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caichongbaobaoUID: 136935

92 "In any academic area or professional field, it is just as important to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding as it is to acquire new facts and information."


I fundamentally agree with this agreement, for since human beings stepped into civilization recognizing what are not know or understood is the subject under later study and the propel that encourage people to do research. That is, knowing the limits of our knowledge is as important as, if not more important than, gaining new information and discoveries.(57)

It is obvious that acquiring new facts and information is one prerequisite of society’s development. The newly attained knowledge can be used for inventions that make people’s lives more convenient. With the photoelectricity theory, televisions are invented, which introduce the outside world to people when they stay home. Another example is steam engine, which provided the productivity of transportation for industry revolution, and made more products for people. Moreover, acquiring facts lead to a much healthier life. Since we get information from the study of chemistry and biology. More is known about life, thus more people begin to take care of their diet and take more exercises. Last but not least, the latest information is the base of future research. After scientists knew the model of DNA, greater progress in biology happened. And what we acquire today may be the principles of tomorrow’s instruments. (144)

It is also essential to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding for acquiring new facts. First, those unknown or beyond our understanding always become the subject we study, thus we acquire new facts and knowledge. When people find some problems cannot be resolved in the field of positive figures, negative figures come about. When Fleming was puzzled by the death of the germs, penicillin, a biotic, was studied. We spread what we know and at the same time do research on what we do not. Second, this awareness always plays the role as a stimulation, from which the curiosity and interests arouse. When people find things hard to understand, they will establish theories and test them or they collect more similar things to get common rules. All these actions are propelled by the curiosity and enthusiasm. For example, not knowing which material is proper for the bulb, Edison, the famous inventor, tried hundreds of stuff and experienced failure after failure. What encouraged him to go on is the interest from knowing the limits of his knowledge. Third, the recognition provides objective evaluation of what we get. Neglecting those limits, we may think we are so great that nothing is beyond our knowledge. But in fact, this view is wrong and will be the obstacle to go forward.(219)

However, knowing the limits of our information does not mean fear or feel human race inferior. Mrs. Curie, a physicist winning Nobel Price twice, once said“ Nothing in life is to be feared. It is only to be understood. ” The correct attitude to awareness of our limits is to work hard to enlarge our knowledge. Not being depressed. (59)

To sum up, people should keep aware there are still many things beyond our ability to understand, when they try to acquire new information. Do not fear innocence, but scorn it and do our best to get rid of it.(521)

happyman2000UID: 136936

这只菜虫，写得这么多，想把别人累死啊！

00foxUID: 112731

我觉得可以在最后提一下 ”to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding 和 to acquire new facts and information“ 实际上是同一个过程的不同阶段。

同时，我觉得应该对第三段作一些修改，继续使用第二段提出的例子，并指出那些新事物，新理论都是在认识到以前的不足的基础上才有了发展的可能。这样可使第二，三段联系得更紧密一点。  这也印证了你在第一段提出的 ”since human beings stepped into civilization recognizing what are not know or understood is the subject under later study and the propel that encourage people to do research. “

However（这里好像用Moreover更好）, knowing the limits of our information does not mean fear or feel human race inferior. Mrs. Curie, a physicist winning Nobel Price twice, once said“ Nothing in life is to be feared. It is only to be understood. ” The correct attitude to awareness of our limits is to work hard to enlarge our knowledge. Not being depressed.
这一段的引用很好，我学了，谢谢！

caichongbaobaoUID: 136935

谢谢2位，如fox说的我本来也像写gaining new information is the destination of recognizing the limits
但是写道后来就忘了
我这两天打算改改自己以前写的文章：）
可能会有大的收获

caichongbaobaoUID: 136935

不知怎么搞得，把题目贴错了。太粗心了：（

caichongbaobaoUID: 136935

92"In any academic area or professional field, it is just as important to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding as it is to acquire new facts and information."

