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0925:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.

According to a recent investigation on the Internet, 78% of people reflect that they would be affected by the advertisement when purchasing. Suggesting the unhealthy eating habits spreading among people, some consider that it is caused most by advertising. On the other hand, some are opposed to this statement and give more positive comments on advertising in some fields like widening consumers’ horizon, giving their more opportunities to compare different commodities or so. As far as I am concerned, advertising just can be a common case to affect people’s eating habits and the development of the unhealthy one is relating to many factors. My opinion can be explained as follows.

Firstly, advertising is a medium between the marketers and consumers through TV, posters, or radio. Essentially advertising aims to broadcast the products and influence the purchasing behavior of the consumers. No matter how extraordinary a type of commodity is depicted in an advertisement, consumers are still able to tell the good from the bad naturally as well as able to tell the healthy from the unhealthy. Even if it’s a child, under the dictation of the wise parents, the little guy still can make a proper choice. So the effect of advertising on people’s eating behavior should not be overstated.

What’s more, actually, it’s the desire for junk food or irregular eating behavior leading to a unhealthy habits. According to the Bible, human beings die for the seven deadly sins. Among them is the gluttony, which means unlimited, strong desire for gorging or storing food. Keeping being tempted by the delicious food and Indulging in one’s appetite, it’s easy to form an unhealthy eating habit. Therefore, it will be more efficient to control one’s will for food than accusing of the advertising.

Finally, most of people clearly understand the harm unhealthy habits bring about. The reason they cannot cut out the bad ones maybe they indeed need them. The speeding operation of society has been pressing them to the underline. And some people may go crazy if they cannot release their negative tensions. The stranger what they take in, the more relax they may feel. People with unhealthy eating habits are the products of the unhealthy working conditions and living environment. Owing the responsibility the whole society should take to advertising is unreasonable.

All in all, advertising is just one result of the modern society. It can be one, but not the most important one. To analyze the reason why people‘s unhealthy eating habits form, we should do more research and collect more data. It is also necessary to make a thorough inquiry into people’s inner world.

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0928_08.08.08NA  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should take basic science courses, regardless of their field of concentration.

It is not rare to see that most university students are taking basic science course just as advanced mathematics, college physics and some other natural science courses. People who do favor in this education policy hold the point that students lack enough knowledge to decide which program is the most suitable one for them to concentrate on and they are required to consolidate the basic courses so that they can be wiser to make a choice in their research after graduate. Other people, on the other hand, oppose to this strict course requirement. They stand on the ground that it is necessary to cultivate students’ concentrated interest in some filed, which meets the market needs for specialists. As far as I am concerned, basic science courses and some field of concentration are of equal importance.

Obviously, basic science courses play an important role in students’ rational thoughts and analyzing ability. Not only can they conduct students how to calculate, how to reason, how to contemplate and how to find the ultimate rule of the world, they also have a great influence in the development of interdisciplinary. Take mathematics for example. Mathematics is always taken use of in astronomy. Neptune was found by mathematical prediction rather than empirical observation. And consequentially, it was just observed in the predicted position. Mathematics as well has made a crucial contribution in economy. Nash equilibrium reveals the inner connection between the game equilibrium and the economical equilibrium. Mathematician Nash pushed the economics. Therefore, solid theory foundations are the basic science courses if students want to further their study and get achievement.

Widely recognized though the eminence of basic sciences is, it is not wise to regardless the students’ field of concentration. It should be advocated that teaching accords to individual aptitude. For instance, the noted Chinese conductor, Zhouzhou, who was born with weak intelligence, shows an amazing talent in music and conducting. Supposed that he was forced to learn basic science courses and was ignored of his genius in art, what kind of persons he will be? Nothing? Hence, it is meaningful to explore students’ field of concentration and provide them encouragement and support to develop their aptitude.

