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[活动] 写作小组交作业——tuxinyi的作文贴 [复制链接]

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发表于 2010-11-26 14:32:40 |只看该作者
1125独立

1125 for tuxinyi.doc

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发表于 2010-11-26 17:32:34 |只看该作者
昨天的综合作业呢?

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发表于 2010-11-26 18:58:41 |只看该作者
。。。同LS问。

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发表于 2010-11-26 21:50:12 |只看该作者
tpo2
tpo1综合在第一页的一楼

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发表于 2010-11-26 21:54:27 |只看该作者
1125综合
TPO1
In the lecture, professor makes several points about the pros and cons existed in the policy of four-day employment. The professor makes clear statement by saying four-day employment is very costly for the companies. It is definitely challenging the point given in the reading passage.


First of all, the speaker thinks that the company which will provide employment with a four- day work week would have to spend more money by adding new workers and to buy the insurance for them. In contrast, the reading passage believes that workers who woke 80 percent will be paid 80 percent and make an economical balance.
So, the lecture totally disagrees with the view made in the reading.

  Second, the speaker discusses the situation that no new workers will be hired, so the workers who choose to work four day have to work extra hours. If employees work in this way, they can not improve the working efficient and they would by unpleasant at the same time. Contradicting what is stated in the reading passage that shortens workweek will make them more rested and alert.

  Finally, the speakers raises the issue that people who work four day a week will probably get fired when economy turn down. This point disagrees that workers can
do better at work and have a good time after work demonstrated in the reading.

  So, the contents in the reading passage are totally jeopardized by the speaker and the speaker has totally different ideas on the topics made in the reading.

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发表于 2010-11-27 14:42:19 |只看该作者
改好了噢~

tpo1综合已改.doc

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发表于 2010-11-27 22:13:45 |只看该作者
同学,26号TPO2的综合在哪?看到PM我,我帮你改啊

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发表于 2010-11-27 22:17:58 |只看该作者
43# WoYaoChiJiTui
在第四页吧、
上面写着tpo2不过日期错了写成1125了
往上找一下就有了
ibt
实现梦想 走向远方
坚持!坚持!

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发表于 2010-11-28 15:15:08 |只看该作者
不好意思,之前没找到,改好了,修改意见是引用的哈

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发表于 2010-11-29 13:10:14 |只看该作者
40# tuxinyi
已经修改好了。

As technonlogy developed in the tweteenith century.doc

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