9.2广州作文机经

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来给大家报jj了 一个同学去今天去考  89和 232 ar是34 据说他没准备过这提纲但是思如泉涌，还是写的巨顺。。于是我也模拟了一篇 这是第一次求拍，大概第3.4次练习吧 多多指导~~
因为是掐表写的 然后我的习惯是写了框架然后往里写东西写例子，一般admittedly是最后写。。但这篇中间想词花了不少时间 折中段来不及完善了。

ISSUE 89
"The purpose of many advertisements is to make consumers want to buy a product so that they will 'be like' the person in the ad. This practice is effective because it not only sells products but also helps people feel better about themselves."


提纲：1真正好的广告大都是靠其优点吸引人而不是说能让别人感觉良好。EX：Mercedes Benz 和死神 那个广告。
      2好的广告需要好的创意和表现形式，其实广告也是艺术的一种。而艺术是不会直接的告诉人们其真实的目的。EX：Chivas Regal 那几个“富二代”蛋疼的坐在船上钓鱼喝酒-.- 。

How the companies earn the profits by the advertisement reveal at distinct channels on television? Many people assert that advertisements will product a emotion that prone to chose the commodity which will trigger them be like the person in the advertisements or feel better about themselves.However, the earty,raffish and meanless advertisements are getting less and less.More and more ad attract audience by laud the products merit or an inspiration in art.

To begin with, nowadays, the meaningful products fail to win more clients by a coarse ad.Instead of that, propagate the merit of products is a most vital way to present on television which will lead the efficiency close to the maximum,but not helps people feel better about themselves.Take a canonical? Advertisement own by Mercedes Benz for example.The beginning of ad is an alone man sitting in a Mercedes Benz,driving comfortablely.Suddenly, the secondary seat emerge a man or call him death with hook and say a word to him--goodbye.The man find that a giant trunk block his way.The distant is so close that generally speaking,the man will die.Yet,he stamp the brake as his pleases and the car stall immediately in front of the block.Then, the man glance the embarrassed death and disdain to him—sorry.The adevertisement illustrate the preeminent and indispensable merit of Mercedes Benz,the brake system to spectators.Though, the advertisment does not trumpet all of the car,but use a special fashion to reveal its capability.No one can cast doubt that when we consider about our security, Mercedes Benz is a better chose.

Furthermore, a attractive advertisement contain a unique inspiration and connotation by an artistic method.The carrier of ad is art which will not tell the truth purpose of ad or artwork.For instance,a wine ad absorb many attention from people in spite of not all the person will buy it,Chivas Regal.With the ad starting, three people sit on a skiff in Alaska,fishing.The sunshine illuminate and the people rejoice themselves.Then the camera lens turn to a man who take out a bottle of wine that is the crux,Chivas.The cheer with each other and enjoy the wine.The frame of ad is graceful and elegant,in addition,the ad narrate an account a definiton of the commodity that of wine is suitable for the person who are successed in career,moreover,it indicate the approximate price of Chivas.Simply decades seconds impart a mount of information to us.Therefor, the advertisment should have a unique inspiration and connotation.

Admittedly,some filthy advertisements will affect spectators with its unforgetable,nauseous and queasy orginality or actor’s lines.Maybe this is a special way but stodgy to most people.

In sum, the most current ads is more likely art and need the inspiration an connotation,also,the morit of commodity play a crucial role in attracting people’s interesting instead of help people feel better about themselves or play themselves be the characters in ad.

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