托福独立作文这样写行不行，真心求教

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RT，没上过辅导班，不知道独立怎么写才符合托福口味，自己写了一篇，30分钟内完成，不知道这钟方式和结构是否符合托福口味，真心请教有经验的前辈们指点，快考了心里没底，请指点下迷津，谢谢


Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.  



It is widely accepted by a growing number of people that teachers should assign less homework and leave more spare time for students in order to develop their own characteristics or doing something they are interested in. On the face of it, it seems reasonable, but is it really the case? As far as I am concerned, I doubt whether the argument bears much analysis.


There is no denying that homework is necessary for all the students, especially for children, but considerable in number of people believe that daily homework is unnecessary for them, because they should enjoy more spare time to do something they want to do. However, when the disadvantage and advantage of assigning daily homework are carefully compared, the most striking conclusion will be self-evident.


Let us take a look at a common example of our daily lives, it will make the point clear. I have a sister Jane and a brother Mike, both of them are 11 years old, Jane' math teacher assigns homework everyday, therefore, Jane has to do the necessary calculate exercises everyday, but Mike's math teacher used to assign homework every 3 days, so Mike does less calculate exercises than Jane does, as a consequence, Jane always does better in the exam than Mike.


Apparently, for students, homework is a necessary way for handling what you learn from class, less homework will lead to worse grade, and more importantly, everyday you learn new knowledge and if no daily homework for you to enhance your memory, you will not be able to totally understand what you learn, and when you learn the knowledge much deeper, you will feel very difficult because your basic knowledge is not well built, these are all results of lacking daily homework.


Notwithstanding, like anything else, daily homework has a harmful effect on. Just like some people argue that daily homework take much time for students, then the students will lose opportunities to develop their own characteristic or do something they want to do. For me, I believe that teachers are better know that, they must understand the students have their own interesting and need time to do something, so we can see that under most situations the daily homework is not too much for a student to finish, so if a student is effective and concentrate in his homework, he will finish it quickly and enjoy spare time. But I still intend to suggest that teachers should assign the appropriate daily homework for students.


Generally, daily homework is necessary for students to deeply understand what they learn, but teachers should keep the daily homework in a proper extent.        Word Count: 438