In my opinion, it would be better if university can combine these two. Require students to take some basic science courses if taking into account the connection between these courses and the individual filed of concentration. A true successful man is always outstanding in many fields. Just like da Vinci, a world-famous painter and scientist, it cannot be denied that art and science make a mutual promotion in him. Consequentially, understanding all and being proficient in one field is the best result.

In conclusion, university should make proper policies to guarantee the quality of the students, neither too narrow in one filed nor too wide in all. Society needs persons with solid basic knowledge as well as ones with professional skills. Without doubt, the one who maters the two will be widely recognized.

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0930_2008.10.17NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from travelling in their own country than travelling in a foreign country.

The Chinese proverb says that traveling thousands of miles is better than reading thousands of books. As what is said, actually, the world is a book and those who do not travel read only a page. Then comes up a question: how far should we travel? Some people hold the opinion that we should travel in a foreign country, enjoying the foreign scenery and experiencing the distinctive culture. On the contrary, as far as other people concerned, considerable though the advantages traveling abroad enjoys are, they cannot compete with the benefits that travel in their own country brings about, when the language barrier and traveling expenses are taken into consideration. In my opinion, it all depends on one’s favor.

Undoubtedly, travel oversea keep the foreign things near. It is accessible to have a close contact with the local conditions. For example, my best friend, Myra, had a visit to Japan on last summer vacation. The prosperous Tokyo, elegant Kyoto and modern Osaka, all left a deep impression on her. Especially, which moved her truly, abiding by public order and behaving politely, Japanese extremely emphasize the importance of collective interest. This first-hand experience brought her multiple spheres of knowledge on Japan, which only by books, TV or radio cannot be realized. Therefore, traveling abroad, all that you can imagine or cannot imagine about this country all come true, lively and touchable.

However, some people indeed consider traveling in a foreign own an inferior cost performance. They stand on the ground that the language barriers and the differences in habits, customs and thoughts hamper them into the authentic local life. The scenes presented are no more than superficial phenomena and the nature of this foreign country cannot be touched during a short stay, such a vacation tour. For this reason, obviously meaningless to pay large amounts of money on a hasty and careless travel abroad. In comparison, travel home is an economical and practical choice. People are always familiar their own country. Expanding horizons while relaxing tensions, tour around their motherland makes them feel free, leisurely and comfortable. No wonder so many people would like travel home.

In my views, to choose where to travel totally accords to one’s favor. Individual interests, economical capability and the length of the holiday codetermine the way of traveling. If I had one day, I would travel near my city; If I had one week, I would travel somewhere eminent in my country; If I had one month or even more time and sufficient money, I would travel a far country or even around the world. Every station means a lot to me.
Finally, as long as we take the real conditions into consideration and truly realize the journey, both benefits us a lot no matter travel at home or abroad.

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1002_08.12.07NA  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress


Along with the speeding society, people have to bear increasing tension. How to relieve stress attracts more and more attention. According the investigation online, the ways to relax becomes far more multiple, such as running, traveling, shopping, talking, taking parts in some psychological club and even shouting. A question may come up: should people do these alone or with somebody accompanied? Whether is it the best way to relieve stress to spend time alone. As far as I am concerned, it is too absolute to assert that self-relieving is best. Indeed, it all depends on individual personality and need.

It is quite easy for most to choose spending time alone because of the obvious reason that people need free private space. To illustrate this, the example of Woolf would be persuasive. Virginia Woolf, a talent writer, always lived in stress and depression. Her husband and sister tried hard to rescue her, separating her from the bustling city satisfying her desire for writing and accompanying with her the whole day. However, all of that was counterproductive----Woolf felt even more stressful and restraint. What Woolf really need was to be treated as a normal person and to be leave alone. This demonstrates a undeniable fact that spending time alone is actually an efficient way to relieve stress.

But at the meantime, although spending time alone has some advantages, it also has some drawbacks in many cases such as the person lacking ability to self adjust. For that reason, we have not complete evidence that spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress. Take myself for example. I am the one whose thoughts easily run to an extreme when stressful. Once I was in tension, I used to make a phone call to my mother. I would pour out my grief and tension to her because her gentle voice filled with love was able to help me decompress and refresh. What’s more, her sincere and wise suggestion could keep me from overly consuming with my problem. Just like me, some people need the concrete suggestion from friends or relatives help them relieve stress.

