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Some people think one’s working is more important than being with one’s family.



Nowadays individuals consider that working is more important than staying with family, because of the pressure from the development of the society. In order to prove their living condition, individuals need work hard which lead them have little time to care on their family. But in my opinion, family is more important than working, and family play a significant role in our life.

At the beginning, everyone rely on the family, so family must be the closet to people. When you are born, the family will stay with your whole life. They accompany with you to share your happiness and sadness, also you can tell every with your family who you can trust. On the other hand, work just a part of your life, so working is not memorable on us.

Moreover, when we meet troubles, families are always by our side and support us. We tell them what happened on our life and get an encouragement from them. Our broken heart may become better, that let us try again. We do not give up under family’s supporting. At the time, I think, working may not give us an encouragement. Sometimes, the dilemma is just from our working. Whatever families help us a lot in different situations.

In addition, family can let you feel very comfortable and happiness. For example, if you alone sit down on the sofa, you may think the time goes slowly, but when you get along with your family, you consider time flies. I believe that everyone want stay with family longer than to deal with work. Because communicating with your own family may take happiness to you.

All in all, working is more important than family, I consider that should not be right. Jobs just let you out of poverty but life provide support, happiness and comfort to us. We should spend more time with our families and enjoy the happy times.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time is better than a job with high salary but less vacation time.

Everyone must own a job, but there is a serious issue whether the high salary with less vacation time is better to the job with more vacation time. A group of people will consider obtaining a high salary job. However, the rest of people will suppose to choice a job with more vacation. If I have a chance to choice, I would be keen on the job with more vacation.
First of all, after some efficient work, people will become tired and have no energy to do continue works. When people spend a long time on working, they can not come up with good ideas and innovations. They need vacations to make them be well and experience new things in their vacation.
As long as I can consider, during the vacations, people have enough time to do what they interest. In the vacations, it is a good choice to enrich one’s experience and knowledge, for example, people have options to travelling or do reading in their favorite places. Having vacations after few days work, people will relax their mind and not consider anything, so people can make their body in a good condition.
The most important aspect is that vacations provide much time to meet our friends and family. People can communicate with their trusted people and even have funny things with them. If people are too busy, they may be apart from their intimate person. When I was a child, I have no communication with my father because my father is always busy. And until now, the relationship between my father and me is not very close. In my perspective, people need more time to communicate with their friends and family.
Due to these reasons, vacations are more important than make money. If I have a chance to choice what job I like, I would like to a job with vacations.

莫莫吟UID: 2951537

Everyone must own a job, but there is a serious issue whether the high salary with less vacation time is better to （than）the job with more vacation time. A group of people will consider obtaining a high salary job（a high salary job be better）. However, the rest of people will suppose to choice(choose,choice是名词) a job with more vacation. If I have a chance to choice（choose）, I would（用will是不是比较好） be keen on the job with more vacation.4 _- P) E, {1 m& t
First of all, after some efficient work, people will become tired and have no energy to do continue works. When people spend a long time on working, they can not come up with good ideas and innovations. They need vacations to make them be well（这个说法怪怪的，你可以说to relax themselves） and experience new things in their vacation(前面已经有need vocation 这个可以去掉). 3 D0 N- X0 q7 R% Y8 g
As long as I can consider（有这个说法吗？你想说的是不是as far as I am concerned）, during the vacations, people have enough time to do what they interest（are interested in）. In the vacations, it is a good choice to enrich one’s experience and knowledge, for example, people have options to travelling or do(去掉) reading in their favorite places. Having vacations after few days work, people will relax their mind and not consider anything, so people can make their body in a good condition.
* E2 |( s3 y4 E6 ]The most important aspect is that vacations provide（us） much time to meet our friends and family（families 这里指家庭成员）. People can communicate with their trusted people and even have funny things （do fanny things 或have fanny）with them. If people are too busy, they may be apart from their intimate person. When I was a child, I have no communication with my father because my father is always busy. And until now, the relationship between my father and me is not very close. In my perspective, people need more time to communicate with their friends and family.(families)
" k8 F2 H' |" v# h0 [Due to these reasons, vacations are more important than make money(个人认为直接用salary 比较好). If I have a chance to choice what（choose the） job I like, I would like to （choose不能少）a job with vacations.

莫莫吟UID: 2951537

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