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发表于 2010-9-5 15:48:17 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
本帖最后由 shamanqz 于 2010-9-6 01:03 编辑

把我第一篇托福作文献给gt,看了他人的作文我真是太惭愧了,
so,请狠狠的敲打我的作文吧。

Agree or disagree:Technology makes people’s lives simpler in turn to make people’s lives more complicated.

We live in a world in which technology is rapidly developing. One of the most obvious impact which the technology has brought to our lives is that it has changed our life style in the modern society. People’ lives had been easier by using technology.

Firstly, technology has changed the communication style. Since Bell invented the first phone in the world, the distance between people has been shorten. In the past, people had to visit friends crossing towns, countrysides and places which rare people lived in. But nowadays, we just need to dial a friend’s phone member with a cell phone and then enjoy the talking time. As a by-product of mobile phones, short messages is really convenient and useful. It provides a way to avoid the embarrassment from a face-to-face talk.

Secondly, technology has a strong influence on modern transportation. In the ancient society, the transportation tools which could be used were nothing but animals and human ourselves. Compared with that, much choice, like cars, undergrounds and planes, are available now. These transportation tools manage to save people’s precious time which is wasted in commuting. Consequently, people gain time in which accompany family, do exercise and recreate. Even more, technology offers us an effortless way to travel. We are able to get every corner of the world, no matter America or South Africa.

Finally, people’s entertainment style got a revolutionary change. Now what we use for entertaining are obviously different from our ancesters. The inventions of televisions and computers has brought us to the age of information and provided a totally new way of spending our spare time. TV programs ,such as TV shows and TV news programs, help people not only relax their strained emotion, get know the current hotspot but also broaden horizon and supplyment school education.

In short, technology has improved modern life tremendously. And the life standard also has been enhanced. As a result, peple can’t live without it any more

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发表于 2010-9-5 23:16:49 |只看该作者
没人看。。哭哭。

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发表于 2010-9-6 01:05:20 |只看该作者
9.6第二篇

见附件的第二篇

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