In addition, sharing tension with others benefits people more because of the obvious reason that people need understanding and consolation from outside. It’s the emotional need. Actually, being accompanied by friends or relatives is a kind of immaterial support. People feel encouraged and concerned about on the ground that they think they have not been left behind, though they express uneasiness, depression and behavior improperly when in tension. As it is said, share happiness and sorrow, happiness multiplied while sorrow halved. Therefore, there is no doubt that spending time with others is efficient to relieve stress.

If the individual personality and needs are taken into consideration, we will find out that the advantages of spending time alone outweigh those of accompanied by others in some cases, vice versa. We concede the meaning of staying alone for relieving stress while the efficiency of sharing tension with others should not be ignored. The combination of the two will be definitely help one in later life.

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10.5 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.

According to a recent investigation on the Internet, 78% of people reflect that they would be affected by the advertisement when purchasing. Suggesting the unhealthy eating habits spreading among people, some consider that it is caused most by advertising. On the other hand, some are opposed to this statement. They stand on the ground that advertising not only has little with people’s eating habits but also provides more opportunities to compare different commodities. As far as I am concerned, it’s not completely true to assert that advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy habits the development of the unhealthy one is relating to many factors. My opinion can be explained as follows.

Firstly, advertising is a medium between the marketers and consumers through TV, posters, or radio. Essentially advertising aims to broadcast the products’ advantage and influence the purchasing behavior of the consumers. However, No matter how extraordinary a type of commodity is depicted in an advertisement, consumers are still able to tell the healthy from the unhealthy. Even if it’s a child, under the dictation of the wise parents, the little guy still can make a proper choice. So the effect of advertising on people’s eating behavior should not be overstated.

Secondly, actually, it’s the desire for junk food or irregular eating behavior leading to an unhealthy habits. According to the Bible, human beings die for the seven deadly sins. Among them is the gluttony, which means unlimited, strong desire for gorging or storing food. Keeping being tempted by the delicious food and indulging in one’s appetite, it’s easy to form an unhealthy eating habit. Therefore, it will be more efficient to control one’s will for food than accusing of the advertising.

Finally, it’s highly probable that people with unhealthy eating habits are the products of the modern unhealthy working conditions and living environment. It’s obvious that most of people clearly understand the harm unhealthy habits bring about. Why are they still not unable to get rid of the bad usual practice? The reason, I think, may be they indeed need them. The speeding operation of society has been pressing them to the underline. And some people may go crazy if they cannot take some measures, such as shopping, running, talking, of course, eating irregularly, to release their negative tensions. Therefore, irregular food becomes an efficient way to release pressure in some cases. The stranger what they take in, the more relaxed they may feel. Hence, owing the responsibility the whole society should take to advertising is unreasonable.

All in all, advertising is just one cause of people’s unhealthy habits.  To analyze the reason why people‘s unhealthy eating habits form, we should do more research and collect more data. It is also necessary to make a thorough inquiry into people’s inner world.

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According to a recent investigation on the Internet, 78% of people reflected that they would be affected by the advertisement when purchasing. Suggesting the unhealthy eating habits spreading among people, some consider that it is caused most by advertising. On the other hand, some are opposed to this statement. They stand on the ground that advertising not only has little with people’s eating habits but also provides more opportunities to compare different commodities. As far as I am concerned, it’s not completely true to assert that advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy habits, Tthe development of the unhealthy one is relating to many factors. My opinion can be explained as follows总感觉有古怪。。。（这么写没有问题，我无知了。。。）.

