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Nowadays, there are lots of kinds of publication, such as newspaper and magazines. It is a good way to learn more information about foreign countries from all those publication. Publications become one of important and economical production in our daily life. However, the publication isn’t a best way for us to get the information which is real. In my opinion, under the technology high speed developing, we not only can get information from the publication, but also we can search from the wed side, or take a travel.
Absolutely, the newspapers and magazines support us a widespread space to know outside world. As a reporter, new staff can get more attention from his or her customer who likes to read news, especially the native people. Because of human psychology, the native people are preferred to learn more foreign people life than the native staff. Not only we are curiously, but also someone who has not enough money or chance can learn some other countries without travelling. That’s the reason why the travel magazines become popular as quickly as possible.
However, newspapers and magazines cannot totally truth. Nowadays, a lot people can use the internet to accept more information in time; at the end, the news about the simple details will be boring than in the past. For more benefit from the customers, all the publication choose to cover some truth of the news, so there’s no guarantee that the news paper or the magazine will exhibit a hundred percent  true new. At some situation, the political use the publication to lead their people under their plan and intention. Seriously, the publication will lose it authenticity.
Otherwise, other different kinds of publication, such as environment books, guide books, or some countries explaining books, can let us learn more about foreign. Although some are not interested by every reader, they dependents on the real true faction to edition the all story about a foreign country. Some of them filled with quantious of beautiful pictures which comes the foreign country’s view. If possible, we can borrow all those books from the library without payment, and it is a convenience way for us to learn a foreign country.
In sum, we cannot just choose simple publication or transmissions to learn something which we did know ever before. To learn a foreign country in a widespread space is the best way for us.

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However, newspapers and magazines cannot 后面是truth名词totally truth. Nowadays, a lot people can use the internet to acceptacquire或者obtain more information in time; at the end换eventually 或consequently, the news about the simple details will be boring than前面没有比较级 in the past. For more benefit from the customers, all the publication choose to cover some truth of the news, 前面一句是侧重some truth ，没有突出它不真实so there’s no guarantee that the news paper or the magazine will exhibit a hundred percent  true new. At some situation是不是能换个说法, the political use the publication to lead their people lead sb under sth 建议换个说法under their plan and intention. Seriously, the publication will lose itits authenticity.
（这段是反驳报杂志）
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of beautiful pictures which comestaken the foreign country’s view. If possible, we can borrow all those books from the去掉the library without payment, and it is a convenience way for us to learn a foreign country.
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In sum, we cannot just choose simple publications or transmissions这个词是想表达？ to learn something which we did know ever before. To learn a foreign country in a widespread space空间 is the best way for us.

总体来说意思表达出来了，第二段支持的稍显多了点。

个人水平确实有限，只能这么多了，互相帮助，互相学习，谢谢。

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不好意思，我没有权限黏贴附件，从word里黏贴进去就乱了。

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