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Government should more support art museum and music performance than recreational facilities, such as swimming pool or play ground.

As government should be responsible to the development and stability of the society , so it must be concerned many aspects such as economy ,education , social security and so on . But the government can not support every aspect equally because of its limited financial budget. When it comes to whether government should more support art museum and music performance than recreational facilities , some people point out that art and music are represented of the culture of a country that must be pay more attention on them .On the contrary .I would claim that I disagree with this view .My opinion is very convincing due to the following reasons in this essay .

First of all ,recreational facilities ,such as swimming pool or play ground ,are more accessible to the public ,and more people can obtain benefits from them .With the rapid development of economic and technological ,competition is more and more serious in today's world .Generally speaking ,almost everyone feel different levels of pressure owing to various of factors ,some cannot find proper jobs and others may have an inadequate income to support the family . People should find a way to release their stress and relax themselves .In my view, some recreational facilities supply these people an additional choose. A two-hour swimming or some exercise on the pay ground may help people to forget their pressure temporarily .If government build more recreational facilities in our neighborhood ,whenever we
want to do some sports we can be accessible easily . In contrast, usually there is only one art museum in a city and several music performance every year, it is not practical to everyone to appreciate them.

Moreover, recreational facilities are good for the health of people all over the country. Everyone has to admit that there is nothing important than one's health in the world .Without a healthy body people almost can do nothing .Nowadays a trend that people only focus on their jobs and seldom do some exercise is so common that make a large amount of people in the sub-health condition .After a long time , a lot of problems will appear ,some one may be overweight and others get some heart disease ,for example . So if government support recreational facilities more, it can do some favor to the health of public directly .The poor situation may change so much,


Admittedly, art and music also play an important part in daily life. learning some knowledge about art and music is not only beneficial for our self-cultivation ,but also for our minds .But to compared with recreational facilities , art museum and music performance cannot provide benefits for most people and solve some practical issues.

In the conclusion, I believe that government should support more recreational facilities than art museum and music museum .It will bring more positive effects to the whole society.

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谢谢你 同学 我知道了自己一些以前混淆的语法问题！
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谢谢ls同学指点~~获益良多~~关于空格问题，我写完习惯用Google翻译检查一遍 如果标点两侧不空格 它就识别不出单词 所以我的空格很混乱啦。。。总之多谢多谢~~

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