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11.12 "daily"  Some people think children should study and play, other people think children should help with household chores.

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11.17Younger school children (age five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math language, science and history.
  
The article suggests that kids with five to ten should have more lessons about arts than science lessons. From my perspective, I agree with it. Kids really need to get in touch with arts during their learning time.There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.
On the one hand, music and art are known as that they can create an excellent person. Many great artists are not only outstanding in the area of art but also skillful in other areas. Famous Da Vinci leaved his many fantanstic paintings that are valueable and precious. The anotaher profession of Da Vinci is a doctor, which is not mentioned by most of people,he is famous doctor at that period. As a doctor he made a great contribution to the modern Anatomy. And many other artists have their other achievements. Why these artist have such excellent achievements? The same characteristics among them is the answer that is art learning experience. During the period of learning art, creativity can be borned. So when kids know how to resolve a problem, from then on they can do better in learning basic science lessons.
The other hand is that kids will learn more from these arts lesson. Kids at five to ten years old, they usually cannot sit on the chair for a long time. Therefore, how many materials do they learn from class? For instances, a six-years-old kid sit in a America history class for half an hour, he cannot remember what the teacher talk about at first. However, arts lessons are different from these science lessons. Teacher paints animals on a board that attracts kids' attention span, and vivid music lessons can let most of kids enjoy singing and dancing. From this point of view, arts lessons indeed help kids learning more than other sciences lesson.
In conclusion, kids should be attended in lessons which is based on their interests and requirements. People can arrange science lessons during a semester, however they should be less times than arts lessons.

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11.22 独立Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Playing sports teaches people more lessons about the life.4 P-

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11.23  独立 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the telephone has greater effects on people than television

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11.24 综合 TPO18