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[求助] 我太蠢了,这个作文写得好艰难。 [复制链接]

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本帖最后由 wzzzx 于 2010-9-8 23:22 编辑

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今天我写作文碰到一个Huge的问题:
作文题目2009.1.10CN:Improving schoolis most important factor to successful development of country.
然后我写啊写,把重心就迁移成了学校对青年人很重要了,虽然我坚信我可以最后一把把它们扯回来,也可以边说学校对青年人重要边把它发展这方面撤,但是还是很weird。。
能把作文先写成school is important然后再急刹车转回来吗?

这是我写了200+字的作文,写不下去了...先说Japan的,我觉得我开头都起不好,举出来的两个观点总感觉离题了,请问还有补救的办法吗?

The economic downturn of Japan had increased dramaticallyafter the World War II. How could that be? According to a survey, in 1965-1973,the average growth rate of public expenditure on education of Japan was 17.6%and the ever-increasing GDP had take place. Since the 18th century, the averageincrease of GDP jumped to 14.6%. It convincing indicates that economyprosperity can not with out the huge input of the construction of Schools. Developingeducation system is significant way to improving our society.
First, acquiring knowledge in a school is awidely accepted way for most teenagers who accent on a rugged foundation fortheir professional careers and lives. While a young person do some job atsociety, the affect can never be compared with absorbing a set of new theoriesin school and then constant use of the knowledge in everyday life. There is nobetter opportunity to improve academic skills than living in the schools inwhich it has a great studying atmosphere. Learning in schools can help you havea gradual wakening of the way you learning which means as much as same time,people can do more things.
Second, spending money on schools offers young student a different perspective of the world. Foreign students are likely to encounter their counterparts from various part of the worldand are exposed to different idea and values. This helps they to have ameaningful understanding of different societies and inevitably sees my owncountry in a new light.
Third, school is the source of


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啊,帮帮忙帮帮忙,作文这样有点离题怎么办呢?

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我太蠢了,这个作文写得好艰难。
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