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发表于 2010-10-2 22:02:01 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2010-10-2 22:04:47 |显示全部楼层
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress.

In our lives, there are kinds of stress around us. To relieve these stress, we have a lot of methods. Some one likes spending time alone while some one likes spending time with friends. As for me, I think staying with my friends is the best choice to relieve stress. So I disagree with the statement due to the following reasons.

To begin with, playing with friends, you can do anything which you want to do. Then stress could be distracted from your mind. To illustrate this point clearly, we can see that if you have a interview, you are so tense. On this time, you and your friends can play games to detract attention. Sometimes later, you may take easier than before.  

Moreover, staying with friends, you can say anything which makes you angry and anxious. You know, sometimes, you can become easy if you give mouth to the stress. For instance, a job worried you for a long time and gave you heavy stress. You can shout out your discontentment and laugh loudly. After that, you may feel tired, but your spirit could comfortable.

The last but not the least, communicating with friends, maybe can help you solve the problem. Such as, you are be worried by a case and can’t solve it for a while. You can let your friends read this case and get abundant of methods. The opinions from them must be more comprehensive than yourselves, then you can analyze them and choose the best. There is an old saying that god helps those who help themselves, which is true in most cases.

Admittedly, determining whether something should or should not be done could be weighed in many aspects. Different people have different answers due to their respective point of view.

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发表于 2010-10-5 17:32:50 |显示全部楼层
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.

Nowadays, there are lots of types of advertising around our lives, such as on TV, on newspaper, on the board in the street. Some of them are concerning food, maybe some advertising make bad effect for people’s eating habits. However, in my point of view, the most efficient approach does not concentrate only one aspect, like Advertising, but on several fields, such as people’s time of eating dinner during the work, someone like making a diet in their daily life.

To begin with, as far as I’m concerned, I think advertising is one of reasons that lead the unhealthy eating habits. Usually, the food on advertising is convenient, delicious but not good for health, then people see them on TV and want to taste them. Day by day, they find that this kind of food becomes an indispensable style of their life. Such as, KFC and Mcdonald's, a lot of children like eating them by seeing the advertising on TV.

Secondly, currently, numerous people work in the office who have a little time to eat their dinner. They have no time cooking the dinner, so they could just buy the fast food to eat. And the fast food almost have no nutrition, for instance, the fried chicken, hamburger, vegetables, and some food what must be heated up from icebox. All of them are not good for people’s health.

The last but not the least, in our modern lives, abundant of young men and women thinks that the thinner you are, the more beautiful you are. It is conceivable that they get into the habit of keeping unhealthy eating. For example, a woman eats some bread and drinks some milk in breakfast, afterward she just eats vegetables in lunch, then she eats nothing in the night. Those who attend a party and eat so much are so hungry in their daily lives. As you know, we say that ‘engorgement’.

To sum up, at least it seems to me that the most important cause to effect people’s unhealthy eating habits is a complex, including the advertising, dinner’s lasting time and even changing the conception of healthy is more important than thin.

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发表于 2010-10-7 20:52:26 |显示全部楼层
作文修改好啦~

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发表于 2010-10-9 21:45:27 |显示全部楼层
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not show their social or political views in the classroom.

Nowadays, there is no denying that the teacher makes the significant effect on students. So there is a constant debate about whether teacher should show their social or political views in the classroom. Someone may think that it is not good for the students. However, as for me, I support the opposite opinion that I think teacher should give their views of social or political to the students. And my reasons are as follows.! L! Q

First and foremost, I think students could learn about the social and political views from their teacher. Children should learn some things about the world outside their required courses. When their teachers talk some events about social problems, it is a good chance for students to think about it then develop their own point of view towards the society. That would bring home to students the right way of their future.

The further reason is that teachers show their views can make students realize our country’s system more clearly. In china, we have to take classes about political, but we don’t know how these policies work. Our teacher can let us comprehend more deeply besides the book through showing their views. That could make us come to time more effectively.
  
Of course, on the other hand, some parents worried about that teacher would bring the inappropriate opinion to their children. In my opinion, I think it is no necessary worrying about that, because by absorbing lots of opinion, they can analyze the things which their teacher told them are right or wrong. They could get into the habit of thinking independently and justifying things upon their own knowledge.

From the discussion above, it is enough to draw the conclusion that teachers should talk about their personal views of political and social. That would not merely do harm to students, but help them to learn about this world more clearly. Admittedly, different people have different answers due to their respective point of view.

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发表于 2010-10-12 19:14:27 |显示全部楼层
Do you agree or disagree, students will not use printed books anymore.

As we know, every student must read a large number of books each semester. All the books from college are printed books. For saving money, majority of students have to go library and spend whole day to read books, especially, before the coming examinations. Some of them are quite bright, because they buy e-books like ipad, and put all the documentations of the books that are required to read into the e-books. Therefore, gradually, lots of people suggest that make the e-books replace the printed books. However, as for me, I absolutely disagree with it, I still support the printed books is the important way for studying.

Firstly, the book of paper style is lasting for several centuries. Paper based book is a symbol for human civilization; a printed book could contain great painstaking effort of numerous forefathers. Hence, a printed book is not only a book with knowledge, but also a big wealth from our ancestor.

Moreover, it is not good for our health that staring a computer or an e-reader for long time. Nowadays, we have to do many things with the computer, such as, looking up the information, downloading the music, contacting with friends, etc. We must stare the computer for whole day if we even read books on it. It is a big problem for our eyesight which could lead to decline of our eyesight.

The last but not the least, we can write down whatever we want on the paper based book, and one important thing is that the note you wrote would never been disappeared. But a computer or an e-book is not secure if you push the wrong buttons, such as formatting button, then the contents that in it are deleted. So I think reading printed books is safer.

As far as I concerned, e-books will never instead of printed books in the future. Because printed book could bring worth to us, it does good to us, and it is so safer compare with other styles’ book. Admittedly, different people have different answer due to their respective point of view.

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