Firstly, 这个单词不建议使用，我用过被人家指正了advertising is a medium between the marketers and consumers through TV考试中要拼全称, posters, or radios. Essentially advertising aims to broadcast the products’ advantage and influence the purchasing behavior of the consumers. However,
no matter how extraordinary a type of commodity is depicted in an advertisement, consumers are still able to tell the healthy from the unhealthy. Even if it’s a child, under the dictation of the wise parents, the little guy still can make a proper choice. So the effect of advertising on people’s eating behavior should not be overstated.

Secondly, actually, it’s the desire for junk food or irregular eating behavior leading to an unhealthy habits. According to the Bible, human beings die for还是应该用of？ the seven deadly sins. Among them is the gluttony, which means unlimited, strong desire for gorging or storing food这个与题无关可以不写吧. Keeping being tempted by the delicious food and indulging in one’s appetite, it’s easy to form an unhealthy eating habit. Therefore, it will be more efficient to control one’s will for food than accusing of the advertising.  

Finally, it’s highly probable that people with unhealthy eating habits are the products of the modern unhealthy working conditions and living environment. It’s obvious that most of people clearly understandwhat the harm unhealthy habits bring about. Why are they still not unable to get rid of the bad usual practice? The reason, I think, may be they indeed need them. The speeding operation of society has been pressing them to the underline. And some people may go crazy if they cannot take some measures, such as shopping, running, talking, of course, eating irregularly额，改成无节制的能恰当点吧, to release their negative tensions. Therefore, irregular food becomes an efficient way to release pressure in some cases. The stranger what they take in, the more relaxed they may feel. Hence, owing the responsibility the whole society should take to advertising is unreasonable."

All in all, advertising is just one cause of people’s unhealthy habits.  To analyze the reason why people‘s unhealthy eating habits form, we should do more research and collect more data. It is also necessary to make a thorough inquiry into people’s inner world.


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According to a recent investigation on the Internet, 78% of people reflect that they would be affected by the advertisement when purchasing. Suggesting the unhealthy eating habits spreading among people, some consider that it is caused most by advertising. On the other hand, some are opposed to this statement and give more positive comments on advertising in some fields like widening consumers’ horizon, giving their more opportunities to compare different commodities or so. As far as I am concerned, advertising just can be a common case to affect people’s eating habits and the development of the unhealthy one is relating to many factors. My opinion can be explained as follows.

Firstly, advertising is a medium between the marketers and consumers through TV, posters, or radio. Essentially advertising aims to broadcast the products and influence the purchasing behavior of the consumers. No matter how extraordinary a type of commodity is depicted in an advertisement, consumers are still able to tell the good from the bad naturally as well as able to tell the healthy from the unhealthy. Even if it’s a child, under the dictation of the wise parents, the little guy still can make a proper choice. So the effect of advertising on people’s eating behavior should not be overstated.
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What’s more, actually, it’s the desire for junk food or irregular eating behavior leading to a unhealthy habits. According to the Bible, human beings die for(of吧) the seven deadly sins. Among them is the gluttony, which means unlimited, strong desire for gorging or storing food（store多余）. Keeping being tempted by the delicious food and ndulging in one’s appetite, it’s easy to form an unhealthy eating habit. Therefore, it will be more efficient to control one’s will for food than accusing of the advertising.
Finally, most of people clearly understand the harm unhealthy habits bring about. The reason they cannot cut out the bad ones maybe they indeed need them. The speeding (speeding用这里不对吧) operation of society has been pressing them to the underline（underline用这里是虾米意思呢？）. And some people may go crazy if they cannot release their negative tensions. The stranger what （what感觉怪怪的，直接things呢）they take in, the more relax（relaxed） they may feel. People with unhealthy eating habits are the products of the unhealthy working conditions and living environment. Owing the responsibility the whole society should take to advertising is unreasonable.
All in all, advertising is just one result of the modern society. It can be one, but not the most important one. To analyze the reason why people‘s unhealthy eating habits form, we should do more research and collect more data. It is also necessary to make a thorough inquiry into people’s inner world.
写的不错，理由也很充分，辩证的角度独特，也比较有力道，学习了~

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10.9 作业~

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