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WritingTask 2



Writeabout the following topic:



Somepeople prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

Discussboth these views and give your own opinion.



Asthe pace of social development accelerates, people are now living in a worldthat is far more unpredictable than in the past. Then a number of people beganto advocate timely changes to meet the unpredictable challenges while otherscling to their belief that carrying on whatever someone is doing forever is theonly good way; thus, a debate ensued. Despite certain degrees of risk, Icontend that changes are necessary, constructive and, therefore, advisable.

Opponentsof changes claim that any sudden shifts or changes can be undesirable sincethey always carry certain risk. However, they failed to recognize that refusingchanges itself can also be of great risk. Nowadays, we are collectively makingefforts, modernizing our industries to prevent global warming. If such positivechanges are discouraged by those opponents, we will be absolutely living in amuch riskier place than we deserve.

Opponentsalso maintain that some reckless changes might be costly. They point to lots ofexpensive projects that ended up without success. However, what they cannotexplain is that how we can live in modern houses instead of mountain caves asour ancestors did without making so-called costly endeavor. Thus, changes mayinevitably bring in some costs; however, it is, overall, constructive.

Moreover,in many occasions, changes are necessary rather than optional. A century ago,we could see carriages and wagons carrying people or goods from one place toanother. But, as new types of transportation, such as automobiles, trucks andtrains are introduced to our life, is it still possible for those people tomake their livings by carrying people with carriages on the roads where horsesand cows are prohibited? Changes can be inevitable for some people if they areto avoid unemployment.

Afterall due considerations, it is fully justified to reach the conclusion thatchanges are good and advisable. It is much more rational to adopt changes thanto remain obstinate to meet the challenges.






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话说这里的格式的确出问题。明明好好的，发出去就是一些单词两个黏在一起。大家将就着看吧。不一一改了。麻烦