the other trees in catching water, sunlight and other nutritients. As a result, they will probably crowd out wild trees.

As the lecture states, genetically modified trees own several serious problems,despite the benefits.

紫梦于UID：3232379

48# MELODYSKIING 请问。。。楼主帮我改的作文在哪呢？

MELODYSKIINGUID：2841950

49# 紫梦于 抱歉改晚了吖~~~已经发到你作业贴下了~~><!!

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TPO 22
In the reading passage, to illustrate that ethanol is not a good alternative of gasoline, the author puts forth three reasons which are regarded unconvincing by the lecturer who believes that ethanol is a nice substitute for gasoline.

Firstly, the professor points out the use of ethanol will not increase carbon dioxide to the environment because the process of growing plants, such as corn and sugar cane, which are used to produce ethanol, conteracts the release of carbon dioxide. Actually, plants absorb carbon dioxide as their nutrition. Therefore, ethanol is more environmental friendly than gasoline.

Secondly, contrary to the point in the reading, the lecture holds the opinion that the production of ethanol will not reduce the source of food for animals, for ethanol can be produced by the parts which are not eaten by animals.

Finally, the professor admits that the tax subsidies are certainly needed today, yet he believes that the ethanol will be competitive in price in the future. As the demand for ethanol goes up, the factory will increase the production, which generally leads to a drop in price. In addition, research shows that if the production can be three times greater than now, the cost of ethanol per unit will drop 40%.

For the reasons above, the professor considers ethanol fuel as a good replacement for gaoline, which contradicts the opinion in the reading.

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我是和楼主不同组的路人
我表示和楼主这篇综合一比，我的那篇好像渣渣
51# MELODYSKIING

loveinwcUID：3241878

In the reading passage, to illustrate that ethanol is not a good alternative of gasoline, the author puts forth three reasons which are regarded unconvincing by the lecturer who believes that ethanol is a nice substitute for gasoline. （真心喜欢楼主的行文啊，大牛啊喵，就是第一段看着有点诡异喵，上来就说作者提出了三个教授觉得很搓的理由，我还以为下面要开始讲作者的理由了呢，结果第二段压根没专门提到萨囧~）
Firstly, the professor points out the use of ethanol will not increase carbon dioxide to the environment because the process of growing plants, such as corn and sugar cane, which are used to produce ethanol, conteracts（contracts？） the release of carbon dioxide. Actually, plants absorb carbon dioxide as their nutrition. Therefore, ethanol is more environmental friendly than gasoline.
Secondly, contrary to the point in the reading, the lecture（lecturer） holds the opinion that the production of ethanol will not reduce the source of food for animals, for（找了半天发现for后面应该跟名词啊…………汗，然后百度来了一段仅供参考……：for后面跟的是名词性从句，准确的说是（介词for之后的）宾语从句。有时候for也可以引导原因状语从句，但是在用法上一般理解成类似于and引导的并列句，该从句必须放置于主句之后，表示个人主观加以解释的，不一定准确的原因。） ethanol can be produced by the parts which are not eaten by animals.

Finally, the professor admits that the tax subsidies are certainly needed today, yet（真的可以这样用吗？） he believes that the ethanol will be competitive in price in the future. As the demand for ethanol goes up, the factory will increase the production, which generally leads to a drop in price. In addition, the research shows that if the production can be three times greater than now, the cost of ethanol per unit will drop 40%. 4 s; o+ g. {: X, g3 F

For the reasons above, the professor considers ethanol fuel as a good replacement for gaoline (gasoline), which contradicts the opinion(s) in the reading.


从楼主的综合中学到了好多东西~~~~跟楼主比起来我就是那渣渣中的渣渣啊。。。。。。顺便呼唤楼主~~求更改在下的tpo22~~~其实我只是晚交了~~~满地打滚中！！

MELODYSKIINGUID：2841950

53# loveinwc 谢谢修改喔~！
1、第一段我确实不应该这么写，强调的是lecture的观点~~谢谢指出啊！
2、for在这里表原因，后面跟一个完整句子就可以了……跟because一样用，但所表示原因比because因果关系要弱。不过我自己觉得这里用for确实不太好，应该分句~~
3、yet可以和but换着用~~~

MELODYSKIINGUID：2841950

2.10 101203NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should help children to do their work or encourage children to do their work independently.
(最后一次写了~~明天就考了...求rp吖...)(发现三段好整齐啊，我还没写过三段式的...好吧，语言实在平平，但至少没什么错，论证和例子似乎比之前好些了吧..自我安慰呀TT)

Hearing the cry of a little child, who is trapped and falls down on the ground, parents can either offer a hand to the kid or encourage him to stand up on his own feet. In my eyes, parents should encourage children to deal with their work and problems on their own.

First and foremost, one of the most important lessons in the process of growing is to be independent. After all, parents cannot always stand by and help their children. Kids should learn to make decisions and deal with problems by themselves. Lack of training, kids will be at loss what to do when they come across difficulties. Always being help, kids will rely on their parents rather than consider their own affairs. In addition, being encouraged to work independently, the kid will gradually realize that it is himself that should be responsible for the decision and the result of his behavior.

Furthermore, this teaching method can stimulate children's imagination and creative ability. When encouraged to deal with problems, kids may come up with some creative solutions. For example, I once asked my little brother to open the walnut on his own. He tried a lot of methods, stepping on it or biting it, but failed. Then I was surprised to find that he put the walnut on the crack between the door and its frame, so that walnut was clamped. As he closed the door, the walnut was opened. He eventually made it! Our adults usually deal with the stiff nuts by a hammer or a pincher, but the little child creatively makes use of the door! Besides, the child will feel proud of himself and get confidence from this little achievement. When facing hardship next time, they will be active and brave to make attempts.

Owing to the immaturity and lack of knowledge, children are incompetent to cope with some hard problems, such as mathematical, physical or even philosophy problems. Thus, parents should offer some tips. When a little boy asks, "where do I come from?", it is futile to encourage him to deal with it independently. He is unlikely to find out the answer even if he spends days and nights thinking of it. He may still be confused with the parent's answer. However, what the parent should be is an assistant rather than an answer provider. Parents can give pieces of advice or ask leading questions, yet it is the kid himself that makes the final decision. In this way, kids will be trained to think independently.

In a nutshell, since the encouragement cultivates a sense of responsibility, creative ability, self-confidence and critical thinking, parents should definitely offer an opportunity for their children to cope with their work and problems on their own.

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楼主写得好赞~~~特别喜欢那种开头。。。。楼主明天考试加油~~~~

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楼主的文章是我在版上看到的最好的了~太赞了~主要是学习楼主的文章，没改出什么来。。楼主明天加油~~！

iBT20120304UID：3228839

我也改不出什么问题来。语法方面无可挑剔，词汇运用方面也较为丰富生动，句型也很多样变化，论证清晰给力。很赞！
之前帮楼主仔细修改过一篇文章，直接被楼主无视了。想想也是，楼主英文这么好，我如此班门弄斧了，实在惭愧。
基于我的考试经验，以楼主这个水平，应该可以拿一个29+的分数。正常发挥便可。

iBT20120304UID：3228839

祝楼主明天旗开得胜！加油！