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第一次帮别人改作文，改的不好见谅哇！！
加油加油~~共勉！

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改的很好啊~~知道好多不足呢，底子很好的说，学习了

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Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.




Nowadays,When the impact of advertising on daily life has been massive indeed, It’swidely accepted that Ads is a contributing factor to unhealthy eating habits. Asa netizen says :” advertising is like a needle that injects us with ideas thatcause certain behaviors.” It really make sense. While when it comes to thepoint of which is the key cause of bad eating habits, I deny the ads. The wrongconcept of health care or other reasons like the stress of work, the temptationof drunk food can be more essential to the problems.

Tobegin with, ads is just one mean of promotion. The food company could usevariety of attraction to affect consumers’ buying habits.
McDonald is acase in point. We usually see the restaurant provides a playground for thechildren, sets a lovely clown outside the door , and fling in cups or toys toconsumers for buying their set meal. Though there is no ads, people will eatthere frequently developing a fast-food eating habit.

As another point of view, people are active consumers, whocan make choices about what they eat. For that case, the media especiallyadvertising is not to blame but the people’s unawareness of balanced diet. Menare addicted in drinking that whatever reason can make them substitute drinkfor meal. Women are pursue the slender body that keep diet no matter howhungry. Teenagers feed the stomach with junk food and leave no room for healthdishes. Thanks to the
misunderstandingof healthy , the obesity, the corona heart disease or the kidney cancer hasincreased in a breakneck speed these days.

To sum up, advertising partly influences peoples' foodchoice. While people themselves’ awareness, if we
get to the rootof this matter, is the most crucial one that cause the unhealthy habits.

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10月7日交
09.03.21NA   
Do you agree or disagree with thefollowing statement? To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is moreimportant than achieving success


Howdo we identify success, The wealth, the prestige, the power, or a happylife?
though many people would like tochoose the last one—happiness-- in words, they still set the goal whichcontains more material thing than the inspiration. While the following opinionI will state, though can’t make all people accept, is truly my heart feelingabout the attitudes to the life.

Initially, failure is the inseparablecompanion through our whole life that we should try the best to do is justbecoming more and more brave when face the obstacle. No better than anoptimistic mind can resist the failure. Just quoteThomas Edison’s words "I have not failed a thousand times, I have justlearnt a thousand different materials that cannot be used to make a lightbulb."  Therefore, by keeping the fire of hope and optimism alive, one canachieve all the impossibilities.

Secondly, morepeople nowadays tend to take a tough-minded view of the possibilities ofsuccess and invest their energies elsewhere rather than find the originalproject or idea. While twisting the idea of success, we rise the banner ofdream to struggle for the universal desire by drifting along. As a result, thefailure become ugly, which once is a stage for reborn, a place we can gain theexperience, a tool we end our mistaken.
So in my part, what we truly want as a human being is not the thing thatother think better, which we often called --“success”, but the really need fromour heart as happiness, love, wisdom, faith.

Finally, I really insist that thedefinition of success and the way to be successful is not relevant to failure.Just keep optimistic and learn from the loss, the tumble did not diminish oursuccess. Just like a lyric from a famous Chinese songs, “Where there is faith,there is dream. Nothing but a ‘starting all over again’”.

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