[u'r not alone小组]提纲作业 Argument32

Luise8891UID: 2906459

:) Argument32:Until recently, people in Hiparia did most of their shopping by driving to shopping malls. They are beginning, however, to do more of their shopping by ordering merchandise from mail-order catalogs and the Internet. These purchases are delivered to them by mail or by a delivery service. For many purchases, Hiparians no longer need to drive to and from shopping malls; there will therefore be a resulting reduction in the consumption of vehicle fuel in Hiparia.

Luise8891UID: 2906459

1)        The fact that people in Hiparia are beginning to do more shopping by odering mechandise from mail-order catalogs and the Internet does not lend strong support to the assumption that the number of people who do shopping by driving to shopping malls will be decreasing sharply. Maybe most of the people tend to do both to shop.
2)        Even if the number of people who prefer shopping by driving a car is decreasing sharply, no evidence has been given to prove that the new way of delivery is going to reduce the consumption of vehicle fuel.
3)        Even if it is true that more people would prefer shopping online and the delivery system can reduce the comsumption of fuel, a resulting reduction in the consumption of vehicle fuel in Hiparia is still open to doubt.  Since the new way of shopping leaves a lot of spare time for people in Hiparia, they probably drive their car for other recrtion, which may result in the same or even more consumption of vehicle fuel.

刘文奇UID: 2850560

argument32
Until recently, people in Hiparia did most of their shopping by driving to shopping malls. They are beginning, however, to do more of their shopping by ordering merchandise from mail-order catalogs and the Internet. These purchases are delivered to them by mail or by a delivery service. For many purchases, Hiparians no longer need to drive to and from shopping malls; there will therefore be a resulting reduction in the consumption of vehicle fuel in Hiparia.
直到最近，Hiparia的居民都开车到商场购物。然而，他们现在开始更多地通过邮寄订货目录和互联网定购商品。这些商品通过邮寄或快递服务递送到他们手中。对很多商品来说，Hiparia居民不再需要开车往来于商场；因而将会导致Hiparia汽车燃油消费量的下降。
errors:
1)        the reason why people began to do their shopping through Internet is just that it is a new way.
2)         we must figure out residents’ attitude toward to the new way of shopping.
3)        we need to figure out all things residents need can be bought through Internet.
4)        maybe the delivered can make consumption of vehicle increasing.
5)        maybe people spend more free time(due to the convenient way of shopping) travelling.