I fundamentally agree with this agreement, for since human beings stepped into civilization recognizing what are not known[/COLOR] or understood is the subject under later study and the propel that encourage people to do research. That is, knowing the limits of our knowledge is as important as, if not more important than, gaining new information and discoveries.(57)

It is obvious that acquiring new facts and information is one prerequisite of society’s development. The newly attained knowledge can be used for inventions that make people’s lives more convenient. With the photoelectricity theory, televisions are invented, which introduce the outside world to people when they stay home. Another example is steam engine, which provided the productivity of transportation for industry revolution, and made more products for people. It is not radical to say all of our modern instruments are attributed to the newly gained knowledge.[/COLOR] Moreover, acquiring facts leads to a much healthier life. Since we get information from the study of chemistry and biology. More is known about life, thus more people begin to take care of their diet and take more exercises, according to new facts scientists give out.[/COLOR] Last but not least, the latest information is the base of future research. After scientists knew the model of DNA, greater progress in biology happened. And (From which we conclude)[/COLOR] what we acquire today may be the principles of tomorrow’s instruments.(改为progress)[/COLOR] (144)

It is also essential to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding for acquiring new facts. First, those unknown or beyond our understanding always become the subject we study, thus we acquire new facts and knowledge. When people find some problems cannot be resolved in the field of positive figures, negative figures come about. When Fleming was puzzled by the death of the germs, penicillin, a biotic, was studied. (例子改用第二段的 Photoelectricity was caught a sight of by Einstein under the circumstance that people could not understand the light have the characters of both particle and wave. And effective steam engine came out when Watt found the inefficiency of the old. ) [/COLOR]We spread what we know and at the same time do research on what we do not. Second, this awareness always plays the role as a stimulation, from which the curiosity and interests arouse. When people find things hard to understand, they will establish theories and test them or they collect more similar things to get common rules. All these actions are propelled by the curiosity and enthusiasm. For example, not knowing which material is proper for the bulb, Edison, the famous inventor, tried hundreds of stuff and experienced failure after failure. What encouraged him to go on is the interest from knowing the limits of his knowledge. Third, the recognition provides objective evaluation of what we get. Neglecting those limits, we may think we are so great that nothing is beyond our knowledge. But in fact, this view is wrong and will be the obstacle to go forward.(219)

However, knowing the limits of our information does not mean fear or feel human race inferior. Mrs. Curie, a physicist winning Nobel Price twice, once said“ Nothing in life is to be feared. It is only to be understood. ” The correct attitude to awareness of our limits is to work hard to enlarge our knowledge. Not being depressed. (59)

To sum up, awareness of our limits is the prelude of study of new subjects, and its destination is acquiring new facts and information and a broader horizon of information. [/COLOR]People should keep aware there are still many things beyond our ability to understand, when they try to acquire new knowledge, since both serve the progress of society.[/COLOR] And do not fear innocence, but scorn it and do our best to get rid of it.(638)
我自己根据楼上的意见改了改，大家提提意见吧，看看是不是好些了

zhamiaUID: 97673

1.第二段Moreover, acquiring facts leads to a much healthier life. Since we get information from the study of chemistry and biology. More is known about life, thus more people begin to take care of their diet and take more exercises, according to new facts scientists give out. 感觉用in addition比较好，这部分和前一部分好像没什么递进的意思
2.第三段Third, the recognition provides objective evaluation of what we get. Neglecting those limits, we may think we are so great that nothing is beyond our knowledge. But in fact, this view is wrong and will be the obstacle to go forward写的太仓促及武断了
3.按思想和语言两方面来说，思想经修改后很全面了，语言上感觉很多地方还值得推敲，Chinese English比较严重，很多话和我的文章很像（本人此问题也很严重，呵呵）。第四段最流畅
4.优点是能举出很多例子，我感觉对我们来说，支持的方法最好就是举例子，说道理的话总感觉理屈词穷，很多抽象的词都用不好。
5.如评价不当，请见谅。另，问一句，你写这篇作文用多长时间，我写作文太慢

caichongbaobaoUID: 136935

这一篇写了3天：）因为刚开始写就被别的事情打断了，就一直拖，最近才写完

ken0405UID: 124994

everything is not perfect since its origin. it makes no different in human knowledge
in middle ages, earth is plane
earth is global
erath is the centre of universe and sun is revolving around the earth
earth is running around the sun
when and how the universe generates? stephen hawking

human civilization is a process of unceasing exploring of the world

caichongbaobaoUID: 136935

楼上说得好深奥